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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: maanluvsgeet

someone is online...r we getting a update ?


working on it.., will update soon😊😊
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PART: 9


Recap: Nandini decides to go to pandit jis music institute.

Flashback continues...

Pandit jis music institute was located on the beachside in mumbai. It was the most beautiful place nandini has ever seen. His house was also located beside institute . Nandini used to stay in their house only. His wife swathi was completely opposite to pandit ji. She was also singer n classical dancer. n teaches in the institute. Music means discipline to Pandit ji n Music means love to swathi. She was a very emotional person n she bonded very well with nandini. Even their 3yr old daughter got used to nandini very well. When nandini came to the institute pandit ji took a promise from her that she would try her best to clear her mind n concentrate on music. Classical music was never new to nandini but its getting difficult for her to concentrate on music staying away from manik. She used to cry silently at night remembering him. One day swathi saw her crying sitting at beach side seeing the stars. She came to her n asked the reason. Nandini hesitated for a while. Seeing her hesitation swathi told her about her story." You know you wont believe if I say that ours is a love marriage. We met eachother in a music festival. Its a love at first sight for both of us. We fell in love easily but we struggled a lot to stay in love n to be together. Our families were against our relationship. They tried to seperate us by blackmailing emotionally. We even lost hope n accepted defeat. But once we got seperated we understood that we cant live without each other. We came out of the house n got married n started this institute n now we are happy n even our families are slowly accepting us. My husband told me that you also have some love issues. So if you feel ok you can share it with me" Nandini eyes filled with tears n she stared at stars n said " He told me that im his star n I should always protect him But I broke his trust n I left him when he is heart broken n need me the most. He must be very angry with me." Remembering all their moments nandini started crying. Wiping her tears swathi told her " Dont worry. some things you cant understand when you are together but you will only understand when you loose what you have. everything will be ok. Believe me. If your love is pure it will only bring you together." Nandini felt relieved talking to swathi that day.


Slowly nandini became a part of pandit jis family. Swathi n nandini became close like sisters. Nandini used to share with her stories about her monster. Though she cannot be with him but she was sure that one day he will forgive her n that would be their first valentine's day. She used to practice music with dedication. Her music defined both pandit jis discipline and swathis love. She made her longing for manik as her encouragement for music. Both pandit ji n swathi were happy with nandini's improvement. In the mean time pandit ji also tried to get another music company to accept fab5 music album. But knowing maniks anger no one came forward. Knowing all this nandini got really worried for fab5.

After few days Mr Khurana came to visit pandit ji regarding some music event. While going from there he got a call from soha's doctor. When he was talking on phone nandini happened to pass by n accidentally overheard khuranas conversation. Without wasting another minute with the help of pandit ji she followed Mr Khurana to the place where they kept soha n confronted him. Mr Khurana was shocked to see nandini over there n started being rude to her. But pandit ji stopped him n warned him that if he said another word to nandini he would tell about soha to everyone in the music industry. With that Mr Khurana backed a bit. Then nandini confronted Khurana saying " How could you even tell that your daughter died when she was very much alive. You dont deserve to be a father. Your reputation is beyond Your daughters life..?? I thought soha was a psycho but you made your daughter into one. I dont believe it. n why did you involve manik into all this n why did you file a wrong case on him..?? just because he accidentally pushed soha into fire you filed a wrong case on him..?? You didnt even think once that you are ruining the future of 5 talented musicians..?? Who gave you that right..??" Mr Khurana who was already feeling guilty broke infront of nandini hearing her words." I know I made a mistake by not taking care of soha' condition. I'm a bad father. I always thought giving her what she wants would make her happy. but I didnt know that im turning her into a psycho. n regarding manik i didnt do it on purpose. Its nyonika who instructed me to do that n manik didnt throw soha into fire she accidentally slipped and fell into fire. Nyonika manipulated the cctv footage to confuse you.". Nandini couldnt believe what she just heard. She was manipulated by nyonika into doubting manik n to just get her out of his sons life she herself sent her son to jail. She cannot believe that such mothers also exist in the world.

Nandini decided to go n tell to manik about nyonika but pandit ji stopped her sayin that its not safe for her to go to space now. If nyonika can send her own son to jail to send nandini out of his life she can do anything. He suggested her to gain name before she again go to space so that she can face nyonika with pride. But nandini wants manik to know the fact of soha being alive. To that pandit ji ensured her that he will definitely know looking at Mr Khurana . then Mr Khuran went to fab5 n told them truth n even apologised about nandini n offered them album. When fab5 agreed to do the album Mr Khurana came to nandini n pandit ji n informed them the good news. Nandini was extremely happy for fab5. At last she made everything right n now she can happily go back to manik. Then Mr Khuran informed them about National Classical music summit n asked nandini to perform in it.


At first Nandini hesitated to perform in summit but with pandit ji and swathis encouragement she agreed. But she missed manik n her family very much. while talking to swathi she opened her heart n said" its the biggest day of my life. How happy would it be if manik n my family would be present there." Swathi told the same to pandit ji n they both invited her family n decided to get manik to the program without getting him know about nandini. They didnt even told nandini about it as she doesnt want to meet manik till he gets the album n clears his name. Thats when pandit ji went n invited fab5 to the program. During the program swathi couldnt control herself n went n sat beside manik to see his expression when nandini was performing. But when she saw him running towards nandini she stopped him knowing that nandini wasnt ready to meet him yet.


This was all being told to manik by swathi tiil now.. Manik sat silently listening to swathi. He was happy that nandini didnt leave him n still believes in him and their love. But he was also sad that nandini has to go through all the pain because of his anger. If only he could have controlled his anger they both wouldnt be away from each other all these days. For that swathi assured him saying. " When ever true love faces a challenge it gets strong. Though you feel defeated for a minute but at the end love only wins. You believe nandini as your star right. so just remember even you cant see the stars because of clouds that doesnt means they have disappeared they will always be there in the sky n protect even if you cant see them with your eyes. So from now onwards fight your problems together. Dont allow your anger to overpower your love." Manik gave an assuring smile to swathi. Their conversation was interrupted by pandit ji. He came to them and told to manik." So manik I told you na that you would regret if you miss this program." Manik didnt know what to speak he just said " Thank you for everything for what you did to nandini. For showing her the right path when she wavered because of me." Pandit ji gave a smile n said " Im a teacher. Its my duty to bring my students into right path. There is no need to say thank me. atleast for nandini. But if you are saying thanks for helping you to know the truth about soha then I ll accept it. n dont forget that all this wont matter in tomorrow's audition n I m very difficult to please. So be fully prepared." Manik just smiled n said. " I assure you that you wont be disappointed." Saying this manik left from there towards the auditorium to get one more glimpse of nandini from far before going to his practice with fab5. Seeing him go Pandit ji n swathi said misision accomplished hugging each other.

So guys thats it for now. will update the last and final part soon.

Thank you.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow super cute plzzz get man an back together sooon
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Posted: 10 years ago
mind blowing update...loved it...waiting for the manan scenes...pls continue soon...take care...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
mast update yar😃...waitng for manan..😛...
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow so happy
i am so glad now finally they can be together
please do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow awsm update
loved it
very nicely written
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely 😊 Pleasure to read such a sane story after all the craziness of the show
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing... loved it
...writings only give some relief
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thank you for wonderful writing...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow awesome yaar...no words to express👏

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