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Posted: 10 years ago
I read all the 9 parts in one go...its awesome...👏. please continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fabulous Update..
Thank god Manik got to know everything..
Hope soon MaNan will be back together..
Continue Soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
waoo amazinggg once again beautifully written
update soon ,,love this manik alot😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
So guys im up with last n final part.

Part: 10


Recap: Swathi telling manik about nandini.


After knowing everything nandini has done for him n fab5 from swathi Manik went to backstage again n saw Nandini talking happily with her family. He resisted with great difficulty to go and hug her. Now he want everything in the way she wanted. He decided that once he get the album he would find her and propose her. This time he would never get anyone between them. He was seeing her with so much love in his eyes. Nandini felt that manik was around her. She looked at his direction but he hided behind a pillar. Seeing her for the last time he went from there messaging fab5 to come to his house for practice.


Fab5 were not expecting practice that day as they thought manik would be with nandini. As soon as they reached his house they bombarded him with questions about Nandini. Manik told them the entire story. This time alya was the first one to speak." No one can love you as much as nandini did. Im really happy for you manik." Everyone was surprised with alya's statement. Cabir was happy that everyone knew about nandini's importance in manik's life. They practiced till late night n everyone slept there itself.


. Nandini came back to her chacha n chachi's house.That night was the longest night for both Manik and Nandini. Both of them were missing each other badly. Their longing to see each other, to talk to each other, to feel each other overpowered their senses. They wanted to fast forward the time. As if nature has felt their feeling it started to rain outside trying to calm their feelings. But it did reverse effect. They both felt the cool air brush them making them remember each others touch. Remembering their moments together they both closed their eyes expecting some sleep to just let the time pass by.


Next day was the big day for Manik not because of the album but because he can meet nandini after so many days. Its the day when he can claim nandini as his. He was determined to do that at any cost. Along with Fab5 He reached the college 2 hours before the audition time. They practised for a while and set everything ready for the performance. Their audition was an open event. Slowly students started to fill the auditorium. Pandit ji n Mr Khurana also came on time. This time Nyonika also came to see Fab5's performance. Manik searched for Nandini in the audience but couldnt find her. But he knew that she would be there somewhere hiding. He could feel her presence but he knew that she wouldnt come before him that easily. He just smiled thinking that he would meet her that day finally. Nandini was outside the auditorium waiting for the performance to start so that she can go in. Just 10 mins left for the performance to start. Manik's beeped showing a message from an unknown number saying "All the best." Manik understood that its from his lucky charm n just gave a smile looking at the audience which was obviously seen by his nandu.

Fab 5 performed for Mitra song from Band baaja baarat. Manik prepared this song while thinking about Nandini when she was not there in his life. Their performance ended with audience n judges applause. Fab5 n Nandini were very happy. Manik knew that even if he cant see nandini she must be very happy. He came to the mike n said " Today I have a very important thing to say. I made a biggest mistake of my life. I made the most important person of my life go away from me because of my anger. I know that you are here nandini. i'm miserable without you all these so please come back to me. I promise that no one can come between us(looking at fuming nyonika). Lets fight our problems together. This song is for you." He sang Banjara song from ek villain. { Im not good at song selection. so please imagine your fav songs } Nandini couldnt control her ears. She was beyond happy. Manik finished his song n ran outside the audit leaving behind cheering fab 5 n audience. Fab5 shouted "Go get her Manik". Nandini also ran outside. They both knew where to find each other.

They both reached the stairs behind music wing at the same time. They couldnt believe that they were seeing each other after so many days. They both stayed like that seeing each other . Manik just leaned on the pillar beside him n asked her with his eyes why did she leave him..?? Nandini pulled her ears saying sorry with tears in her eyes. She ran to him n hugged him tight. Manik also hugged her. They both stayed like that for a long time. Neither of them wanted to leave each other. After a long time Nandini broke the hug n said " Im sorry Manik that I hurt you. but I cant live without you. Please forgive me." Manik put his finger on nandini's lip n said " I forgave you long time back Nandini. n I cant even breath without you. You know how much I missed you when you are not here.? I felt like I was dying. Please what ever may be the reason dont you ever go away from me. Promise me that you will never ever go away from me. n promise me that what ever may be the matter even if I get upset or angry on hearing it. dont hide anything from me. n I promise that I will also not hide things from you n I ll think before I act. I dont want any issue to become a wall between us.." Nandini was out of words. She said. " I missed you too Manik. I promise that I ll not hide anything from you. n I promise you that I ll never go away from you because I cant survive without you. because I LOVE YOU Manik." Manik couldnt believe his ears. He thought he would propose her. But hearing her say I Love you took him to seventh heaven. He didnt waste time. He kissed her passionately. Nandini responded him with same intensity. They wanted to erase all the loneliness they felt for all these days with that kiss. When they were breathless they broke the kiss n hugged each other . They sat on the stairs hugging each other feeling each others presence. After some time Manik said. " Nandini you are the best thing happened to me in my life. Without you nothing in my life made sense. I LOVE YOU MY STAR. I love you for what I have become because of you" Saying this he made her wear the tie bracelet. Nandini saw the bracelet and felt very happy. They had an eye lock and when manik was about to kiss her again she stopped him n reminded him that they were in college. For that Manik made a puppy face. Nandini couldnt resist n gave a peck on his cheek n said " Lets go on a date today in the evening. I have a lot of things to say." Manik couldnt believe what he just heard. He hugged her tightly. After staying like that for sometime they went to meet their friends.

Thats the start of beautiful journey of their new found relationship.

Hope you guys like this FF. Thanks for all your supporting comments. Wish you all that best.

Thank you,

Harika


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Posted: 10 years ago
harika...

thanks a lot dear for writing such a beautiful love story...from part 1 to 10...wow what an amazing journey...u penned it so perfectly...u r an awsome writer...each and every emotions of characters ...wow...mind blowing...pls try to write more stories like this...would love to read more from u...once again thanks a lot for this manan story...take care and all the best wishes for ur future life...may god bless u...

with lots of love & prayers
aavani
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Posted: 10 years ago
WOW! I just passed through this page and read this ...
This was so good that I'm thinking that there is a lot to read ...
This was totally amazing ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow beautiful update
loved it
very nicely written
u have done a fab job writing this story
it was fabulous


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aavani

harika...

thanks a lot dear for writing such a beautiful love story...from part 1 to 10...wow what an amazing journey...u penned it so perfectly...u r an awsome writer...each and every emotions of characters ...wow...mind blowing...pls try to write more stories like this...would love to read more from u...once again thanks a lot for this manan story...take care and all the best wishes for ur future life...may god bless u...

with lots of love & prayers
aavani


Thank you so much for ur support. 😊😊😊
Edited by chinni557 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: heart_nishkala

WOW! I just passed through this page and read this ...

This was so good that I'm thinking that there is a lot to read ...
This was totally amazing ...


Thank you😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Humzy

wow beautiful update

loved it
very nicely written
u have done a fab job writing this story
it was fabulous



Thank you😊😊

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