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Posted: 10 years ago
U write so well...i hve been reading ur story for long nd nw finally managed to complete it u r an amzing writer ,,,i loved how u potrayed nandu and cabirs bonding...manik and navya bond is also something which is new(not much visible in the show) hattss off to u 👏👏Keep writing
GET WELL SOON😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
interesting ...love the way MANAN are supporting each other even in thought, CAVYA was cute...
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Posted: 10 years ago
I hope ur fyn nw:-)...i want u to continue both ur ffs wen possible...plz dont end these...we'll wait...tc:-)
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So, lovelies... here I m back with a bang... Apologies for being late or should I say super late but I was so busy last few days... Hospitals and religious functions hope you guys understand... But don't worry I will compensate for my delay..

This day would be full of surprises for you... and a gift to the one who requested me something way back... M sorry dear I was not able to make it for u but today I will for sure...

Yayy!! N congrats to me... I'm on my 50th part... oh I so love this story and I can't stop it even if I get few comments it's close to my heart... now coming back to the story... lets brush up ur mind and make a link giving u chotusa recap...

Recap: star family is caught by CaVya...

CaVya's romantic date...

Talking about their marriage...

Part 50:

At Cabir's home,

Alya: but Manik even Mukti got a point..

Cabir: sab point ko maro goli... guys it's my decision I want to marry and even if Navya doesn't marry society is gonna say something so why don't we get marry and then think about society or best idea don't give a damn to society... it's my bloody life and I want to make her my wife.. yar main na apne aap se impress ho gaya hun, aisi halat main bhi I manage to make a rhym... wow Cabir you are the best...

Manik: seriously Cabir, sometimes na you are a headache...

Navya: Guys tum log pata bhi hai tum log kya bol re ho? And Cabir tumhe humpe daya khake humse shadi karni koi zarurat nahi hai thik hai...

Cabir: Navya listen, I know it is difficult but we have to get married... listen..

Cabir takes her hand in his... when life is giving a chance to torture you entire life how can I miss that?

Navya gives him a hit..

Cabir says further, Navya tum convince hogayi ya aur bolu? Hogayi ho toh batao my feet's are paining..

Everyone chuckled on his statement...

Cabir: Guys on a serious note, Navya things change with time and may be in our case it will take much longer time but it will change trust me... and main tumpe koi daya nai khara... I really want to marry you and I mean it...

Navya was overwhelmed and agrees for marriage...

Manik: wow Cabir tu kabhi kabhi akal ki bat kar leta hai

Cabir: saale main humesha akal ki bat karta hun...

Mukti: joker muh band kar bohat kaam hai thik hai...

Nandini: yes guys Mukti is definitely right.. bht kaam hai.. marriage is a tough task...

Manik slides his arm on her waist and tightens the grip... and whispers huskily "sach me,Miss Murthy?"

Nandini was stunned and all she could say was yes...

Cabir: tum dono ko romance khatam ho gaya ho to lemme tell you meri shadi hai tum dono ki nahi..

Mukti: Cabir tujhe lagta hai yeh log sunege?

Dhruv: buddy tub hi shadi karle

Manik: shadi? What shadi? I mean shadi kya han what han..?

Everyone burst in huge laughter but there was someone who was serious and that was Navya... O shocked!! Don't be ... yes Navya...

Navya: Guys, shadi bht badi responsibility hai... hum sab bht chote hai iske liye... agar main galti na karti toh shayad aaj Cabir ko suffer na karna padta... Manik and Nandini tum dono bht samjhdar ho so take decision wisely and Manik agar tumne Nandini ka dil dukhaya na to mujhse bura koi nai hoga... aaj tum is shadi ke liye serious nahi ho infact tum joke main le rahe ho and tum shadi se chidte ho par shadi ek ladki ke liye bht mayne rakti hai... I always planned my marriage with harshad I even said this to him but he ditched me but you I know your love is true but your belief in marriages is broken... but I want to tell you something Manik...

She knelt in front of Manik who was sitting on a chair... she held his hand and directed him to look at his fingers... can you see this Manik...

Manik gave a confused look, first on her gestures and secondly on what she was saying... everyone was looking to her... Manik gave her a what look...

Navya: all the fingers in your hands are not same... one is small other is bid similarly, all the person in our life are not same... some are cruel like your maa and some are compassionate, kind, merciful like Nandini, friendly like fab 5... if the cruel gave u pain the kind n friendly one will give you happiness n love...if she ruined ur life Nandini will make your life... if she I darkness Nandini is light... she will burn herself to give u life and you know that... have faith in her and she will love you forever and your love story would be cherished cause ur story is the one to be written in history...

Manik was so touched by all that she said coz it was indeed tru... he then promised Navya that when they would be mature enough to marry he promise he will marry Nandini... a promise Nandini was dying for... she had tears in her eyes and she went into his arms thanking him for the statement he made...

Cabir: oh god... so emotional talks... lets plan the marriage..

Mukti: badi jaldi hai tujhe?

Manik: Mukti, jaldi toh hogi nanavya khana itna acha banati hai toh u know humare bhukkhad Cabir ki life ban jayegi so.. haina Cabir?

Cabir: tum hi mera pakka dost hai kitna janta hai tu mujhe...

Everyone starts talking for marriage when Nandini says..

Nandini: guys umm.. wo Cabir can we like?

Cabir: Nandini why are you hesitating so much... jo hai khul ke bolo...

Nandini: can we plan your marriage at Mangalore?

Cabir: you have asked something for the first time how can I say no... but can I ask y?

Nandini: Cabir, hum sab ek family hai and Am's ne bhi hume aisehi accept kia hai toh Am's chahti thi humari family ki sabse pehli shadi Mangalore ho coz

Cabir: coz..

Nandini was in tears: coz papa chahte the ke agar kabhi meri family bane toh un sab main pehli shadi mere ghar se ho... papa ko humesha hi lagta tha ke mere life main kabhi kuch aise log aayenge who will shower me with all their love and you guys do that... it was his last wish but I know we all have some wish for our marriage so if u have one I won't force you and I will be happy in ur happiness

Cabir: Nandini, humare parents humse naraz hai... maa ne mujhe accept nai kia and Navya ke mom chale gaye toh agar Am's ke lessing hume milenge toh hum se lucky aur koi ni hoga... lets go to Mangalore...

Nandini hugs Cabir: thank you so much... I promise it would be the best...

All were set and were ready for going to Mangalore...

They decided to go via flight as the road trip would take long time...

They reached Mangalore the next day early morning and were welcomed by Am's... Cabir was really tensed about Am's when Am's broke the trance...

Am's: Navya aise halat main jhukte nai hai...

Everyone were shocked about the fact that Am's knew all this..

Nandini: Guys don't be shocked Am's ko sab pata hai and she is with us... Am's yeh manti hai ki Navya ki galti hai par yeh bhi manti hai ke sari galti uski nahi hai...

Am's was talking to rama when Nandini was telling all this to Fab 5...

Am's: bacho chalo apne room main..

Everyone settled in room but Cabir was missing something and he went out to check on the weather when he bumped into someone...

Cabir: m so... before he complete his statement he was shocked to see the person in front of him..

R: Cabir tum yahan?

Cabir: R?

R: Cabir I need to go guru maa must be waiting..

Cabir: yaa m sorry to disturb you..

R: Cabir please don't make me feel guiltier... I am sorry for my deeds but I really have to go for now...

Cabir hugs R which is seen by Navya...

Navya was in tears but was also happy to see Cabir happy finally... she was thinking and suddenly bumped into someone that gave her shocked...

Navya: Harshad tum?

Harshad: Navya mujhe maaf kardo please... Harshad holds her hand..

Navya: hath chodo mera... and maaf kardu tumhe... q Harshad...

Harshad: Navya tum jisse shadi kar ri ho who to apne ex ke sath hai who tumse shadi nahi karega

Navya: tumse matlab... I said hath chodo mera..

Harshad held it more firmly...

Navya: ouch Harshad hume dard hora hai

Harshad: acha?

Harshad leaves her hand when a firm hand holds his hand it was no one else than Manik...

Manik: Harshad Harshad Harshad tch tch tch.. tu wapas aagaya.. you are so obsessed with us haina?

Harshad: seriously Manik please

Manik: oh just shut up... tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?

Harshad: aur main tumhe q batau..

Manik: Harshad..

Harshad: yeh tumhara space nahi hai and shout karna hai to apne fren pe karo jo abhi abhi apne ek se mila hai

Harshad leaves from there...

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Flashback..

Harshad: Aryaman in stupid's ko yeh bhi nai pata we are following them..

Aryaman: Harshad you are too much..

Harshad: okay you concentrate on Nandini...

Aryaman: but what we gonna say them why are we here?

Harshad: first of all we don't know each other pretend that... secondly we gold opportunity to attend Kishori Murthy's workshop...

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Manik: Navya yeh Harshad..

Navya: han Manik Raghav sir is back...

Manik: what is Raghav ki toh main

Navya: please Manik it's about Cabir... he is happy after ages..

Manik: aur tum?

Navya: agar Cabir khus hai I am way much happier...

Cabir on the other hand was listening the conversation and came near to them

Cabir: acha madhubala abhi say itni parwah..

Navya nd Manik were shocked...

Navya: Cabir tum yahan..

Cabir: q Mangalore tumhari mama ka hai

Navya: shut up Cabir...

Manik: Cabir we need to talk

Cabir: han bol na

Manik: nahi idhar nahi...

Cabir: Manik tu mujhe Raghav ke liye puchne wala hai haina?

Use koi farak nahi padta... main Navya se shadi karunga that's final...

Manik felt he should leave them alone...

Manik left and Nandini was finding Manik...

She saw him sitting on the balcony rim watching the shore...

Nandini: Manik?

Manik: hmmm...

Nandini hugged him from behind...

Manik just rested his head backward on her heart...

Nandini was moving her fingers in his head...

Nandini: what's bothering my Monster?

Manik: Nandini Raghav is back...

Nandini was hell shocked but this was not the time for her to be shocked she knew he needs her..

Nandini: Manik chalo...

Manik: kaha?

Nandini: chalo na tum...

Nandini takes him to shore in the water... she knew only her proximity can calm him down..

Manik: Nandini I am tensed and tumhe mazak sujh raha hai...

Nandini: shhh..

Nandini sings...

She moves to him and places her hand on his chest...

Zara Zara Bahekata Hai, Mahekata Hai
Aaj Toh Meraa Tan Badan, Mai Pyaasee Hu
Mujhe Bhar Le Apanee Baaho Me

She hugs him passionately and moves with the rhythm.. he gets lost in her and clutches her waist and dig his nail in her,,


Zara Zara Bahekata Hai, Mahekata Hai
Aaj Toh Meraa Tan Badan, Mai Pyaasee Hu
Mujhe Bhar Le Apanee Baaho Me

she breaks the hug and warms him and says him he means every line... goes away from him and calls him to her and when he comes slowly she runs to him and hugs him...
Hai Meree Kasam Tujhko Sanam, Dur Kahee Naa Ja
Yeh Duree Kehatee Hai Paas Mere Aaja Re

suddenly it starts to rain...
Yu Hee Baras Baras Kaalee Ghata Barse
Ham Yaar Bhig Jaaye, Iss Chaahat Kee Baarish Me

he moves his hand in her hands...


Meree Khulee Khulee Lato Ko Suljhaaye
Too Apanee Ungaliyo Se, Mai Toh Hu Isee Khwaahish Me

She engulfs themselves in her scarf and drops him drop n gets over her...
Sardee Kee Raato Me, Ham Soye Rahe Ek Chaadar Me
Ham Dono Tanha Ho, Naa Koyee Bhee Rahe Iss Ghar Me

They turn over each other over the sand..


Zara Zara Bahekata Hai, Mahekata Hai
Aaj Toh Meraa Tan Badan, Mai Pyaasee Hu
Mujhe Bhar Le Apanee Baaho Me
Aaja Re Aa Re
Manik gets up and was about to leave when Nandini holds his hand.. n sings..


Tadpaaye Mujhe Teree Sabhee Baate
Ek Baar Ae Divaane Jhutha Hee Sahee Pyaar Toh Kar

She makes a cute pout and makes him close his eyes and herself close and they both reminisces their confession n kiss..


Mai Bhulee Nahee Hasin Mulaakaate
Bechain Karke Mujhako

Manik was leaving when she sings further and make him look in her eyes..

Mujhase Yu Naa Pher Najar

She forwards her hand and ask a promise
Ruthega Naa Mujhase, Mere Saathiya Yeh Vaada Kar

She had tears in her eyes...
Tere Bina Mushkil Hai Jina Meraa Mere Dilbar

Manik was not to see her crying and embrace her in his arms...

Zara Zara Bahekata Hai, Mahekata Hai
Aaj Toh Meraa Tan Badan, Mai Pyaasee Hu
Mujhe Bhar Le Apanee Baaho Me
Hai Meree Kasam Tujhko Sanam, Dur Kahee Naa Ja
Yeh Duree Kehatee Hai Paas Mere Aaja Re
Aaja Re, Aaja Re, Aaja Re, Aaja
.

She breaks the hug and tip toe herself and fix her lips on his.. his lips curved on her..

They kissed passionately...

Widly..

She takes him to her room...

Precap:

MaNan romance..

ManBir convo..

Marriage starts...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I am first first first yes!!😉
Awesome update as always.
cabir haha😆
proposal was too good!!😊
Nandini made me so emotional by her going to mangalore talk..😭
Then Raghav back..😕
cabir's reply was too good😃
harshad tch tch😆
manan romance😳 rain kiss😊
Oh waiting for next one..
And congrats 50 chapters my god!!👏⭐️
Edited by Starsfireflies - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
u r back with a bang kiara...
its awesome ...
cabini talks...
manik n harsh ad faceoff...
cavya conversation...
everything was perfect...
just loved it...
pre cap is exciting...
do continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely
Just loving it
N great job cabir
Can't wait for the precap
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update dea...👍🏼
continue soonn
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Posted: 10 years ago
After a long time ... Such a great update!!
Loved the romance
CaVya are so adorable :')
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update
Navya's concern for cabir was lovely
Manan understanding is awesome
Continue soon

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