MaNan- Coz all of mee Loves all of you!! Note on 153.. New thread strt - Page 64

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Posted: 10 years ago
hey dear... all the very best for ur exams..
do ur best... n take ur time in updating...
but plllzzz dont end this ff ... its soo intersting..
the charcter,the plot,the way u potray all the emotionz like love, romance, friendship, diffrnt relations..etc.. sorry im not that expressive..
but plllzzz im sure u can continue the story with lots of twists and turn.. pllzzz do continue with this ff.. hope my n othrs commnts convince u.. :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
congos for completing 100 pages of your ff...
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Posted: 10 years ago
yipeee on 100th page.. happy...

Surprise surprise...
Part 43:

Manik and Nandini came to the breakfast table.. But to their shock no one was there they looked here and there
Manik: Yeh log hume bulake khud kaha chale gaye
Nandini: Yaa right...

Surprise*****
Mukti brings a cake...
It was written... For a new journey..

Manik and Nandini were overwhelmed
Mukti: Guys you deserve more but we could arrange only these..
Manik: Come on this means a lot Mukti
Nandini: Yaa Mukti Manik is right..
Cabir: Chalo kate m so hungry..
Navya: Bhukkad.. Waise hum bhi bhuke hai..
Dhruv: Navya you should not starve okay
Alya: Awww Dhruv tum mera bhi aise hi dhyan rakhoge?
Dhruv blushed..

Manik was holding Nandini by her back in his arms and his hand entangled with her...
Cabir: Isko dekho besharam kahika..
Manik: What GF hai meri...
Nandini: Cabir yeh kabhi sudherne nai wala and ab toh aur zyada nalayak ho gaya hai.. And she hits her head on his head which he was resting by his chin on her shoulder...

Navya: Cake kate hum log

They cut the cake and had breakfast

Nandini: Guys aaj ka kya plan hai?
Cabir: Waise we have almost surfed everything just beach is left that to we definitely will go at evening so now..
Alya: Lets go for a movie
Mukti: Allu hum itne dur movie dekhne aaye hai..
Manik: Correct so guys pehle hum Fort Aguada and then water falls and will have lunch at waterfalls we will pack it...
Nandini gets super excited listening to falls and turns and hugs Manik
Nandini: yeahh...

Everyone cherished her carefree smile and little jumping dance..
Nandini feels embarrassed: Woh... I love falls so..

They first went fort and took all possible fotos and then they went to falls.. It was so beautiful.. There was a waterbody down the fall
Alya: Guys, lets get into the water wat say...
Mukti: Neki aur puch puch..
Cabir: I'll be with Navya..
Navya: Koi zarurat nai hai main idhar hi hun stop behaving insane just go..
Manik came in his boxers bare chest Nandini couldn't remove her eyes from him...
Cabir and Dhruv were in there change..
Girls changed themselves in bikini and it was Nandini's turn to change..
Alya: Chill if u r not comfortable then but Nandini lemme me tell you one think that tumhe tab tak kuch galat nai lagega jab tak tum khud woh feel nai karoge..

Nandini changed in a swim skirt attached to a swim upperwear not as revealing as our bold girls Mukti and Alya but enuff to cause shiver in Manik but she had wore the bath robe when she came out..

Manik toh sirf uske bare legs dekhke pagal hora tha..
Alya: Mukti look at him woh sirf isse Bathrobe main dekh ke stare karna ni chod para agar isne open kar diya toh?
Mukti: toh definitely Vagal Inhibition ho jayega
Nandini blushed and they were laughing..
Manik: Girls come.. Nandini..
Mukti and alya jumped in..
Alya: Nandini remember until u don't feel it
Nandini: Its not wrong I am coming
Nandini opened the knot of the bathrobe..
Manik was just staring at her...
She opened the robe and let it fell down and stepped in water.. Manik almost slipped in water
Manik: What the f... Is it you..
Nandini blush: Nahi mera bhoot hai..
But little di they know there were other eyes fixed on Nandini which made Manik mad..
Manik: Nandini wait..
Nandini: Manik please..

Manik: Manager
Manager: Yes sir..
Manik: I want this place vacant for two hours
Manager: Sir that's not possible
Manik: This is ur cash now I said
Manager asked everyone to visit after 2 hrs

Mukti: He is insane
Nandini: Ssly yeh kab tak yeh kar payega
Alya: Nandini u are lucky you know Manik ne kabhi yeh tab nai kiya tha when he was with me he dint bother.. But he really loves u..
Manik comes back and catches Nandini by her waist pulls her to him..
Nandini: Manik sab hai..
Manik: Listen take a deep breathe and hold it and come inside water trust me kuch nai hoga..
Nandini: Manik but..
Manik: Trust me..
Manik then pulls her in...
And goes near her lips and kiss her they kiss passionately and come out as they were out of breathe..
Manik: C I told u...

They played in the pool the two hours were worth..

They had lunch and went to their rooms promising to meet @6

All were set for beach.. Girls in shorts and crop tee each girl... Including navya nd Nandini
Boys were in boxers and vest...

Dhruv and Manik had guitar..

They beach...
Mukti: Guys chalo na u both sing something na...
Nandini: Wat no please..
Manik: Cmon Nandini lets sing..

They sing on Meethi boliyan refreshing all their memories...

They returned to their room..
Manik texted to Nandini, " 10 mins out of ur room"
Nandini, " manik but"
Manik, "unko pata hai and come to the honeymoon suite"

Nandini gets ready.. She wear red dress.. Which manik did sent to her room with red stilettos she loose curled her hair applied only eye makeup.. M ready for u Mr. Malhotra

She was looking stunning...

She came out and saw Manik in black tuxedo she felt the same thing for him... INTIMIDATING

And he felt her so ANGELIC..

He forwarded his elbow: chale princess..
Nandini: Yes prince charming...

They went in the room and Nandini saw the room decorated for the beautiful date...
Nandini: Manik yeh..
Manik: Miss Murthy aaj humara last day hai and i want that you remember the trip forever not only by the memory that we are inseparable now but also with this
Nandini: But Manik itna kuch like..
Manik: You deserve more
They had dinner..
Manik forwards his hand.. Dance..
Nandini: Sure...
They were dancing
Manik pulls her close
Manik: Nandini we will always stay like this..
Nandini: Humesha..
Manik kissed her lips she responded..
They hotness started to increase in the room...
They were kissing each other wildly and with kissing he lifts her and takes her to bed and still kissing..
They were panting sweating but not ready to leave each other as if its there last day...

He unzipped her dress and removed it.. They were in each other exploring each other.. Getting passionate wild.. And finally he occupied her...
They were having immense pleasure...

They were lying next to each other when Manik gets up from her side and getting clothed goes to the open roof balcony..
Nandini covers herself in that bed sheet and goes out..
She sees the balcony too was decorated... She saw him in his boxer and bare chest lying on the balcony over a thin bedding..

On the beach Cabir and Navya was walking...

After a while...
Cabir: Navya meri baat to suno
Navya: Kya sune hum yeh tumhe pehle sochna chahiye tha
Cabir: Navya please listen to me please
Navya: nai
Cabir grabs her hand and bring her close suno meri bat.. She was looking in his eyes

Flashback**
Cabir silently held Navya's hand..
Navya: Cabir tum thik ho..
Cabir: Come here baithio..
And they sat on the sand..
Navya: Hmmm bolo ab..
Cabir: Navya tumne kya socha hai is bache ke baare main...
Navya: Matlab soch toh liya ke I will have the baby..
Cabir: Navya having baby doesn't end problems I mean bache ko naam ko dega usse kon palega kon sath dega socha hai
Navya: Cabir tum humko dara re ho..
Cabir cups her face: Navya main tumse kehna chahta tha ki..
Navya: Cabir bolo na..
Cabir: Kya tum mujhse shadi karogi
Navya: What
Cabir: Navya meri bat suno.. Main sirf isliye nai kar raha ke tumhe kahi akela na hona pade par Navya shayad tumse humdardi hote hote I don't k ow main shayad kuch feel toh nai kar baitha..
Navya: Cabir bass
Flashback ends****

Navya: Chodo mera hath..
Cabir: Navya I mean it..
They were looking in each other's eyes and Cabir dint get when he went with the flow and kissed her lips and he realized it with a THUD*** slap...
Cabir: Navya m sorry Navya..
Navya: Stop wahi ruko aage mat badhna...
And she leaves...

Manik: Come join me.. Waise Nandini wanna say something..
Nandini: Hmmm bolo...
Manik: U are so magnificent even in that piece of cloth you look real beauty..
Nandini: Hmm m glad k bedsheet helped..
Manik: come
Nandini: Are you sure in this balcony..
Manik: Nandini just come yahan sirf hum dono hai and no one can c us so chill..,
It would be best stars and us...
Nandini: Tum na..
Manik: Acha waise Nandini can I ask you something?
Nandini: Pucho and she went in his arms
Manik: Yeh bed sheet ke andar kya hai..
Nandini hits him: Manik...
Manik: Thik hai mat batao as if maine dekha nai hai ur pale white skin..
Nandini just bite her lower lip and that made Manik crazy..
He bought her on top of him..
Nandini: Kya kar re ho we are in Balcony
Manik: I said earlier yahn koi nai aayega it's a special block of building dont forget honeymoon suite..
Nandini: Acha and she moves her finger on him..
Manik gets inside the blanket and twirls her she is beneath the musculine body..
Manik whispered: Ready miss murthy
Nandini innocently: Firse...
Manik winked and occupied her..
They were really exhausted...
Manik was holding her finger and making I love you on starts..
And they dint realize when..
They slept in that blanket hugging each other...

Morning...

Nandini gets up as sun rays fall on her it was 6 but they were out in balcony and there position... Manik was in his boxer but Nandini.. She freed herself from Manik and properly tugged that sheet over her she kissed his forehead..
Gm..
She ran in the bathroom as she was blushing hard and she new if he gets up he wont leave her...
She gets dressed up.. She comes out search entire room but he wasn't there then she felt his hands on her waist he kisses her nape Gumonin...
She shivered but said gm...
Nandini: Chalo get fresh up we have flight by 9
Manik: Okay 20 mins...

Knock knock***
Nandini: Tum jao main dekhti I will give ur clothes go he pecks her and went in washroom
She opens the door..
Navya hugs her and cries...

Precap:
Mumbai...

Cavya share there story to Nandini and Manik but navya to Nandini and Cabir to Manik



shristi sarda thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Keep updating like this...
manik is jst Awsm...luv manan moments...
continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Congo jaan 4 100 pages compeletd
many more to come
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Posted: 10 years ago
natsss bedsheet ur gaya thai...🤣
she bought a new one🤣

m blushing...

throughout d update i was thinking our craziest discussion... 🤣

🤣 wase manik aur nandu ka toh ppata nehi but itni hotness dekh k main behosh ho gai...

congo fr 100 pages... janvi😃
Edited by musicialtie - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ultimate m yaar bhot he sexy episde plz dont finiah dis episode u keep writing yaar plz bhot sexy episode
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Posted: 10 years ago
kiara mind blowing update...im blushing...☺️
Congo girl for completing 100 pages......
there r more to come...
ashu n nats u both r very gutter minded...itne ache update ka tumlogo n kya bana diya ...🤣
awesome plz continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Don't finish the story na
Reason is we all LOVE your story very much
I guess That is enough for u to continue your story
Pleassseee
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg it was amazing yaar
Good work
continue soon👏

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