Fan Fiction :- Of Scars and Beyond | Chp 1 - Pg 5

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Thank you, K for this gorgeous banner. 🤗

I am not much of a writer and well, yes, very new to the FF system over here. I happened to get a wave of ideas and simply penned it down. The following FF is the result. I won't promise or guarantee anything but I hope that people here would at least read this, if not for anything else and give valued feedback. Also, since I am new, suggestions regarding anything is always welcome. I hope this FF is as much fun to read as it is to write.

This is essentially a MaNan FF but Dhruv is just there. You will see why.

Hope y'all like it.

-tommo.


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Prologue - Page 1.

Chapter 1 - Page 5.
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p r o l o g u e

He had told Dhruv he wold be late for the party as he had some meeting. He is a big shot record label owner now, Manik Malhotra. He had to give up his dream to be a singer and a guitar player. Sitting in the meeting, talking to Riya Rao, an upcoming music sensation, Manik could not help but feel the ache of not being one himself. 'If only that incident had not happened', he thinks and immediately shudders the thought away. He hated to think about it. He saw Navya Naveli, the weird gaon ki ladki walking up to him in his office. The incident had changed her life too and he had helped her. Now she worked as a PA to Manik.

"We are getting late for Mr. Vedant's party, Mr. Malhotra", she said to a daydreaming Manik who had told her to use the formal tone with him in the office. "Yeah, you're right. Mr. Joshi, finalize the contract and we'll meet Ms Rao tomorrow. And tell Roy to take the car out."

He was still the same. He still had the command and authority over his people. Only Nandini was able to melt him. She was the only person who had seen the caring and soft Manik. Thinking about her, he cheerfully hurried down stairs. He would finally get to meet Nandini. Nandini Murthy, the love of his life. It seemed like eons now since he had last seen her. The thought about Nandini made him forget about everything and he rushed to his convertible, jumped in and hurried away to Dhruv's house. In his excitement, he totally forgot about Navya. She was left dazed while he sped away.



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow.. awesome strt.. Continue soon.. N pm me if u cn
Congo fr the new stry
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Posted: 10 years ago
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A well-written fic! It's such a struggle to find a well-written fic nowadays, truly. You have me seduced by the grammar, spelling, and punctuation. This is one I'll definitely look out for.

The concept sounds quite different and promising. I'll have to read more to properly figure it out. The suspense is good. Hope you do continue this, and please PM me once you update. Eager to read more :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awsome start...loved it...pls continue soon...take care.😊
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Prologue seeems intersting
Cont soon
Pm me plz
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Interesting prologue.I would love to read the story.It looks promising
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👏 👏
good gng...PM me fr d update. ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Really nice so PM awaaayyy!!!!

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