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sonia_1

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Beautifully written 👏

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MKrayZee

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Thank you all for likes and comments :)

Sara - I will try and write something on N too :)

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MKrayZee

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Updated on first page. Thank you.

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PrincessAshVik

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Beautiful! Loved Nandini's pov:):)

Hope to read more from you:)

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Suha

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Posted: 10 years ago

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You never tell me when you write stuff! Res. It's from Zainab so expecting a lot :v

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MKrayZee

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: TheShipWeirdo
You never tell me when you write stuff! Res. It's from Zainab so expecting a lot :v

Oh God. Ok. Be kind, Suha 😳

And I so did! I tweeted! But you ignored me 😭

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charminggenie

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Posted: 10 years ago

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The first scene took me to the night when Manik laid down near his pool one night staring at stars, a little oblivious to Dhruv joining him. Because it seemed he was searching for her among his stars.Because he was unsure why she made him think of his stars. She shined with her courage when she stood for her friends or against him. She was sparkling with her wisdom and her selflessness . He had no clue but all he wanted was to touch her, know her more, feel her , engulf her and he had no clue about the extremes he wanted to touch with her.

Sigh, Kray, you touched that side of Manik so beautifully. The one who took to confining his feelings to the stars who seemed replaceable by her . She brought the light in his dark world, just like they did. He had no sense of what was it they shared, but all he could feel was this powerful feeling for her.

Nandini Moorthy.

Storeroom while told her to look beyond his facade, even though she saw his selflessness for his friends particularly Dhruv but it was when he gave it all for her by being there with Rishab. It tore through the mask he was struggling to take away.

But Kray, it is her own awareness of the attraction between them. The need for his proximity. Her knowing about the intensity they both shared and her almost desire is what you captured here with your words.

I cannot explain how beautiful Nandini seemed through your words.Please keep writing because sometimes we need the words to realize just how intense , consuming and overwhelming their love is.