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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Humzy

Awsm update

Loved it
Cont soon


thank you so much
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: richarius



thank you so much baby. ur the best and u know it. hahaha don't worry ill text u the surprise asap when i have time



My pleasure always 🤗 ❤️
hehe not as awesome as u 😳 😉 aww yay 😃 🥳 can't wait to read it 😃
Edited by Diiyaa95 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg I just loved it richie it was an awsm part with less manan scenes :D but its ok I know u wil make it up for it in next part expectations are high ;) this was an awsm part nyonika ki bolti band and this parents murder wala twist is awsm so creative :) lots of love thnx for the pm :). U rock :*
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Posted: 10 years ago
nyonika was made quite by Varun
soha vl NVR change
nandini suspctng abt the accident
so their parents wer murdered
manik consoling nandini...
cont soon
waiting fr nxt update
tanq fr Pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update
we loved ur twist
so continue soon we r
waiting

thnks for PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome!!
lovely twist..
nandu's parents were murdered😲
i liked varun and nandini's bonding!!
manan scene was very nice.
Can we get more manan scenes please??
Uh and ya congo for 50 pages👏
Edited by Starsfireflies - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Update soon with more of MaNan. :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
a very long update indeed...
I loved how Varun threatened Nyonika against hurting Nandini.

The big secret about her Appa's pen, you didn't forget, like our CVs have and that too so conveniently.

I just loved how you incorporated Nandini's bond with her brother and Manik in a single update...both are so concerned for her...


loved it!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
plz continue the story and pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
Here's the next part guys. This is one of my fav part as its really close to my heart as its from my personal experience especially all the Alya bit. Its kinda dedicated to my parents. Hope u like it. I know there aren't that many manan scenes and I'll try my best to update lots of Manan scenes on the next part. Thansk Diya for being my story buddy and thanks for checking things throughly. Here goes


The next day fab 5 waited downstairs for Nandini to come. Manik, who had already woken up, left a pillow in place of him so that nandini wouldn't wake up as she had, had a long night. He along with fab 5 tried to think of ideas to cheer up Nandini.

Cabir: guys we should do something to cheer Nandini up

Mukti: yeah ur right cabir. It's a shock finding out that ur parents might have been murdered. I can't imagine what's she's going through

Alya: I can understand Nandini's pain guys. I know my parents weren't murdered but the pain of loosing ur parents is unbearable and out of this world. It hurts like hell. Sometimes u just wish they were there for you so that you can tell them all of ur worries and you know that they will always find a way out for you. Not having them by your side sometimes just makes you feel like the most unluckiest person in the world. When I see parents with their kids having fun it makes me realise how I much I miss them. Although I have a brother and he does care for me but his behaviour is not acceptable and sometimes he drives to me to the extent that it feels like I have no real brother at all! Sometimes I just wish I could see my parents and put my head on my mum's lap while she comforts me. I so long for the feelings of motherly love & affection and being my dads little princess. Doing all those cute antics to get ur parents attention. Pretending to be asleep so that ur dad can carry you to bed. Also receiving those annoying lectures from ur mum which you know only shows the immense love and care that she has for you. I just wish that I could have one day to spend with them like that. Just me and my parents. No distractions no troubles no worries. But I know even if i wish for these things they will never happen. The day I miss them the most is on my birthday as they are not here to celebrate it with me. I just wish that I could have one entire day to spend with them like this. Just me and my parents. But see what is my luck.

Alya was in tears by now and Mukti came and gave a side hug to her. Manik, cabir and dhruv also came and hugged her. They all realised that this was the first time that Alya had opened up to them about how she felt about her parents death. So they thought of cheering her up with a song. The song was more than a band from a Disney movie. (its an amazing song i suggest thats you guys should hear it ) At the end of the song they all had a group hug and Alya thanked them.

Manik: Alya we know that u miss your mum. We all understand how that feels. Even though I have Nyonika she was never my mom and never will be. It's always a give and take relationship with her and she has never cared for me. She only cares for herself and her stupid reputation. The only reason she raised me is because of dad. Otherwise she would've left me ages ago. But then one day Nandini came along. I was just living in darkness and she showed me the light. She gave me the care that I craved for and she looked after me like a mum. She changed me to become a better person. She understood me like no one else. She loved me like a mum and protected me like a dad.

Nandini who was there heard everything. She had came a while back and was in tears after seeing and hearing everything that manik had said. She just ran and crashed into manik's chest. Manik was shocked at the beginning but then he also hugged her back and wrapped both of his arms tightly around her. He felt that his shirt was wet and realised that Nandini was crying. So he gently cupped her face and lightly wiped away her tears.

Manik: Nandini what's wrong? Why are u crying? Pls stop. You know na that I can't stand ur tears

Nandini: I love u Manik. Ur the best. I'm so lucky to have you

Manik: I love u too my shining star and promise me something.

Nandini: what?

Manik: promise me that u won't cry anymore. Ur smile is too precious and gorgeous and u should always smile.

Nandini just smiled and nodded her head in agreement. She turned towards fab 5.

Nandini: looks like your song is ready

Dhruv: what do you mean Nandini?

Nandini: the song that u guys were singing. It's perfect and I loved it so much.

Cabir: oh that. Hmm. Alrighty then. Looks like our song is ready.

Nandini just gave a heartless smile to them in response but they all knew that she was trying to be brave and was clearly in pain after last night.

Hope u guys like it. And pls do leave ur comments. If u guys are not interested then let me know and I won't continue. Tc
Edited by richarius - 10 years ago

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