Manan OS : Seven minutes in heaven - Page 4

Originally posted by: _JellyBean_

omg is this ur first os?can't believe babywa
This is amazing concept...just loved it ...keep writing susu girl...it was awesome

Originally posted by: loquacious_me

It really does not look like your first try though...
Impressive idea
I suggest you to write the next part to complete the story...
The reaction of fab 5 and Manik's explanation would be great to read

And yeah keep writing more...You do it well👏

Originally posted by: Aliyagogoi

Sree...🤗

this your first os????i Can't believe it..😲

it was that amaging...

what a game that was only our Cabira can invent such a mindblowing game..😆And only a nauranki dimag like you can write this...🤪

seven minutes of leap...🤣

that seven minutes must be his heaven cause after it,he was in hell with whole lot of embarassment...☺️

for first time,it was a commendable work..👏Keep it up sweeto...❤️

Originally posted by: Akshi0019

Oee hoee sree hoot hot os.. full of manan.. maza hi aa gya padke..

do write more

Originally posted by: sweetdesire

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Awiieee</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">That was so cute</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">simply loved</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">cabir is really sweetheart</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Manik should be thankful to him😉</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Love those 7 minutes</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Plz keep writing</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">take care</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Geet</font>

Originally posted by: kresham

Oh God that was cute n Hilarious🤣Last line racked me very badly...

This we cant even expect in the show😆

Originally posted by: Edna_Philip

🤣Awesome OS Sreeja...keep writing.

And I am sad that you wrote this in your illness.😔