Manan OS : Seven minutes in heaven

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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is my first ever OS I have ever written .so please bear with the mistakes

- Seven minutes in heaven -

This is the scene after the photo shoot of fab5

Cabir : yaar...itni photo shoot sessions leke..i feel like am gonna become a official modal! ...ye soha ..she is karamjali...

All then will laugh

Cabir : let's play something..i am so damn bored of this photo session

Dhruv : what about Truth or Dare??( dhruv thought ki atleast by truth game he can confess hi love to alya infront of all)

Cabir: oye dhruv...u opened ur mouth?? Waise fab5 don't hide truth from eachother right? *looking at Manik* And we ourselves are daring and dashing people..so let's think about any other Game.

Dhruv*(thinks) feels sad...gayi plan pani mein I have to confess my love*

After seven minutes of leapšŸ˜†

Our cupid Cabir get's a devilish idea...

Cabir : What about Seven Minutes in heaven Game guy's??..This is gonna be So fun..! And waise with this game all misunderstanding could be cleared..

And Some friends can change to lovers...winking at Manik

Manik gives Cabir an angry glare

Dhruv : ok then let's start.. I m in(light's up)

Mukti and alya : we'r in the game

Manik : I am in too...

Cabir : chal let's go...Wait a second...there are 3 boys and only 2 girls??...This is not fair ..let us ask someone to join.

Dhruv : how about Soha

Fab4 : what the ?

Cabir : tu teek hai? Ur speaking a lot today are u fine dhruv??

Dhruv : look's at alya.(.eye obsession) and reply I am fine

Meanwhile Nandu passes through step's...

Cabir : Nandini Wait do u like join us in playing??

Nandini : u must be practicing now...looks at Manik and says- I am busy with some Kinda work

Cabir : there is no such important work for you other that Maanii...

Manik stamps Cabir foot hehe

Manik : Nandini...I think, you shoud play

Dhruv : yes, I guess even ur tired of staying with us during photo shoot..so relax and play

Alya looks at dhruv in kinda jealousy Manner as Nandu was his fisrt love :P

Nandini : ok , I m in

Cabir : we need a dark room for this...and I know the dark place.. follow me guy's

Nandini and Fab4 follows Cabir..and he takes them near a Room

Cabir : this is the dark room in which the couple will be left and have some fun ...!

And I have girls chit's on My right hand and boy's Chits on my left Hand...now let us the game..and let the fun begin

Mukti : Cabir let us start the Game with our teacher aka Manager aka Nandini. What u say?

Cabir : as you say..i must listen to your words na.. Nandini come and take chit from my left hand.. you have to spend 7 minutes with person whose name is on the chit u selected in the dark room..Now jaldi se come and select and go

Nandini in mind: ayappa I am leaving it you

She selects a chit and gives to Cabir

Cabir : who is unlucky person to stay 7 minutes in darkroom..?? and opens and reads out the Name loudly Manik Malhotra

Manik and nandini now go and chill in the dark room.

Cabir come near Manik and whispers : this is only u want right??

Nandini and Manik enter the dark Room and from back Cabir closes it and Says ur seven minutes have started

Nandini : Manik Can u see anything?..i know ur afraid and cant see anything in dark

Manik : when ur with me.. I can see anything

Nandini : *Smiles* And was about to fall as she stumbles on some box ...And Manik catches her by her waist..And pulls her to him They both are close...room filled with silence only their breathing can be heard

Manik : *husky voice* tu teek hai?

Nandini : hmm! Yes I am ..Manik u let me go Now I am fyn

Manik : shh! Places his hand on her lips and Comes closer to kiss her

Nandini : Manik..we r friends and slightly pushes him

Manik : brings her closer Again and say's yes we are friends...and you are girl..and I am boy so, and we both are friends hence ur my girl friend and I am ur boy friend... and u know what boy friend does to his girl friend?

He comes and kisses her Neck

Nandini : * closes her eyes* and whispers Manik...Ur diverting

Manik : I cant stay away for you Much longer...Nandini please allow me to ...After coming out of this Room..We can be back again like friends

Nandini does not respond anything..so he thinks that she gave up

And he starts doing..the things what he wanna do

7 Minutes Completed

Cabir shouts near the door : 7 minutes completed..dono bahar aao

Manik : Nandini time is up...I felt these 7 mins just like heaven...let's go out. Everyone must be waiting

Nanini : Manik wait...

Manik cut's her off and opens the door and come's out and Nandini follows him

Everyone looks at them and start laughing...

Manik : kya hua? Why are u all laughing

Nandini cheeks became red..and stood at place still

Mukti : hayee rabba tu kabse ...(stops talking and laughs again)

Manik : arre what's so funny? Guy's? dhruv bata kya hua? Cabir tu itna rofling kyu kar raha hu??

Cabir : ye lo mirror check ur self and starts laughing again

Manik looks himself in mirror and finds Nandu lipstick on his lips and realizies that Nandu was about to say him something...

Manik also became red and stands stillšŸ˜†

That's it

How's it? Like it ? dislike it?

Love

sreeja😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
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res
heheheh dis is ur first OS n m d first one...

now lemme bring back some old memories...

so lil one m sure uh remember wat uh use to do after reserving d first comment...

so PAY BACK TIME NOW... 😈
Edited by manan_flab - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow...it's so cute and lovely OS...šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘
Manik is always ready šŸ˜†
and
Cabir is all time funny šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
loved it... 7 minutes complete 🤣
Edited by Ireena7 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: manan_flab

res

heheheh dis is ur first OS n m d first one...

now lemme bring back some old memories...

so lil one m sure uh remember wat uh use to do after reserving d first comment...

so PAY BACK TIME NOW... 😈

those were not ur first lu'sšŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
but this is my first OS😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Paro_rudra

those were not ur first lu'sšŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
but this is my first OS😳


aww miss black mailer it wont work dis time... 😈
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow awsm os
loved it
fab work

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: manan_flab


aww miss black mailer it wont work dis time... 😈

u look so beautiful u know..unres karo na😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Paro_rudra

u look so beautiful u know..unres karo na😳


ohhh really...? I KNOW IT ALREADY... 😈
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Humzy

wow awsm os

loved it
fab work

thnks a lot šŸ¤—
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Posted: 10 years ago
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gud one ... seven minutes in heaven ... all couple of KYY really in need of it... too gud...
congrates for your first OS ... šŸ‘šŸ¼ šŸ‘

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