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Posted: 10 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: prati_25

Superb update!!!

Pls continue soon..

Thanks for PM:)

Thank u 😳 Glad u Lyk It!! Update bahot jaldi hoega😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely update loved it

continue soon

Thank u 😳 Glad u Lyk It!! Update in a few updates 😃!!
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Originally posted by: areshauchiha

Thank u 😳 Glad u Lyk It!! Update in a few days 😃!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Dear i m sorry my like button is not working so m sorry but i hav to tell its awesome u nailed it beautifully and very well
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Waiting for the next awesome update 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely start ...too good ..continue soon guys 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 2 - Toh Baat pakki ?
Nandini was made to sit near her soon to be husband . Then the elders started to talk .

Manik looked around the room feeling bored hearing the talks of the elders that's when Nandini Chachi spoke ,
"I think the girl and boy should know each other so I think they should talk to each other than staying here with us . "

The elders agreed and Manik and Nandini were taken to the terrace . Nandini prayed inside hoping he would not agree to marry her . Yup his
good looks was a attracting factor but this was not for her . She did not want to marry now , she wanted to make her career not marry even if her soon to be husband was damn handsome .

She just waited for sometime for him to speak . He finally opened his mouth ,
"So ur called Nandu here in the house ? "

"Yes " she just replied . She waited for sometime for him to speak but he did not open his mouth instead he looked around the terrace .

"Reject me ! "She finally gave up and poured out her emotion.

"What ? "He asked confusedly .

"Yes please reject me I don wanna marry now . "

"What ? But why should I . U know what before I also thought that I would reject u . "

"Then reject me na please "she requested .

"Why should I , I will have to marry someone either u or someone else so it is good na I will accept u . I will not have to roam around and waste my time again in some other girls house. "

"God ! Why don u get it ? I do not want to marry , I want to make my career not stay at home and do household work . " she complained .

"What career do u wanna make huh ? "He asked curiously .

"I want to be singer . I want to make my music career. "She said with some sparkle in her eyes .

Manik did not answer and raced his brain's horses for a while .
"Okay "he finally replied and Nandini smiled as he did.

Aiyappa ! Thank u that he is rejecting ! , she thought as he spoke again .

"Okay I have a deal for u "

"What deal ? "She asked confused , she thought he was denying to marry with her but why deal ?

"Actually I do not want to marry but according to my fathers property will I will only get the money and the property after I marry .Naunika wants me to get married as she wants that property so I have to get married according to her wish . "

Nandini looked at him confusedly .
"Naunika ? "

"She is my mother , the one who is sitting down . "

"Oh "she said as she cleared herself . But still a question haunted her why did he call her mother with her name ? Maybe they were very close , she thought again

"But your father is alive right and what will and property and all ? "Asked Nandini again confused . This was more confusing than optional maths ! She thought as he opened his mouth to speak .

"He is not my own father , he is my stepfather . He is my uncle and Naunika married him after my father died now if u have finished your question then wanna hear my deal ? "

Nandini nodded her head in a yes .

"Okay so I don want to marry so do u , so lets get married , how's that ?"

"What ? "Nandini could not say more she was not being able to believe what he was saying ? Had he lost his mind .

"What I meant to say is we both would have to marry one day right ? So let's get married with each other . U give me my freedom and don go after me and I will help u to make your career . So deal accepted ?" He asked as he moved his hands forward waiting for her response .

What would the response be ?

---TBC---
Hope u all like it and do comment back your opinions . Criticism is welcomed .

Love
~Sam
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Her reply shld defo be a no.. God man.. This is nt gud.. I mean ur writing is great n so is the stry.. Bt.. I dnt wnt nandu to accept tht deal.. Dude she has some self respect..
Bt I wanna see hw their love stry unfolds
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Awesome update cont soon looking forward to read it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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oho...deal??????? OMG...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
update was awsome...please continue soon...
thanks a lot for the pm...😊

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