'MaNan's Fear'--Part 32 on pg 111updtd on 26th feb - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: shravz6

So nice it is...just loved it👏

Thanks a lot for the update and pm

Thanq
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: piyu008

very good..so manik connected his phone with nandu through gprs interesting n smart..

plz update soon😊

Hmmm...smart girl👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: Akshi0019

Its getting quite interesting... i loved it..
continue soon n thanks 4 d pm

Yes it is
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: Zoya_09

Awesome...curious who is gonna save Manik from that psycho,
thanks 4 the pm, plz update soon ! 😊

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Thanks to each n every person
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MaNan's Fear----Part 4

Fab5 reaches at farm house...

Manik first gets down walks away from Fab4 n checks his phone...n gets angry

Manik:Ye ladki meri baat kabhi nahi sunegi...n starts dialing her num

Fab4 notices Manik's anger

Mukti:Ye Manik itna pareshan kyu lagraha hai...lagta hai apni ex-manager ko miss kar raha hai

Dhruv:Come on Mukti...he is just trying to b friends with her

Aliya:Ya guys she is not that bad though...haven't u seen her courage for Navya...

Dhruv:Agree...agar hum uski help nahi karte toh bhi woh piche nahi hatti Navya ke liye fight karne se

Mukti:Agree...but there is something between Manik n Nandini...

Cabir:Chodna Mukti...aisa kuch nahi hai usne kaha na...aur promise bhi kiya tha...u guys enter in ...Main dekhta hun Manik ko

Mukti:K ...cool

Cabir walks towards Manik

Cabir:Tu kya kar raha hai...uss lady bheem ko sambhalna mushkil horaha hai

Manik just ignores what he said:She haven't reached home yet

Cabir:Who...

Manik:Nandini...aur kaun

Cabir:Aur tujhe yaha khade khade pata chalgaya...n woh toh ghar par hi thi na

Manik:Nahi Madam college pohach gayi thi...aur tabhi usika call tha

Cabir:Ohh...but tujhe ye kaise pata chala ki woh abtak ghar nahi pohachi...koi heart to heart telepathy connetion hai kya

Manik:Cabir...stop ur PJ's plz...n how we track n reach other when we r not together

Cabir:...Ohh...now I got ...but tune kab kiya...woh toh abhi clg pohachi na

Manik:Uske ghar gaya tha subah batane ...but she was sleeping so I took her cell nset the tracker so that we can track her

Cabir :N she is unaware of that

Manik in anger :Obviously...

Cabir:Tu itna worked up kyu horaha hai call karle...

Manik:If u haven't noticed I m doing that only...but she is not taking the call

Cabir:But what is her location now

Manik:Clg

Cabir:That means she is not alone...n she is safe

Manik:Let me remind u she was been attacked twice when we were around that too in clg itself

Cabir:Haa yaar...ab

Manik:Tu andar jaa...main aata hun...

Manik tries calling again n again but Nandini was busy talking

Finally Nandini picks call

Manik:What the hell Nandini...kabse call kar raha hun...tum ghar kyu nahi gayi abtak

Nandini:Manik calm down...whats wrong with u...chali jaungi...I was just talking to Navya n Abhi...i ll leave

Manik:Is Abhi with u...now

Nandini:S he is...infact I abt to leave...

Manik:Just give him I want to talk to him...right now

Nandini:kk...She hands over cell to Abhi

Abhi takes the cell:Manik don't worry I was just leaving...before he finishes his line Manik interrupts him

Manik:Dekho Abhi I don't have time to explain everything now...but listen to me carefully without any ifs n buts ...Nandini has to go home right now its ur responsibility...that she ll stay at home for two more days...even if she cums u have to make sure she goes back safely...attacks on her were not normal or casual ones so I doubt that someone is doing it wontedly...So I m not there so plz make sure she doesn't cum to clg till I cum back

Abhi:K...I ll do that

Manik:Thanq

Abhi:Save it...for later...n hands over the cell to Nandini

Nandini takes the cell

Manik:Nandini ghar jao

Nandini:I m gng ...but whats the problem

Manik:Nothing...u want me to practice peacefully na...then go home

Nandini:K bye...take care

Manik:Hmm...bye...u too take care

Both cut the call

Chudail receives everyone at farm house...n doesn't leave any chance to impress Manik

At college

Abhi:Nandini chalo main tumhe ghar chod deta hun

Nandini:But u were going na

Abhi :Ya I ll drop u n leave...u wait near the gate I ll get the car...Navya tum Nabdini ke saath raho jabtak main nahi aata

Navya:theek hai...par hume hostel chod do ab hum akele college me rehakar kya karenge

Abhi:K...leaves to take the car

As they were standing at the gate some goons attack n tries to take Nandini but both Navya n Nandini starts screaming ...

Abhi cums with his car n notice them n stops the car n runs to save them...seeing that some of the college boys also runs to help Abhi who was struggling with goons...

But in that fight Nandini gets hurt n her leg gets sprained badly...as the goons pushes Nandini very badly on the ground n runs away seeing the students coming towards them

Abhi:Nandini...Navya...tumlog theek ho...

Nandini:Yes I m ...n tries to get up but she cant...she shouts out of pain

Navya:Kya hua Nandini...

Nandini:Pata nahi...my leg is hurting

Navya:Lagta hai moch aagayi hai

Abhi:chalo we ll go to doctor

All of them reach hospital

Abhi n Navya outside the doctors cabin

Abhi gets worried:Manik was right

Navya:Kuch kaha tumne...Manik kya...

Abhi:Yahi ke Nandini pe baar baar attacks horahe hai...dekho daro mat aur Nandini ko iske baare me kuch mat batana...baadme samjhata hun abhi chalo ghar chalte hai varna Manik will kill me

Nandini gets bandage on her leg n cums out slowly

Abhi recollects what Manik said...n tells Nandini:I ll drop u guys ...Navya n I will stay with u today

All three reaches home

Nandini cant understand whats going on ...n Why both stayed along with her...but bcz of dizziness she cudn't think properly...

After dinner ...

Navya takes Nandini n asks her to rest...as Nandini sleeps early bcz of medicines

Navya goes to Abhi n asks:Ab batao kya hua

Abhi narrates everything to Navya what Manik had told him

Navya:Par hume lagta hai Manik ko batana chahiye...

Abhi:its already late...hum kal batate hai

At Farm house

They completes practicing n Manik checks Nandini's location n feels relieved...but unfortunately he misses it when she was in the hospital n checks the cell as when she was already reached home

Manik feels good when he sees Nandini is at home...through tracker

After dinner he tries to call Nandini...but she dint pick the call...n Chudail disturbs him...but he excuses himself by saying that he is tired today bcz of travelling n lot of practice n will talk tmrw...

He tries to call again but thn thinks she myt hv slept bcz its already too late

Chudail thinks ...No problem Manik I ll wait...I still have two days in hand to get u

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Posted: 10 years ago
#97
Y did u stop?? Wat happens whn manik gets to kno *getting too impatient*
Update soon !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98
Lovely update.. Keep writing and give us sum nice updates...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#99
Thanks for pm!
Interesting part!
Don't want her to get hurt again :(
Can't wait for the next update!

Take care :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
nandu baby is hurt. oh god dnt knw what will happen when manik cms to knw bout this. update soon.
And thank u so much for d pm.

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