||-- I AM MANIK and this is my song --||

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Friends,
After writing a piece on Nandini's journey, I wanted to write on Manik's journey too.

The result of this is the below poem written by me.
Please let me know your comments/criticisms.

Please read Nandini's journey here: Nandini

Love
MD

Here is my poem:

I was Rage

Burning Lava oozing from the pit of my soul

Never ending storm tearing apart my heart


I was Pain

Notes of despair holding me captive

A wound never healed festering inside


I was Darkness

Tunnel with no end, forever hidden from the world

Nothing to see, nothing to touch, in black I was held


I was Hate

Whenever I could, spread this feeling just fine

Unknown to the loving hand which never held mine


I was Lost

Chaos ruling my mind with no roads forever in sight

Pieces of me lying around, some given freely, some taken with might


I was Guardian

Protecting, caring, keeping the world at bay

Keeping safe the haven for those who had no say


I was Monster

To hell with the others, they did not matter to me

I did not care, hurt them deeply till they cried for me


Then She came

My life was never the same again

Changed me in many ways, had lot to gain


And now I am Calm

She was Rain, for the lava was subdued

She was Breeze, for the storm was subsided


And now I am Peace

She was melody, for the notes of despair were destroyed

She was heeler, for the wounds never flourished


And now I am Light

She was guide, for I could see the tunnel at its end

She was light, for finally different colours I could find


And now I am Love

She was adamant, for she took my hate and laid me bare

She was tenderness, for only she held my hand with care


And now I am Found

She was determined, for chaos were turned, she gave me a direction

She was stubborn, for pieces of me she joined, which were broken


And now I am Ward

She was safe, for I was cared and protected

She was home, for I could hide away from the world


And now I am Manik

She was hurt, for once I could not hurt any more

She was love, for I could not be contained any more



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Posted: 10 years ago
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beautiful...loved ur poem ...a lot...
please do write more...

thanks a lot for the pm...

take care
with love
aavani
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow beautiful post
loved it
very nicely written

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely description of my babu's feelings
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aavani

beautiful...loved ur poem ...a lot...
please do write more...

thanks a lot for the pm...

take care
with love
aavani


Thanks Aavani...😊

Love
MD
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for d pm.
She is the cure for all of his wounds.
He ws thirsty for all his life and she ws d drop of water who hd satisfied his soul.
He cn never ask for more, he is content and finally he is in peace bcoz when he found her all his wishes get fulfilled.

The way u hv describe manik's journey, its simply beautiful.
keep writing.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow...lovely just lovely dear...loved it so much
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: apardh_ba

Thanks for d pm.
She is the cure for all of his wounds.
He ws thirsty for all his life and she ws d drop of water who hd satisfied his soul.
He cn never ask for more, he is content and finally he is in peace bcoz when he found her all his wishes get fulfilled.

The way u hv describe manik's journey, its simply beautiful.
keep writing.


Wow Pari...you are on your way to become a poet yourself...😃

Thanks for liking mine..😊

Love
MD
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ireena7

wow...lovely just lovely dear...loved it so much


Ireena, my sweet...

Thanks.😊

Love
MD
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey Di!
That was so beautiful!!
I read it in the morning itself.. and let me tell you, it made my morning a whole lot better
I just love the way you penned the poem down.
It's perfect! Loved it so much!

I love how often you write!
I keep craving for more and more each time!
So keeep writing :D
<3
Looots and looots and looots of love 😃
Hinal 🤗❤️
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