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Posted: 10 years ago
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The world was dark for me
Filled with anger fully
No one could stop me
Neither harm me
I was detached from the world
Even when great atrocities unfurled
I never cared
I never bared
All I did was 'rule'
Because that was my fuel
No one ever dared
Cause they were all scared
Of what I was capable of
And what I would do thereof
But then came one creature
With many a feature
She questioned me
She stood against me
This was something new
That's when I understood that she was one among very few
I was obsessed with her
Just like a baby to a doll of fur
I wanted to test her limits
And see if she tilts
But in this process
I didn't realize I was in a mess
But it was a sweet one
Comparable to none
Because it was my limits that were being tested
Which were so long rested
Some angle in me was woken up
And it was like a heavy hiccup
But I realized it soon enough
Because it was not at all rough
It was something sweet
Something which was time for me to greet
And I did
Because it longer wanted to be hid
Somewhere within and deep
Where nobody can creep
I wanted to possess her
To scold and to lure
She had to be mine
In every single line
I could never let go of her
Because I was so sure
That she was my shining star
Fallen just for me from so far
Just like she had said
And on my anger did she tread
And by some miracle she wanted me too in the same way
And she need not that say
So I took her in my arms
With hands and heart wide and open as farms
And promised her I'll never let go her this second time
Because it was now OUR time

It's MaNan time...😳


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Ireena7 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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An awesome poem👏..did u write it????
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😉Ohh.. So beautiful.. Vry well written... Is this self composed?😛
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wow ...it is actually for Manik n exactly meant abt him...is this ur own?👏👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yes, that poem was written all by myself and thank u all of u for appreciating my work
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rassu20

Yes, that poem was written all by myself and thank u all of u for appreciating my work

this is amazing dear...loved it...😳😳
superb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
you have talent 👏👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Well written
I loved it...
Kas baba aise line nandu ko bole ...kabhi chodke nai jaayegi
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb 👏...so apt for Manik.
Tfs
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Posted: 10 years ago
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fantastics dear 👏 👏
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Originally posted by: Rassu20

Yes, that poem was written all by myself and thank u all of u for appreciating my work

wow that's awesome yaar👏

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