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Posted: 10 years ago
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Girl, this poem, right here, is pure love. You have got grip of Manik such finely and UFFF, the way you played with your words. kept the rhyming constant yet didn't let it all be turned into mess of meaninglessness.
I am amazed and I am fangurling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Manik's emotions in poetry... Beautiful 👏
My favorite lines:
' All I did was rule coz that was my fuel '
' That she was my shining star fallen just for me from so far '
' Now is OUR time '
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank u all of u for ur love and support and am really glad and overwhelmed by ur response towards my poem.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful!!!! My fav part was -

'I could never let go of her

Because I was so sure

That she was my shining star

Fallen just for me from so far'
Awww... This is so sweet!!!

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