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Forever19

@Forever19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: iwantitall

Hahahahaha.
🤣 Youuu!!
Imaginee two ponytails and spikes and shit too 😉

I already did🤣..My imagination always runs wild😆

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iwantitall

@iwantitall

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: aishu3003
fabb start👏
lovedd ittt😊
continue soonish and pm me plzz😳

Thankss a bunchh 😃

I shall PM you for sure 😳

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iwantitall

@iwantitall

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: in_luv_wit_life

I already did🤣..My imagination always runs wild😆

Hahahaha. Next update mein i shall add kabir and all sorts of nautankii 😎

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1012214

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

I couldnot stop laughing or grinning throughout your whole story😆

Wow. That was really different!👏 and hilarious! Seriously i HATE lizard but Lily sound so much fun!😆

Just clear my doubts! how old are the characters ?😆

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iwantitall

@iwantitall

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Noorie30
I couldnot stop laughing or grinning throughout your whole story😆

Wow. That was really different!👏 and hilarious! Seriously i HATE lizard but Lily sound so much fun!😆

Just clear my doubts! how old are the characters ?😆

Ayeee nooorss! Thankss! 😃

Theyy are abouut 14! 🤗

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faye.

@ohsehun.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

RESERVING. 😎

Unreserved.

Man, I don't even watch this show. But I do appreciate good writing. I appreciate it a hella lot, and I appreciate you as a writer, so I thought 'what the hell. this is probably going to be awesome.'

So I read it, and I was surprised because you were still as good as I remembered you to be and I laughed and it was good, it was really, really good.

Thing is, I'm the kind of reader who always goes for the angst, I've said it before that those cute, sweet kind of things? they ain't my thing. But there are exceptions. And I do love those exceptions, they make me feel all warm and happy and content on the inside. And this was cute.

I love your characters, dude. Judging from the comments, they're pretty different in the show? (Idk, I'm a complete newbie to all of it. 😛) But they are good, the tone is wonderful, and the narrative is told in a way that it is relatable. Take it from me, I don't even watch the show, so I don't have a bias (okay, I have a little bias towards you, but that's it. 😆)

From the way you start it 'there are two types of girls in this world' to the way you show all the thoughts going through manik's poor brain, 'no she didn't. yes she did.' 😆

They're gonna be the two characters that challenge each other and fight and fall in mushy lovvve, aren't they? sigh.

This is a great start though, and I'm sorry you had to wait this long for the review. 😆

- Faye. 😛

Edited by ..Labyrinth.. - 10 years ago

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PooraiPaagol

@PooraiPaagol

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Oh my!i m loving this so damn much!gah my heart!its so good!please make it a many multichapter fic...err i mean don't end it soon.
Amazing writing.amazing storyline.yeh toh mcdonalds se bhi achcha hai!I M LOVING IT

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iwantitall

@iwantitall

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: ..Labyrinth..
RESERVING. 😎

The excitement. Can. Not. Wait. 😎

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iwantitall

@iwantitall

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: PooraiPaagol
Oh my!i m loving this so damn much!gah my heart!its so good!please make it a many multichapter fic...err i mean don't end it soon.
Amazing writing.amazing storyline.yeh toh mcdonalds se bhi achcha hai!I M LOVING IT

Hahaha. Don't worry. This will be a nice long FF! 😆

Thankss a bunch! 😃