MaNan One Shot - No One To Reign. - Page 2

Manik Malhotra - The Monster of his own life. Cruel and Callous - Those are such harsh words to use for a guy like him, yet they are exactly what he wants to be known as. As he puts up with exterior front in front of everyone, throwing words that he knows will prick her the most, he dies a million deaths inside, yet, he continues to suffer and endure the pain of being alone, walking that path all by myself because he seems to have accepted that as his fate. Oh god no Baba. I want this guy to be loved - so much love. Flamey, I know you are have soft corner for Manik, or rather you always bring Manik's inter turmoil to the table, even during the break up scene, and today, you've given us more words to really understand all that Manik is going through. It hurts, yet this is the beauty of this one character - He makes me feel so much - be it in anger, hurt or just love. Such a beautiful OS - All of it.

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Originally posted by: TheFaerieQueen

This. Everything you wrote about Manik is just so perfect. His inner turmoil, pain, helplessness, everything...so poignant. We all are talking about Manik's god complex, but somewhere deep down I think he doesn't feel being worthy of the chosen one.Haina? I swear that is the only reason I was never angry with Manik when whole forum was going around planning his murder. I have always seen him as an insecure child and not someone with God complex. He NEEDS someone to tell me that even he deserves happiness. Also, Nandini has a strong core..she is very much attuned to her feelings and over the years have learnt to trust her feelings and other's. Manik didn't come across with emotional relationships except Dhruv. Exactly! Manik needs a emotional back relation which he had only with Dhruv. Just as it started with Nandini, it was snatched away so how will he would go with his feelings? Tell me? I just love my baby. Bas.

Dhruv has been the only person in Manik's life with whom he had an emotional connect with. He was the reason because of which Manik could retain come sanity in his life.

Manik grossly misjudged Nandini's feelings for him. No one has ever put him first in their life, but this time it would be different. This time Nandini will teach him how to be loved, loved unconditionally by someone. I can not wait for it, I really can't.

I don't know Flamey what I wrote and if this is relevant at all, tried.. Chal be, I love Manik, any rambling about him makes me khush 😆

And for everything else that I could feel after reading your post but couldn't write (I suck at it) ..🤗. Was your font colour white when you were writing to say that you didn't write much? 🤣

You are an awesome writer, keep writing and as promised I will be always shine for you ❤️ 😆😆😆

🤗

-Sarika

Originally posted by: .serenade.

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MJ! ❤️ How much I hate you DJ -.- When I saw your reserve, I was like, who the hell is she and ab isne reserve kar diya toh I don't even know if it will get unreserved. They I saw MJ and I realised that was you. Mind informing us beforehand -_________-
Firstly- Aren't you supposed to be away till Saturday?! 🤣 Jaa rae hun, jaa rae hun. Tum log toh bas mujhe bhaga hi do. Weekends pe bhi nae aaungi ab mai 🤣

Okay, coming to the OS.
I loved it! You have a way with words, angst is your forte and this was pure love! <3 This gadha Manik has so many layers, so many things I could talk about for hours. And you get him so well. The way you described his inner turmoil, I'm in awe! Yeah, angst is pure unadulterated love for me ❤️ I know, tabhi toh i love this gadha despite all his gadhapan. :') Writing a character like Manik is what I as writer have always desired. When I get free, I want to experiment Nandini too but Manik is just
So realistic and true to his character. Hayyyeee! Thank you 😳
This OS was perfection! Bas. ❤️ :3
Loved reading it. <3
Keep em' coming! :3

Originally posted by: TheShipWeirdo

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Will unres, PROMISE!

Originally posted by: Flame.Of.Rose

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">IF YOU DIDN'T UN-RESERVED IMMA SHOOT YOU BAS -.- NO BUSHY WILL BE ABLE TO SAVE YOU FROM MY WRATH😡</font>

Bushra won't save me either way. Zoha hain na 😎
But did you update that other story of yours? The one where I UNRES-ED

Da way U described Manik's inner turmoil..Wow..👏
I simply cnt get enough ov ur writing Aditi..
BTW its nt torture its a pleasure 2 read ur posts..😛
Waiting 4 ur nxt 'Torture'..😆

Originally posted by: Flame.Of.Rose

You won't leave me ever, right? Sigh. Where I am stuck *shakes head*

I love andhera and you promised to shine 🤣

Originally posted by: TheFaerieQueen

*nods head* ...NEVER...(*manik style*)

*ducked the punch*😎

Originally posted by: TheShipWeirdo

Bushra won't save me either way. Zoha hain na 😎
But did you update that other story of yours? The one where I UNRES-ED