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AND HEREEE :o
To myself, I am being the harshest. Everytime I mock her, I mock away the prayers I was in. Whenever I break her I elevate the intensity of the dark I hate even more. When I hurt her I break the promise I did to her. While I shatter her, the trust I always craved for falls apart. Whilst I bleak her, I give up on the good she made me believe in. When her light goes away along with it goes the time when I wasn't afraid of dark for she was with me. While she is awakening from her dreams, I see myself in a black hole where I can't even see her. With her beliefs goes my wish to live. While I crush her I scratch myself until I am torn apart.
THIS ^^^ KAMEENI You just. idek what to say after what you've written. Your words have this ability to pull the reader in so so badly, you just consume them and burn them with the way you weave words. THEY, YOUR WORDS, Are so so POWERFUL. They leave such an impact and so poetically woven, so beautifully matched and lyrical and soo descriptive, flowing and so apt to the point. AHH I feel like highlighting every single line cos it all is pure pure gold! I LOVEEES. YOU EXPLAINED MY MANIK SOO BEAUTIFULLY. :'))
His turmoil wrenches you man, it tugs at your gut and makes you fall in a puddle of warmth and love for this loveless, warmthless, cold and lonely boy <33 he's a mere boy of 19 and to have let go of so so much. The way you've described his feelings is love. His loss, his light gone, the prayers he sought gone, everything gone. and my baby had to suffer so so much :(( he tears my heart apart. your words are so so powerful here, especially the part where you say he can't ask dhruv for his nandu his light <33
AHH MY MANIK IS SOOO. AND YOU JUST MADE IT EVEN DEEPER AND SO INTENSE. KAMEENI Tu bas magician hai <33 weaving words like magic and consuming us and making us feel so so much and making us feel exactly what manik be feeling, my lonely, scarred baby <33 ;(( No one to reign. Such an apt description.
I love the way you describe povs btw <33 i think i said it so many times haha!🤣
To myself, I am being the harshest. Everytime I mock her, I mock away the prayers I was in. Whenever I break her I elevate the intensity of the dark I hate even more. When I hurt her I break the promise I did to her. While I shatter her, the trust I always craved for falls apart. Whilst I bleak her, I give up on the good she made me believe in. When her light goes away along with it goes the time when I wasn't afraid of dark for she was with me. While she is awakening from her dreams, I see myself in a black hole where I can't even see her. With her beliefs goes my wish to live. While I crush her I scratch myself until I am torn apart.
THIS ^^^ KAMEENI You just. idek what to say after what you've written. Your words have this ability to pull the reader in so so badly, you just consume them and burn them with the way you weave words. THEY, YOUR WORDS, Are so so POWERFUL. They leave such an impact and so poetically woven, so beautifully matched and lyrical and soo descriptive, flowing and so apt to the point. AHH I feel like highlighting every single line cos it all is pure pure gold! I LOVEEES. YOU EXPLAINED MY MANIK SOO BEAUTIFULLY. :'))
His turmoil wrenches you man, it tugs at your gut and makes you fall in a puddle of warmth and love for this loveless, warmthless, cold and lonely boy <33 he's a mere boy of 19 and to have let go of so so much. The way you've described his feelings is love. His loss, his light gone, the prayers he sought gone, everything gone. and my baby had to suffer so so much :(( he tears my heart apart. your words are so so powerful here, especially the part where you say he can't ask dhruv for his nandu his light <33
AHH MY MANIK IS SOOO. AND YOU JUST MADE IT EVEN DEEPER AND SO INTENSE. KAMEENI Tu bas magician hai <33 weaving words like magic and consuming us and making us feel so so much and making us feel exactly what manik be feeling, my lonely, scarred baby <33 ;(( No one to reign. Such an apt description.
I love the way you describe povs btw <33 i think i said it so many times haha!🤣
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