Manan SS Jealousy Kills Part 7 updated on pg33(Index on Pg4,Completed) - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hii guys i am back with another update.
Thanks for the comments and likes.
Actually sorry because the starting is lil boring or uh can say not good because my Advisor(Yashu) was not feeling well so plz bear with it.

Part 2

Next After in Hospital.
Fab 5 entered the hospital room after a tiring day at college.
Manik and all- hii buddy how are you.
Cabir- hii guys. I am fyn. Getting bored but cant do anything they are not discharging me.
Mukti- aww baby. Yahi pe reh chup chap.
Cabir- fyn yahi hoon. Acha guys ne mom ne kuch bat ki.
Aliaa- no cabir. Everyone was sad.
Manik said to divert the attention- guys i had a doubt on harshad but he himself confessed that he only sent goons to beat cabir.
Aliaa- bhai did ol this.
Manik- yup. I am sorry aliaa but i will not leave him. But this time we should make a plan to trap him.
Mukti- right. So aliaa are you in.
Aliaa- ya because this time bhai crossed all limits.
Cabir- great. But we need a person who is close to harshad so that we know his every move.
Manik- but who is the one? Think guys.
Dhruv- i guess i know.
Mukti- who?
Dhruv- nandini.
Aliaa- and why will she help us?
Dhruv- for navya. Today only she was saying that she is worried for navya. Harshad is not a good guy he is cheating on her.
Mukti- are you sure she will help us?
Dhruv- ya still i ll ask from her.
Manik was worried for nandini he didnt want to involve her in this plan
Guys i think we should not involve her in this plan.
Mukti- yeh hum usi se puch lenge so shut up.

It was now evening.
Mukti- dhruv tu nandini ko call kar and ask her.
Dhruv dialed the call and suddenly nandini entered the hospital room with ringing phone.
Everyone's attention was now on the door.
Dhruv- main tumnhe hi call kar raha tha.
Nandini- ya i was checking that only. Actually i cqme here to meet cabir and ask for his health.
Dhruv- oh ok.
Nandini- hii cabir. How are you?
Cabir- i am fine nandini.
Nandini- good
Mukti- nandini actually we need one help from you.
Nandini- ya tell na.
Mukti- actually we want to trap harshad so that he himself confess his crimes and for that we need a person who is with him in college.
And dhruv told us that you want to help navya. So will you help us?
Nandini- yes i am ready for it. I want my best friend to be in safe hands and harshad is not safe. For sure.
Mukti- cool. Thanku so much.
Nandini- its ok.
Cabir noticed a poly bag in nandini's hands
Cabir- whats that?
Nandini- actually i bought some home made food for you guys. You live here and always eat canteen food. Thats why.
Cabir- wow nandini love ypu i am also bored of eating this hospital food. Plz fast fast open the box.
Mukti- bhuk toh mujhe bhi lag rahi hai. Can i also have?
Nandini- i bought it for ol.
Aliaa- i too want to have.
As they opened the lunch box it had raita, rajma chawal, mix veg and chapatis.
Cabir- wow nandini yeh sari toh manik ki favourite dishes hai. How do you know his likes?
Nandini was hesitant- vo vo actually.
Mukti- shut up cabir use kaise pata its a coincidence. Ryt?
Nandini- yes.
Manik was happy to see that sge still cares for her.
Everyone had their lunch in evening. Because of shortage of plates nadini and mukti shared the plate, dhruv and aliaa and cabir and manik.
Cabir- the food is fab.
All- seriously its amazing.

After sometime they all were sitting chit chatting, when manik was rubbing his neck because of pain.
Cabir- guys aaj tum sab ghar jao and sleep properly.
Mukti- aur tere sath kon rukega?
Aliaa- i will stay here. Yesterday i had my proper sleep.
Nandini- i can also stay if you guys dont mind

Till now manik was ok but as soon as he heard nandini staying the jealous manik was back.
Manik- its ok i will stay you dont have to say. Your chachi will mind.
Dhruv also said for alia- yes i will also stay.
Nandini- no i ll talk to her. And aliaa is also here so she wont mind.
Now manik has no choice.
Cabir - so guys its decided today only aliaa and nandini will stay. You rest go home and sleep. He said with a smirk on his face.

After some discussion mukti left. Manik and dhruv were not ready to leave.
They were coming again and again with a excuse. Sometimes for asking water, sometimes for food. Cabir was enjoying all this. And the girls were not aware of there coming again and again. Or i should aay they were aware wlbut were pretending as if nothing happened.

Precap- cabir-nandini-aliaa talk.

For pms send me buddy request on Vish_Manan.

So guys i want to clear one thing. I know its a manan SS and i should show there moments but manan are not in a state to accept the happenings. Nandini is hurt and manik too. So thats why i am showing more of gang scenes. If anyone has any objection can tell me.
Bye gud night sweet dreams.
Love Vish ❤️

Edited by MagsDhingra - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
Hey Vish🤗
Fanatastic update😃
Fab5 decided to take help from Nandu
N there she is 😆
Nandu came with home made food aww😳
So aliya n nandu will stay with cabir😉
Precap looks soo interesting
Plz continue asap😳
Tnx 4 pm😃
Love Aman❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
Firstly, thanks for the PM!😊

As for this -great update, and I totally understand about the Fab 5 involvement in this story right now. Completely makes sense.

Terrific job, I am very excited for your next update.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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thank you for the pm Vish... its awesome update...i love that Nandini is ready to help Fab 5 against Harshad ...and i m enjoying the story...thanks once again...plz update it soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amzng updt Maggie... Loved it..
Canir-nandu-aliya convo...!!!!

Its going yo be intrstng...
I love cabir's character in d shw these days...

Haha love guru banngaya manan k...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
Aww nandu brought food for them. Looking forward for cabniya talk. update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
That was a good update plzz update next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
Awesome update
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
Nice update
Thank u for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
thanks for the pm...

nice update...

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