Manan SS Jealousy Kills Part 7 updated on pg33(Index on Pg4,Completed) - Page 12

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anju10

lovely update waitng for next part

thanxx for the pm
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Thnku so much dear. 😊
Ur welcome.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aerial

wow it was great please pm me 😳

and continue soon

Thnku dear 😊
For pm plz send me buddy requeSt on account Vish_Manan.

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RomComFan

Wonderful update... thank you so much for the PM!😊

Sooo... pretty much everyone except Mukti knows the truth now huh?

Loved that Manik came in @ the end, how sweet he is to his Nandhu.

Looking forward to your next update!😊

No dhruv also don't know and aliaa alsi dont know full truth.
Thnku so much 😊
Ok
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thnku dear 😊
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Thnku dear. Its so cute. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aman1605

Hey Vish🤗

It was a lovely update❤️
Now Nandu n Alia r friends
N Cabir gosh i love his character in the show😉
Plz continue asap😳
Thanks 4 pm😃
Love Aman❤️

I too love his character and now abhimanyu also.
Thnku so much😊
Ok i ll.
Ur welcome.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hii guys. How are you guys?
I am really sorry for the extra late update.
See its Christmas we should not be angry.
Merry Christmas guys.
Ok so in my story abhimanyu(zain imam) is nandini's real brother who has come to Mumbai now.

Part-4

In hospital
Nandini got up early and left so that she dont have to face manik. She left a letter that she is going.
Manik came after sometime and read the letter and was disappointed

In College.
Nandini was talking to aliaa when she heard someone calling her.
Boy- hii beautiful.
Nandini heard it and her face lit up with hapiness.
She turned and hugged the man she recognise his voice ahe dont want to see his face.
Nandini- bhai. Aap aa gaye. I missed you so much. Love you.
Abhimanyu hugged her back, he broke the hug when found her crying.
Abhimanyu- aww my baby. Chup now i am here. He kissed her forehead.
This whole scene was witnessed by manik and he was boiling with anger.
He didnt think of anything and went to them grabbed her wrist and took her to other corner.

Manik- sharam nahi aati tumhe us ladke se chipakte hue.
Nandini- excuse me. How does it matter to you? You did what you wanted to do so now bqck off.
Manik- you.. Hr was cut off by abhi.
Abhi- dude what is wrong with you?
Manik- dude just back off its between me and nandini. Who are you?
Abhi- i am his bro
You tell who are you?
Manik- i am his.. Wait what you said? You are his bro? And his face lit up.
Abhi- ya.
Manik hugged him tightly and in excitement said him saale( in english its brother in law)
Abhi and nandini were shocked for their own reasons.
Abhi- dude just back off.
Manik came to his senses a lil- oh yes. I am sorry. And went from there.
Abhi- what was that?
Nandini- let it be bhai. Come i ll show uh the college.
Abhi- ya sure.

Nandini went to harshad and navya in anger- what does he think of himself?
Harshad- kya hua nandini?
Nandini- that manik. I hate him. You know he said that you called boys to beat cabir. I want to pay him nicely for all this.
Harshad had a smirk on his face- i ll also help you if you want.
Nandu- sachi?
Navya- and me too.
Nandu- wow guys. Lets do it. So what's the plan?
Harshad- lets think. Umm... Do one thing somehow bring cabir at football ground and we ll attack him.
Nandu- sounds like a plan.
Harshad didnt tell her d full plan.
Nandu- ok guys i have to leave.
Navshad- ok bye.
Nandini went but stood outside to listen if they talk something else.
Harshad- ab aayega maza. Is manik ko toh aisa sabak sikhaunga ki yaad rakhega.
Navya- aisa kya karenge aap?
Harshad- i ll attack his hands his face so that his career and reputation is destroyed.
nandini was shocked to listen this. She never expected such ugly plan.
She was scared for manik.
She went home all crying.

On the other hand all friends reached at nandini's house to give company as noone was there like chachi and Chacha. Manik was a lil late he as he has some work.

Nadini's home
Tring tring.
Abhi opened the door and saw 4 boys and girls standing on door with shocked expressions. Mukti in front, abhi skipped a heartbeat looking at her.
Abhi came out of his trance- yes. Who are you?
Mukti- same question who are you? Yeh hmari friend ka ghar hai?
Abhi- ohkk. Hii i am abhimanyu murthi. Nandini's brother.
Cabir- oh hii. She told about you.
Aliaa- yaa. Yesterday only. Mukti and dhruv were looking at them with When-did-that-happen? Expression.
Cabir- vo kal jab aayi thi toh she told us.
Mukti- ok. Umm so hi i am mukti.
Aliaa- i m aliaa
Dhruv- i m dhruv
Cabir- i m cabir. And if uh dont mind can we come in?
Abhi- oh ya. I am so sorry. Come come.
They all got seated.
Cabir- actually today Nandu was alone so we thought of accompying her. Only if you dont mind.
Abhi-oh no no. Thats really sweet of you.
Abhi- so what will you guy have for dinner. Its evening.
Mukti blurred out- how do you know hum yaha homemade food khane aaye hai?
Abhi- haha.
And than Mukti realized he was asking in general and they are caught now. And gave a sheepish smile
Abhi- its ok. So tell me.
But they were disturbed by the door bell.
Cabir opened the door and saw a pale nandu who was crying like hell.
Cabir- nandu kya hua?
Nandu just hugged him and cried uncontrollably. Everyone came listening her cries.
Mujti- kya hua nandini?
Nandini was just ranting- manik kaha hai. He ll harm him. Manik kaha hai. Manik.
Cabir- dhruv call manik and ask where he is?
Dhruv- ya. He called him, manik told he ll be here in 5 mins.
Abhi came forward to control her- kya hua mere baby ko?
Nandu- bhai. He hugged him tightly. Bhai he said he ll harm My manik. He said he ll destroy him.
Aliaa- but who?
Except aliaa and cabir all were shocked to see nandini's concern for manik and claiming him as hers.
Abhi- kon bacha?
Nandu-harshad.
All were shocked.
Mukti was in awe seeing abhi taking care of her and controlling her as if she is his kid.
Nandu- bhai aap kuch nh hone doge na manik?
Abhi- nahi baby hum sab hai.
All- yes Nandu calm down.
She was a lil calm downm than entered manik.
And seeing his face all that convo of harshad came to her mind.
She just ran to manik and hugged him started crying again.
Manik- nandu kya hua?
Nandini was just crying and crying she was not in her senses.
She took his hands and repeatedly kissed it. All were shocked.
She than remembered that harshad will destroy his face so she placed numerous kisses all over his face.
Nandini- manik tumhe kuch nahi hoga hum sab hai na. Tumhe... And she passed out.
Manik and all shouted nandini.
Manik lifted her and took her to room.

Doctor came and checked her she was fine
Abhi- doc use kya hua?
Doc- nothing just because of stress she passed out. She is now sleeping. Within an hour she ll be fine.

Precap- manik- kya zarurat thi usse is sab mein involve karne ki.
Mukti- yeh kya tha manik. Kya hume kuch pata hona chahiye?
Everyone cheering nandu. Playing food fight. Masti.

Note:- and if you want pms buddy Vish_Manan and tell me if i should continue or not because i am getting very less replies. If you want i wont continue from now.

So how was it guys?
Guys i dont get much replied plz tell me i should continue or not?
Bye take care.
Love Vish ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsm update
loved it
very nicely written
continue soon
very excited to read on
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Posted: 10 years ago
😊awsome update...
continue soon...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very good update Vaishali..loved it.but i would love it more if you elaborate things a little more it will give a clear idea about everything..just a little bit..i know describing everything is not possible..yet of you can..but your story telling is nice,thanks for the pm😊

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