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Originally posted by: charminggenie

Oh my!! lovely perspective. You kept her so real . This is the Alya that I like and want her to be. Somebody who struggles with letting go and yet understands that somethings are not meant to be.

I like how she is in her own world, the bubble is understandable considering her age and life experiences. She still have enough sense to know where her brother goes wrong. She is slowly blossoming in this fabulous person .

I do feel that her relationship with Manik would never have survived with or without Nandini. With him, she is too content , doesn't grow, it enables her to live in her fancy world. But without him, she is like a kid , fumbling yet learning.

This is really beautiful and sensitive!👏 You did a terrific job.

I hope to read more from you on the forum in the future.😃

Originally posted by: TheShipWeirdo

Yes, isn't that so? She is more than just some eye-candy and more than just some meaningless bitch. She is a girl who is young and naive but oh-so-real. She is pining for the one guy she has ever loved, the one guy who she has been with for seven damn years, the one guy who was her first in everything. What's so wrong in that?

And yes, she truly cares for her friends. She did start to help Dhruv first for her own benefits but later on, she has started caring for him more and more. And she's good for Dhruv, because yes, she brings out his real, carefree, lively self which I love. She cares about her friends and like Mukti said, she has made lots of sacrifices too.

She is such an interesting character! An absolute delight to watch and read about.

Originally posted by: RomComFan

This is really beautiful and sensitive!👏 You did a terrific job.

I hope to read more from you on the forum in the future.😃

i recently really started likin Alya n ur OS kinda mde me lyk her evn mre..here she seems sooo real..jst lyk da Alya all ov us probably wnt..
its really nyc to finally read smethng frm her P.O.V..
Kip writing mre..😃

Originally posted by: TheBlueAngel

i recently really started likin Alya n ur OS kinda mde me lyk her evn mre..here she seems sooo real..jst lyk da Alya all ov us probably wnt..
its really nyc to finally read smethng frm her P.O.V..
Kip writing mre..😃

Originally posted by: LoonyLuna

Everything you wrote sums up what I feel about her character.😊 Forgetting first love is very difficult.Some take years to get over their first love.Alya loved Manik for seven long years.

It is not Manik's fault that he fell in love with Nandini.One can't decide whom they should love.

But it is not Alya's fault either.She is bound to be bitter.After all her fear about Nandini came true Is'nt it??

If I was in her place I would have been shattered.

She is handling it much better.😊

This was lovely, and I love how you've built on Alya's character, and it resembles very much as to how I want her to be in the future - Real, yet very grounded to her feelings, and someone who has learnt to accept her life. Because for once, I thought those 7 years she spent with Manik, she had become stagnant, without him, she is a lot more free, open and blossoming into a wonderful character - Loved your take on her and through her eyes. I hope the writers of the show have something similar to this planned for Alya.

sincerely hope that you will continue story this text that be a second part ... 😃Since this is so good ... 👏👏eagerly wait the second part ...I'm too demanding.😉 I sincerely hope that the CV that reads your text, this could be in the series ...⭐️

This was beautiful. It was amazingly written. And quite accurate I could say. I could imagine this happening the show. You portrayed her feelings really well, and how she would actually handle them being together.