Hi Guys am a manan lover as well and was thinking how Nandini could forgive Manik and our respect for him could be restored.
My hindi not good so writing the entire scene in English.
Please give me your feedback this is the first time am writing a scene, I could not stop myself. I really hope the CV's show a scene like this
SCENE
Nandini hears about Manik Fall and cannot help herself from coming to see him
Scene - Manik House
Manik is totally drunk and is talking to his imagination of Nandu at the pool side
Manik - Nandu am very very, actually sorry cannot change what has happened, what I have done, it cannot take away your heart break and your tears.
Nandini enters and sees Manik totally drunk and talking to himself
Manik - Nandini I wish I had never come into your life, I wish I had never fallen in love with you.
But you were the best thing that ever happened to me, I so wish that Dhruv did not love you and I would not have to break your heart and let you go from my life.
Nandini listens to Manik and is shocked, her tears are flowing and she has frozen and is remembering Maniks words and sensing the pain in them now, which she did not feel or failed to see when he had spoken to her and shattered her world.
She moves towards Manik and Kneels down in front of him
Nandini - Manik (cups his face with tears in her eyes)
Manik looks at her and still thinks she is his imagination
Manik - Nandini I love you more then anything in this world and I cant live without you, but I love Dhruv and he loves you and he is a good guy, you deserve the best and he will keep you very happy.
why are you crying Nandu you, why you trying to console me, you should hate me, stop crying I cant se your tears they are killing me.
I hope you are my imagination, bcoz I don't have it in me to break your heart again and watch you broken and defeated.
Nandini - Manik please stop talking, enough close your eyes and go to sleep.
Manik - I cant close my eyes bcoz every time I do I see your heartbroken face and your tears flowing down your cheeks bcoz of me and its killing me.
but even with my eyes open I see reality and that's is killing me too
Today am scared of the darkness again, bcoz you will not shine for me like my star, I will not be in your prayers again and you will never trust me ever again.
Now only in my imagination(Khabo main) , will you shine for me like a star, hamesha and only in my imagination I will be in your prayers hamesha and only in my imagination will you trust me hamesha.
Nandini hugs Manik and they both are crying bitterly.
Nandini does not know what to say, she just sits with Manik in her arms hugging him and crying her heart out.
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