MaNan FF:Irrevobaly In Love With You *COMPLETED wid EPILOGUE* - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
u r just amazing...its awesome...plzz continue this asap...i cant wait..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
i really hope something like this happens in the show...
instead of manik leaving nandani...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice story
loved the previous chapter
that ws amazing
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It was a start of a new fresh day in SPACE. Actually it was a start of many things new in the college. Since 1 month it was always a beginning of Cabir being gay and opens about it but from today it was Mukti trying to get over her nightmares. For Dhruv it was an initiation of a new start of his relation with Nandini and for Manik and Nandini -it was falling head over heels with each other all over again. Fab 5 had found a new path to explore their friendship and Harshad wanted this start to be the end of Fab 5's friendship.

Nandini entered the college all happy to find Fab 5 in the entrance sitting altogether and Manik laughing away with all of them. she was happy that they were together and happier that their bond was so strong that could stand against so much of odds created by Harshad. It was a pure relation of these five people who wanted nothing from each other but togetherness. They had complaints and demands with the whole world except each other. Manik found Nandini smiling and looking at the group and so did the rest of them. Manik noticed Dhruv looking at Nandini lovingly and he had to claim his love

Manik: so my dear Nandu is here.

Dhruv: Manik...don't trouble her

Manik: Dhruv...I have not even said anything. I am just wishing her .OK so you want me to be polite to her and wish her right.

So Mani went straight up to Nandini and hugged her and told: Good Morning Nandini

Everyone got up in shock but the person who was shocked to the core was Nandini because what Manik did after that was eye popping.

He kissed her in her cheeks and said-it's a pleasure meeting you today morning.

With this Manik turned towards FAB 5 and with their looks Manik could make out that they were shocked.

Manik: see guys I can be polite as well. But Nandini this is rude. I wished you good morning and you did not even reply...

And he made a sad pout.

Nandini: ...goo...good...morning ...Manik

Cabir: Manik don't you think it became over polite...

Manik: really did it Nandu and made an innocent look and smirked towards her.

Nandini was blushing and more embarrassed so she ran away from there.

Manik: Don't worry Cabir. When FAB 5 became over rude to her I don't think being over polite should be a problem. Right Dhruv?

Dhruv: yah. Guys even I think we should shake hands of friendship wit Nandini...

Alya was shocked but then she knew about Dhruv's feeling so she also said: yah...I don't mind...we could be friends at least...

Manik: see...3 out of fab5 want to shake hands of friendship, so whats your thought on it Mukti and Cabir?

Mukti: if all of you feel that then I too have no problem as I don't have any personal issue with her so yah...

Cabir: and I am already in debted to her for handling my issue so well.

Manik: so everyone agrees with me. So let's extend our hands of friendship yah...

Mukti: but she can't be a part of Fab 5...

Manik: Mukti...you are impossible...

And everyone started laughing and moved towards canteen.

Here on the other side in the girl's washroom

Nandini reached the washroom and she was blushing red like a tomato.

Nandini: what happened sometime back...Ai appa...why is my heart beating so fast as if I am getting heart attack? OH god...why am I feeling like this...Manik has touched me so many times but I never felt like this before...

But then a voice spoke and she knew instantly whose was it

Manik: so how did you feel today?

Nandini: Manik what are you doing here? Its girl's washroom

Manik:so

Nandini: Manik get out...someone will come in...and what were you doing there in front of your friends? We have to sort out Dhruv and you ae here... Just go Manik...

Manik: ok...but first I want to know when I will get my kiss

Nandini tried avoiding his gaze but Manik hold her

Nandini: what kiss?

Manik: oh...really...so you don't remember the challenge...

Nandini was still avoiding his eyes so Manik held her chin up and said

Manik: Nandini Moorthy...I romanced with you in front of the college openly now it's your turn

Nandini: that...that was not romancing...

Manik looked at her with questioning eyes

Nandini: you don't romance with me like that when you are with me alone

And she bit her lip realsing her mistake

Manik: Achha...so how do I romance...? (He moved in for a kiss when Nandini pushed him slightly)

Nandini: that what you have to show to the whole college...and if you do that I promise to kiss you then and there itself...now get out from here Manik...

And Nandini came out of the washroom and the girl outside started shouting

Girl: what were you doing...?

Manik: Nandini Moorthy...you arre driving me crazy and smiled to himself and came out of the washroom and the girls started gossiping once again.

IN the canteen

Mukti: and here he comes...

Manik: was sup

Mukti: Manik seriously where do you go and get lost in a moment?

Manik: ummm...Mukti you are not a boy right so...

Manik: ok guys...we need to buck up now...I know Musiccana is over and we have won it but this does not mean we stop practicing. In fact I have a brilliant idea going on my mind so let's go

Fab 5 moved out of the canteen only to be encountered by NH3.

MAnik: And looks whose here. HARSHAD...I heard you went into taking anti depressant...very bad Harshad...why did you waste money in buying it...you could have asked Mukti...she just left it and she had many...she would have given it to you...

He kept his hands on his shoulders and said

Manik: we share things in friendship Harshad...that what friend are for sharing and caring...right Nandini...Fab 5 new friend...and then therees some quote also right Dhruv...A friend...in need...

Fab 5 smiled at the taunts Manik was passing on.

Cabir: yah Manik absolutely...A friend in need is a friend indeed.

Manik: Exactly...

Harshad: Manik just from one performance don't jump so much. You have just won Musiccana...and your performance was not the worth of wining...Its just that our performance got spoilt by...

He looked at Nandini...

Manik: Losing is losing whatever the worth was of our performance...it was worth wining that why we stand here and you are wherever you were...And about the performance...thanks for reminding I forgot something

Manik went in between in the canteen while the rest of the fab5 looked at each other questioningly.

Manik: guys...as you all know Fab 5 has won the musiccana...so today at 1 pm we have a special performance of ours exclusively for students of SPACE. Everyone be at the auditorium and Harshad...you are cordially not invited...

With that Manik walked off with the Fab 5 behind him.

Edited by Shreyame - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yay.. m at 1st
Sch a wonderful update.. Kissing in cheek.. Over polite.. he should be yaar after all BF's GF..Nyway dis is not romancing.. 3 cheers 4 Nandu. Manik.. brains too mch arranging 4 d dance... Damn sure over romance.. but can u please settle d Musicana.. Ur story lil diff.. so can't get wid d flow.. Has she did intentionally...NH3 lost cause Nandu sacrificed or wat? Please clear it.. nd do continue😉

Well I forgot 2 write.. Manik should sing this song.. Suits his situation...
Edited by mi_cheeky_me... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
😊awsome update...yaar...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
cont soon plz plz. Its great cnt wait to read what things hd manik planned for nandu. update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
well thank you first...
you will know in next update why NH3 lost?And how Nandini is responsible for the lost?

And yah...Steal my girl of 1D for MAnik to sing...😆😆😆😆😆😆

Originally posted by: mi_cheeky_me...

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Yay.. m at 1st
Sch a wonderful update.. Kissing in cheek.. Over polite.. he should be yaar after all BF's GF..Nyway dis is not romancing.. 3 cheers 4 Nandu. Manik.. brains too mch arranging 4 d dance... Damn sure over romance.. but can u please settle d Musicana.. Ur story lil diff.. so can't get wid d flow.. Has she did intentionally...NH3 lost cause Nandu sacrificed or wat? Please clear it.. nd do continue😉

Well I forgot 2 write.. Manik should sing this song.. Suits his situation...

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Everyone was waiting for the FAB 5 to perform.

FAB 5-the FABULOUS 5 people of the music world

IN the NH3 practice room

Harshad: What the hell does that Manik think of himself? Who the hell is he?

Nandini: Harshad calm down na...we will win some other comp...

Harshad: Nandini...just shut up...just shut up and get lost from here...

Nandini: how can you talk to me like this? It's been 1 month since MUSICANA...I have explained you so many times...and that day Rishab needed me more...

Harshad: Nandini...just leave right now...just go...

Navya: Nandini just go...right now...

Nandini: But Navya...

Navya: Please...he did not mean it...he will calm down...just go from here

With that Nandini left the practice room in tears and sat on the stairs. Dhruv came there and saw her sitting alone.

Dhruv: When we sit alone thinking of our problems it tends to increase more and look big. But if we share the pain is less and even the problem looks smaller.

Nandini: It's nothing of that sort. Don't worry and she smiled

Dhruv: So what are you doing here all alone?

Nandini: WO...ummm.

Dhruv: look Nandini...if you are thiking about our talk yesterday and worrying...dont worry because you have 1 weeks time.You have enough time to think about it.But enjoy the moemnts right now.BEcause these moments wont come back ever.

Nandini: you are right...these moments are so precious it won't come back ever...You have a performance na?

Dhruv: yah...I was just going there when I saw you here...let's go t together

Nandini: yah...

In the auditorium

Manik: all set guys...

He thought of texting Nandini but then he saw her coming with Dhruv inside the auditorium.

Manik: Dhruv...where are you roaming...we are late...

Dhruv: Manik...I am just ready...Actually Nandini wanted to wish FAb5.

Mukti: yah...so wish and go enjoy our performance.

Nandini: all the best

Manik nodded his head and Nandini went down from the stage.

And the performance started.

Fab 5 first sang Hai junnon from New York.

Manik: Did you guys enjoy it...

The crowd cheered loudly...

Manik: Now a special performance...This performance is out there for all the people falling in love...

He looked at Nandini and then started singing. He walked on the stage with his guitar singing the song...

Dil ka yeh kya raaz hai

Jaane kya kar gaye

Jaise andhero mein tum

Chandani bhar gaye (x2)

He went to Mukti and put his hands over her shoulders and sand...

Kare chaand taaron ko mash'hoor itna kyun

Kambakht inse bhi khoobsoorat hai tu

Then he looked to Nandini and sang...

I Love you tu ru ru yeah...

In the between he went towards Alya and brought her to the center and danced with her as well but his eyes were just fixed on Nandini...

He then went down from the stage and went near Nandini .Nandini got scared that now Manik would dance with her in front of the college but to her surprise he held his hand for the girl standing to the side of Nandini and he danced with her...

Nandini was burning with jealousy...

Din bhar Kare baatein hum

Phir bhi lage baatein adhoori aajkal

Mann ki dehleezon pe koi aaye na

Bas tum zaroori aajkal

Manik then kissed the girls hands and then went to Navya and danced with her...

Manik was actually teasing her and he was having fun seeing her like that.

Abhr main hoon,tu aasmaan hai

Paas hai tu, par kahaan hai

Zidd meri tu nahi, meri aadat hai tu

I love you...

Nandini had enough and she was about to leave the auditorium when she felt someone hold her hand. She looked to see Manik singing and holding her hand. He pulled her towards him and caressed her cheeks. He then turned her around and hugged her from backside making all the eyes in the hall pop out...

Abhi kabhi main khud se hoon yeh puchhta

Main tere qaabil bhi hoon kya

Itna toh mujhe hai maaloom

Milke tujhe behtar main insaan ban gaya

Nandini was embarrassed so she tried going away and Manik pulled her gain and with this she landed on his chest and her hair was on her face. Manik put the hair back to its place making everyone shocked to the core...

thoda thoda tujh se seekha

Pyaar karne ka tareeka

Dil ke khuda ki mujh pe inaayat hai tu

I love you...

He then kissed her forehead and still sang the song...

Dil ka yeh kya raaz hai

Jaane kya kar gaye

Jaise andhero mein tum chandani bhar gaye

He was still dancing with her and singing while Nandini was going weak in her knees. She was getting shivers down her spine every time Manik touched her.

Kare chaand taaron ko mashoor itna kyun

Kambakht inse bhi khoobsoorat hai tu

He then lifted her up and then put her down taking a turn. At this instant flowers started dropping from above and everyone started clapping and hooting. The people burst many different papers and other items and made it look lovely. Party poppers were burst and snows sprays were showered.

I Love you oo...

He stopped singing but still hold her and everyone was shouting and hooting... and looked in her eyes as if saying

I did this all for you, now it's your turn...

Nandini was so overwhelmed that she did not realize that she was moving forward to kiss him. But Manik knew that there were many people around and there were videos being taken as well. Nandini was about to kiss him on his lips when Manik brought his cheeks in the front and she kissed him there...The flower petals were dropping, everyone was clapping. This moment was so special for Nandini but Manik had to handle the people who were all making speculations about his relation with Nandini and he knew that this was definitely not the time for everyone to know about his secret relation with Nandini. He already had invited himself trouble from Fab 5 after looking at their shocked faces.

So he left Nandini and brought her to the stage holding her hands. Everyone there was wondering what was Manik up to...

Manik: thank ou so much...Nandini Moorthy...and Navya...who showed sportsmanship in SAPCE...though being from our competitor bands they still performed with us...although they did not sing...it was heart touching to see them dancing and enjoying in our success...TAHnkyou...

And with that the performance got over but Manik had lot more questions to answer to FAB 5.



PRECAP

Scene 1

Dhruv:After what all ahppened today,I have something to confess to you guys...I LOVE NANDINI

Everyone shocked.

Scene 2

Mukti:MAnik we are clubbing...you wanna join

Manik: no Mukti i have a terrible headache.You all carry on...I will come late or i might not come as well.

Scene 3:

In Nandini's bedroom

MAnik:I am impressed with the way Nandini Moorthy kissed me in college...You have guts ..

Nandini:ANd I was impressed with your romanctic side.

MAnik:Really...

They hugged each other when they heard car honking outside...

Scene 4

MAnik:What are Fab 5 doing at your home right now?

Nandini:What would i know?Ask them...Seriously your freinds na land up anywhere.anytime...Now go and hide...



Edited by Shreyame - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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oh god girl what r u planning. Does fab5 knows about manan? what manan is planning to do about dhruv? How harshad cn be so mean? so mny questions and only you know the answer. update soon. Awesome story. plz cont soon.

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