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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nujhatt

when do u upload next????? its quite late...plsss plsss update soonnn...plsss...



My god..You are literally scolding me like my teacher for not doing assignment😆
Done with the chapter...
As soon as I proof read I will update
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zainaliya-12

This was amazing, plz do pm me the next part



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RECAP

Manik does not let go of Nandini after talking with her.

Fab 5 out on a chilling spree with Nandini at Manik's farmhouse

Listen to the song Tumse hi Tumse from Anjana Anjani.Here is the link

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CP_mJ9gZg2A

It was a fresh new morning.

Manik came out of Malhotra Mansion and asked the driver to get the car.

He said to himself

Manik: Everything will go just as planned Manik. Today all the secrets will be out. I will tell about my relationship to Fab 5.

He took a deep breath and was about to call Fab 5 asking about their arrival when he heard Nyonika call him.

Nyonika: Manik...

Manik: phew...Yes Nyonika...

Nyonika: Good Morning! Good to see you wake up so early. You could have slept for some more time, it's just 6 and I saw you come home at 4.

Manik: Thanks for the concern but no thanks...Keep it for your associates. And since when did you start caring for my arrival and departure...Planning to open an airlines business...

Nyonika: Don't be sarcastic Manik...It's just that I went to your room...

Manik: uhoh...Come back again...You went to my room...for what?

Nyonika: Let's not spoil our day by these useless talks...However I am late for my meeting...

MAnik: I am glad you had an early realization...Nice...

Nyonika was about to go when the care taker came and gave Manik the farmhouse keys.

Caretaker: Manik baba...here are the farmhouse keys...

Nyonika: Farmhouse keys...Don't tell me Manik that you are again getting grounded for I don't know how long...You definitely keep yourself away from these mess...you understand me

Manik: Nyonika...Nyonika...You are getting old...Don't you realize you are bickering so much...Remember our deal...You are not allowed to interfere in my personal space as I don't interfere in your professional world...

Nyonika: Manik...

MAnik: Just go Nyonika...You meeting is of much more worth than me...And then think of a good price I need to pay for staying at the farm house...Although the farm house is in my name but I really don't mind paying the price...So just leave...He then turned towards the driver and said

Manik: Madam ko leker jao...

He opened the door for her and she opened the door from other side making it evident that she was mad.

Manik nodded his head and then closed the door and waved a bye to her.

As soon as she left Fab 5 made an entrance.

Cabir: What a timing...Iron lady just left...

Manik: Was sup...All set...

Cabir: ready to rock and roll the Fab 5 way...

Dhruv: Guys Nandini...

Mukti: Offo Dhruv ...Just calm down ...We are not leaving your NAndini anywhere...After all we are doing everything for her only...

Listening to this Manik and Alya made a face

Alya: Guys. Let's get going...

So everyone sat on the car and headed straight to Nandini's home.

NAndini could not sleep after what Manik said. She knew that she was being pointless but she did not have any other way out. She could not get over the fact that she killed her parents. She knew she is being baseless but she just loved MAnik way too much or maybe she feared just too much.

Her thoughts were interrupted when she heard the doorbell. Chachi went to open the door only to be accompanied by Manik and others. And within 15 minutes Nandini was sitting on the front seat of the jeep with Manik by her side and the rest of the Fab 5 at the back.

Cabir: by the way MAnik, isn't Nandini's Chachi very much impressed by you? She should be impressed by Dhruv this way in a real sense...

Nandini, Manik both felt awkward by the remark.

Manik: Cabir...It's nothing like that...I told you know that she got impressed when NAndini was my

Nandini snapped back at Manik.

Nandini: I was your what...You told them

MAnik smirked at Nandini and then said

Manik: they already know Nandini...that you were my spot...What did you think?

NAndini: I...I thought...nothing...Just concentrate on your driving

All of the others were confused at this conversation.

Mukti: guys...we are also here...

Manik: relax Mukti...Don't need to feel out of place...We were just having a normal conversation...We are no couple to have romantic conversations...Right Nandini...

Manik said teasingly to NAndini.

NAndini snapped back at him.

Nandini: yes. Manik...you are absolutely right...We are not a couple and will never be one...

This hurt MAnik and it stung him deep down. He drove the car increasing the speed.

The rest of the drive was a silent one from Manik's side. He was just responding to Cabir's comments but he did not utter any single word. But somewhere he was happy as Nandini was finally being back to normal teasing and laughing with others. But deep down him knew it straight that her ultimate happiness lied with him. At least his definitely lied with hers.

NAndini and the other members of Fab 5 arrived to Manik's farmhouse to find Harshad and Navya waiting there outside.

Cabir: What is Harshad doing here?

Everyone got out of the jeep and

Harshad: Surprise!

Manik: Keep your surprises to yourself...What are you doing here.

Harshad: Oh come on Manik...I have just accepted my date's invitation.

He said encircling his arms around Navya and looking at Mukti.

Cabir: Harshad...Get your facts straight...You are as uninvited as your date...

Harshad: Really

Manik: Really Harshad. That why you are standing in front of my house and the guards have not opened the door for you yet...

Harshad: So are you MAnik. So don't fly so much...And as far as me being invited Navya will give you the explanation...Right Navya...

He nudged Navya to speak and Mukti was about to say something when Alya caught her hand and nodded her head in disagreement.

Everyone stood there confused when Navya hugged Nandini and said

Navya: Nandini invited me here...

Nandini and everyone stood there shocked.

NAndini: What...

Navya: You don't remember Nandini...Today morning we talked and you shared the plan of Fab 5 taking you out...

She whispered something in Nandini's ear and that changed the color of her face which was noticed by Manik.

Dhruv: Nandini you seriously called her

Mukti: Are you crazy? After all that happened yesterday...you are flaunting your friendship with her...

Manik: Mukti...quiet...She is getting scared

Alya: Manik's right guys...

Harshad: How sweet...So much of love and concern for Nandini. Fab 5

Cabir: cut the crap...

Turning towards NAndini

Cabir: We are waiting for your answer...Did you call Madhubala and this loser

Manik was just observing how Navya pressed Nandini's hand and Nandini spoke but she looked down.

Nandini: aaa...ummm...

Mukti: Speak up

Dhruv: Mukti...calm down

NAndini:...I...Din...

She took a deep breath and said

NAndini: yah...I called ...Nav. ya

Cabir kicked the tyre and Mukti shouted loudly in disagreement.

MAnik: Stop lying Nandini...

Harshad: Manik...When she is saying that she called us why are you trying to act...

Manik pointed a finger at him to keep his mouth shut.

Manik: speak when you are told to speak...

Harshad was about to say something when Manik shouted loudly

Manik: Guards...

Two guards came out of the gate and looked at shock.

Manik: Are you being paid less...When you see me at the door why isn't the door opened yet and the luggage taken in...

Servant 1: Sorry Manik baba. We will do it soon

Servant2: Sorry. Baba. We were busy at the back yard doing your work.

Manik: Don't waste my time saying sorry...Go and do the work.

Dhruv: buddy. Don't take your anger on them...

Mukti: Dhruv's right...We should be angry on someone else.

The servant took the things in and Manik caught hold of Nandini's hand jerking her hand away from Navya and took her inside with the rest of them following.

Nandini: Manik leave my hand

Manik brought her in and left her hand and said

MAnik: Stop lying to me then...Why are you lying that you called Navya

Nandini looked down

NAndini: I am not lying...I

Manik caught Nandini by her shoulder and said

Manik: Look at me and speak

He saw her looking tearfully at him so he left her and took a deep breath.

MAnik: Ram Singh...Get water.

The servant brought water and Manik handed Nandini the glass. His concern was not unnoticed by anyone in the room but everyone chose to be quite except one.

Harshad: What's the problem MAnik...Why are you acting so possessive about NAndini...?

MAnik: NAndini did not call you here...So get lost...

Navya got worried and she said

Navya: How are you so sure...She called me...I am telling you Na

MAnik: And you think I trust you Madhubala...I have better things to do...

Harshad: So don't trust her...Ate last trust your new friend NAndini...

He said quoting it with his fingers.

Mukti: how are you so sure MAnik that NAndini did not call Navya...She is saying it herself..?

Manik: Because I know her well...I trust her...

Everyone looked unconvinced by the reason Manik gave.

Dhruv: Everyone does here Manik...I trust here as well but why did she call Navya

Manik went mad.

Manik: You claim to love her and you don't even know her this much. You can't make out that she is lying...

Dhruv was shocked and so was everyone there.

Cabir: damn

Navya: How are you so sure...I am telling she called me...She is telling the same. Why do you not believe...?

Manik: It's because...

Manik was about to blurt out that he was with her last night.

Harshad: What MAnik...

Aaya: Bhai..please...Just go

Manik: It's because...it's because Nandini did not know about our plan of ours on taking her out...She herself knew it this morning...And we did not give her so much time to talk with you...

Fab 5 was shocked at this revelation and Manik was right. They doubted Nandini just like that. MAnik was right about her.

Navya and Harshad looked at Nandini and Harshad signaled Nandini with his eyes and she said

Nandini: no...No...Manik...I told her when...when...I went to change the dress...

Manik smirked at Nandini knowing how bad she was at lying.

Manik: Really Nandini...So you told her the address as well when you yourself came here for the first time...And I don't remember telling you the place where my farmhouse was...

Cabir: Point to be noted my lord

Cabir said saluting Manik and encircling the other Fab 4 who were by now standing by Nandini.

Manik: Too bad and too sad actually...You should have know it well Harshad...I am Manik Malhotra...So you guys are going yourself or should I call the guards to leave you till the door...

Harshad and Navya threw daggers at Nandini only to be blocked by Manik who stood in front of her.

Manik: Stop giving those South Indian action heroes looks and leave...And yes...Drink the water and go...I can show this much of concern and lauu for you...

Harshad and Navya left.

Manik heaved a sigh of relief and descended on the couch.

Alya: I am sorry guys...Bhai...

Mukti: Alya...Don't be sorry...In fact we are sorry...How did you land up being his sister...

Cabir: yah...so much of contrast...One like a devil and other like a doll

Dhruv: yah...and however your eyes look beautiful without tears...

Mukti: Manik...bro you are a savior...We had already judged Nandini...thanks to you or we would have lost another really good friend...

Alya: But why was she doing this...

Cabir: Lets' Skype and ask her...She is in London ...Guys she is just back of us if only we move ourselves as we are hiding her and she is quite small..

Mukti spoke fast while everyone removed the so called crowd they had created blocking Nandini's view...

Mukti: Look Nandini...I don't know why you are such a big fan of this Madhubala or maybe you are just ...I don't know...But I am sorry

Manik: where is Nandini?

Everyone panicked searching for her and then they saw Nandini down in the garden all lost crying.

Cabir: Guys...it's time for some Fab 5 magic...

Manik: right...let's do it...

Nandini was standing on the garden crying. She left the room as soon as Manik descended on the couch quietly. She was being such a bad girl when Manik was fighting with everyone for her. She was clueless. She did not know what to do and where to go. She wanted to just run away from here when she heard some strumming of guitars and music playing and Manik was standing with guitar and singing for her.

Manik

Ab se koi khushi nahi Jiski tum wajah nahi

Ab se koi din nahi Jiski tum subah nahi

Ab se koi baat nahi Jo tumse na hogi shuru

Ab se koi raah nahi Jo tum sang main mudhoon

Dhruv

Abh ke abhi yeh ho gaya yakeen Yeh zindagi meri ho gayi teri

Manik got jealous that Dhruv was singing such romantic lines for her. So he started singing.

Manik

Abh ke abhi yeh ho gaya yakeen Yeh zindagi meri ho gayi teri

Tumse hi tumse har baat Har baat hai Jab tum ho saath

Cabir

Tumse hi tumse har baat

Har baat hai

Jab tum ho saath

Mukti and Alya

I wait for a sign so I know your mind everyday

I look in the mirror and I see your face

The walls break down down

When you smile at me

And the world's much brighter than the one I see

As I wait for sign so I know

Your mind everyday

I look in the mirror and I see your face

The walls break down down

When you smile at me

And the world's much brighter than the one I see

Nandini was about to fall when Manik hold her.

Manik

Sayaa ban ke tera saya Chalunga sang tere

Hai tanha tu nahi Paaya abh bhi dhoond paaya

Tu jis mein muskura de Woh lamha kyun nahi

Ab thaam loon tujhe ki thokrein mile Jo zindagi ki raah mein

Chupa loon dhoop se Jahan ki main le loon aa tujhe panah mein

Manik saw everyone busy in their own little world. So he slowly left from there.

Dhruv and Cabir

Abh ke abhi yeh ho gaya yakeen Yeh zindagi meri ho gayi teri

Abh ke abhi yeh ho gaya yakeen Yeh zindagi meri ho gayi teri

Tumse hi tumse har baat Har baat hai

Jab tum ho saath Tumse hi tumse har baat

Har baat hai Jab tum ho saath

Cabir was carrying Mukti and he dropped her purposely. He then put his hand forward as a support for her to get up but then hit her with her cap and ran along with Mukti running behind him. She saw Dhruv and Alya also laughing away. NAndini was smiling unknowing looking at them.

Nandini did not see Manik around so she too went towards the other end of the garden. She was searching for him. When she reached there she found the place decorated with flowers and their romantic moment's picture hung on different places and then She saw him with his guitar and he played it along standing in front of her.

MAnik

Anjaana tha ehmiyat se teri Yaar mera guzra kal

Kab jaana tha tere vaaste Hi aaj se hoga har pal

He cupped her face with his one hands and sang

Main karta hoon yeh ilteja Phir se jeena seekhle zara

Nandini tired going away when Manik caught hold of her and playfully hit his head on hers.

Abh ke abhi yeh ho gaya yakeen Yeh zindagi meri ho gayi teri

Abh ke abhi yeh ho gaya yakeen Yeh zindagi meri ho gayi teri

Nandini again tried moving away when Manik pulled her again and danced with her.

Tumse hi tumse har baat Har baat hai

Jab tum ho saath Tumse hi tumse har baat

Har baat hai Jab tum ho saath

He then left her and blindfolded her. He took out a knife and made Nandini hold it.

Manik: Don't worry. I am not trying to get romantic with you. There is knife in your hand and not rose.

NAndini panicked and said

Nandini: Knife...Manik

Manik: Don't panic so much I am not going to murder you. Just trust me and do as I say.

Nandini: But Manik

Manik kept his fingers on her lips and said.

MAnik: Shhh...NAndini...You love me and that the reason you are going far away from me...Isn't it...so prove your love to me. And If I am convinced I promise to leave your life forever.


PRECAP

Manik's test for Nandiini

Fab 5 gets to know of Nandini from Harshad

Mukti slaps Manik

Edited by loquacious_me - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
yaar u alwayzz leave me at cliff point
u stopped😲at wrong place!!
haww fab5 singing for nandhu i soo want it to happenin show😃
nd precap mukthi slapping manik wen will it happen😆
now plzz yaar no more wait continue it sooon plzzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
oohh dear its so awesome but what did actually manik told nandu...to cut his hand but yeah its really a good story
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was amazing, I loved it completely, and thank u so much for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow.. i loved how manik actually proved that navya is lying.. that song sequence was so cute.. i actually adore that song!
Ohh man knife.. what is manik gonna do!?!
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Posted: 10 years ago
😊 wow awsome update...😊
i loved it a lot...😊
the way u presented manik was amazing...👏
the way he controlled the situation...superb...⭐️
manik and knife...???????????😲

the song selection was also beautiful...😊

again...precap...OMG...waiting to know about manik's test for nandu
eagerly waiting to read...😊
.so please continue soon...😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
hey I hope mukti doesnt get angry. I want to see fab5 & nandu standing together against navshad.
And I really want manan entry in college as a couple.
Nice update. cont soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Good work girl! And interesting progress in terms of the equation between Nandini and FAB5!!! 👏

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