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Posted: 10 years ago

RECAP

Fab 5 and Nandini at Manik's house
HArshad and Navya gate crash them and blame Nandini for their appearance
Manik supports Nandini and shoos them away
Fab 5 performs to amke Nandini happy
MAnik sings for Nandini in private

Nandini was really scared. She had no idea as what Manik was up to and the cherry on the cake was Fab 5 was there.

Nandini: MAnik...Stop this childishness and open the blindfold...Fab 5 is around...

MAnik: I am really not in a mood to listen to your excuses Nandini...And about Fab 5 they don't know this place...they have never been here like you...this farm house is only used by Nyonika...

NAndini: Manik...but

Manik kept his fingers on her lips.

Manik: quiet NAndini...You have done the talking and now it's my turn...

Manik caught hold of Nandini and said

Manik: I am tired of giving tests and you know proving my love for you. So now it's your turn...I am going away from here...After I leave someone will open your blindfold. What you need to do is very simple...Search for me...If your love is true you will definitely find me...

Nandini: I am not doing anything like that

Manik: You don't have any other choice Nandini...You don't want to see me getting hurt physically do you

With that Manik left and hid behind a big tree and signaled the servant to open the blindfold.

As soon as Nandini opened the blindfold she asked the servant

Nandini: Where is Manik?

Servant: I don't know ma'am. Baba just told me to open the blindfold as soon as he leaves.

NAndini: Leave...where did he go? I mean which side...You probably saw that...

Servant: yes ma'am he went towards that side

NAndini left in hurry and Manik signaled the servant to leave.

As soon as the servant left Manik went to one of the tree and pulled its climber down. He then made a sound as if to grab Nandini's attention that he was there.

After some time Nandini came there with the knife in her hand and she was really mad.

Nandini: So you did not leave...You had not went away...You were here all the time and I was searching you there like crazy

Manik: I never left Nandini...I never walked away...I was always there. It's just that you never saw me standing just with you like a shadow...

NAndini was overwhelmed hearing those words from Manik but yet again her resolve came into her mind.

NAndini: Manik. Stop giving those cheesy lines to me...And why are standing there catching your leg like an idiot

Manik: I was measuring the ground's perimeter. You want to join...Can't you see that my legs are stuck here...these wild grasses...

Nandini: so you want me to help you

MAnik: no ...no...Just stay there and click my pictures and post it on social networking sites...will you

Nandini: why will I help you, you have knowingly got yourself caught with those plants...or else why would you give me a knife...

MAnik: Nandini, don't flaunt your intelligence over here please...I gave you that knife because I did not want you to get stuck with those climbers like me...Now if you are over with your interrogation..Can you free me?

Nandini looked at Manik doubtingly but then went forward to help him. Whereas Manik was having a hard time to keep up that face.

Nandini: How have you landed up here? You are in a mess

Manik: Thank you for making me realize it so soon...

Nandini finally cut the climber with the knife and Manik knowingly kept his hands right below so that his hands get cut and it happened as planned by Manik.

Manik: Ouch...

Manik screamed in pain. Nandini panicked seeing Manik's hand bleed.

Nandini: I am sorry Manik...I did not mean to...It happened unknowingly.

NAndini said while catching hold of his hands.

Manik jerked his hands away and said

Manik: No .you did it knowingly...You wanted to see me in pain...

Nandini: What are you saying Manik...I can't see you in pain...

Nandini hurriedly left the knife and took out a handkerchief and tied it to Manik's wound. Manik jerked his hands and caught the handkerchief himself and tied it around.

Manik: Don't show this concern...

Nandini: Manik. I was just trying to free you

Manik: No Nandini. You were right. We are not meant to be together. You just hurt me...

Nandini: No Manik...I was.

Manik: shut up...just shut up...you were absolutely right. You will just hurt me if we are together

Nandini: Manik...you are over reacting. it was just an accident...You know it well that I will never think of hurting you even in my dreams...It's just that my mind was focusing on freeing you and your legs were tangled ...your hand came in between...

Manik: Really...it was an accident

NAndini: Yah it was just unfortunate that your hands came in between...

Manik: The same way it was unfortunate that you had to divert your dad's attention and the accident happened

Nandini looked shocked at Manik with tears in her eyes. She withdrawed her hands from his.

Manik: why...am I wrong?

Nandini: Manik...How can you do this with me...How can you play with my emotions and feelings

MAnik: why can't I...If you can walk away from me for those silly stupid reasons of yours...Why can't I Nandini. Or is it just you who has taken charge to show me the reality all the time...Get a brain Nandini...Spoiling your life...my life...

He took Nandini by her shoulders.

MAnik: if you have so much of problem with this why not end it all...You have the knife...Just end the relation...Is it so easy for you to walk away all the time..So easy for you all the time to hide things for me...What do you think I can't see that bloody jerk and your best friend blackmailing you for something...

Nandini was just crying.

Manik: why can you trust me? why don't you have the faith on me...why don't you believe me for once Nandini when I can close my eyes and trust my life with you...why

NAndini had no words to speak.

MAnik: Do you think it's entertaining for me to do these things for you always...proving it to you all the time...I am tired Nandini...At least I thought you are the one person who could handle me...but it's going the other way round..I need you Nandini...and you are here with plans of leaving me and that too for a lame reason...

NAndini wanted to speak something but nothing came out of her mouth.

MAnik: NAndini...people have always left me in between...my dad left Nyonika and me for some woman...I was happy that Nyonika chose me but she too left me...Fab 5 is there for me always and I know but they are more vulnerable ...I need to look after them..When I met you I thought...you...you will be there always...but you have plans to leave me...and turn me totally broken...alone...lost...lonely...

Manik left Nandini and walked towards the places where his and Nandini photos were hung and started throwing them in anger.

Manik: go...you too go away...just go away...leave me like everyone does...you all always do the same to me...

Nandini finally knew what she had to do. She stopped Manik and holds his hands. Manik was looking at her with tears and ager. NAndini hugged Manik tightly and said

Nandini; No Manik...I will never leave you...you are my life...I am sorry...I am sorry...

Manik could see Nandini's eyes full of tears. He wiped it and Nandini spoke

NAndini: I am sorry... I have been a very bad girl Manik...I hurt you...

Manik: Nandini...never let go off me...

Nandini: I thought I will lose you as well Manik how I lost my parents.

Manik: I don't know if anything will happen to me if you are there with me but I will surely die if you leave me.

Nandini smiled and so did Manik. MAnik rested his head on hers and said

MAnik: I can't imagine my life with you...I can't

NAndini smiled while crying

NAndini: are you so much in love with me

Manik: Not just so much in love...I am in love with you ...Madly, fully, and hopelessly. Totally...IRREVOCABLY

He cupped her face and wiped her tears.

NAndini: I love you too

She stood on her toes and MAnik bend down. She then kissed his forehead and both rested their head on each other.

Nandini: But you have still not proposed me officially

She encircled her arms around his neck and Manik kissed her head.

Manik: oh yes ...I had plans to do it today but you know my anger...I spoilt it all...

Nandini: This secret relation of ours is being like a crash course for me...To learn to control your anger after marriage...

Manik: so you have plans of marrying me

Nandini: why don't you

Manik: I doubt...you might come next week after watching another bollywood movie with some other reason and then make me do another Agni Parikshya

She hit him playfully.

Nandini: Manik you and your one liners...We should go now...Fab 5 is near

Manik: Nandini Moorthy...you are the most unromantic person I have ever met

Nandini: really how many girls have you met?

Manik: you know it...it was just Alya

Nandini: Manik we should tell Fab 5.ALya will feel cheated and...

Manik: Don't worry...Alya won't mind you at all. She already knows...And the rest will know soon...

NAndini: Alya know...how...I mean when

Manik: quiet yaar...how much do you speak...

They both were laughing resting their head while Manik's hands were on her waist and Nandini's on his neck.

And Nadine hugged him and Manik hugged her back as well who carried her while hugging her. She kissed Manik on his lips .Although it was a short one Manik had a content look on his face.

Manik: Finally...

They were hugging each other when they heard someone clapping.

Harshad: Aww...how sweet

Navya: yah Harshad ji...Fully fledged romantic movie

The person came out from the tree and it was Harshad accompanied by the rest of the Fab 5 who looked totally shocked seeing Manik and Nandini hugging each other.

Harshad: Surprise .Surprise...

Nandini left Manik and looked here and there.

MAnik went up to Fab 5

Manik: Guys...I was about to tell you all...I can explain...

Mukti raised her hand and signed him to stop

Mukti: Manik...shut up ...just stay quiet...Don't utter a word

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update given😉
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Originally posted by: Arshirox97

It was amazing!!!! Mukti slaps Manik???? But why??? Waiting for the update!


Thannks
Yeah Mukti slpas Manik ...You need to wait for the update

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Originally posted by: babita_14388

just awesome...
u r an amezing writer, i love to read ur updates and like too much, thanx for such a wonderful story,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,



Thank you so much😃
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Originally posted by: RomComFan

What a lovely update- thanks for the PM!

Loved the way everyone sang to Nandhu and Manik's teasing too... looking forward to MANAN magic soon!😊



Thanks you so much😃
There is MaNan magic in upcoming chapters definitely
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pwenCezz_symrun

L..O..V..E..L..Y..!!!!!
The chappy was just brilliant! beaitifully penned! Loved every bit of it!
nd we got a Cliff Hanger here! Nevermind, I Love Cliffy updates! 😆
Update soonish!



Thank you...
Thank you...
I too love cliff hangers...The suspense after that is worth waiting...😆
I am a sadist😉
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Originally posted by: sana.1990

Yayyy u updated and it was awesome ...further also Update soon 😉 😳



Thanks 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsm part!!!
jst hope fab5 accepts Manan...
harshad n navya r so horrible..
keep updating like dis...
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Originally posted by: MagsDhingra

Awesome update

I loved it.
Plz continue soon.



Thanks😳

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