MaNan OS~ Thinking Out Loud

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I am in a very Ed Sheeran type of mood these days, so I would call this a romantic OS! So needless to mention, it will be mushy 😆

For those who haven't heard the song, it will help if you listen before or after! Not proof read, as I just wanted to finish it (the song is driving me insane!)

Lyrics in italics


Link to the song~ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lp-EO5I60KA


MaNan OS~ Thinking out aloud


When your legs don't work like they used to before
And I can't sweep you off of your feet
Will your mouth still remember the taste of my love
Will your eyes still smile from your cheeks


Coming back from their ritual walk in the garden, the lady slumped at the sofa while struggling to take her shoes off from her feet. Giving up after a while, she closed her eyes and let the cool October breeze play with her hair.

She let out a soft gasp as she felt her shoulders being squeezed ever so slightly and she instantly melted underneath his touch on her skin. Even while being married for countless years now, her husband still had the same effect on her.

His touch would still cause havoc on her senses and her innocence still radiating an aura of its own for him.

"Care to dance?" He asked as a romantic song boomed from the already turned on radio. Getting older did have its fair share of forgetting such trivial things!


And darling I will be loving you 'til we're 70
And baby my heart could still fall as hard at 23
And I'm thinking 'bout how people fall in love in mysterious ways
Maybe just the touch of a hand
Oh me I fall in love with you every single day

And I just wanna tell you I am


Maybe they did fall in love with a touch of a hand?

Or maybe they fell in love with each other every day? They never knew and no matter how hard they looked for this particular answer, even in their age today, they still could have find that one answer.

At times it felt like it was just the touch of their hands. At times it felt like they fell in love with each other every day, as they continued to learn something or the other about each other.

As the soothing music continued, both of them swayed in tune with the melody.


When my hair's all but gone and my memory fades
And the crowds don't remember my name
When my hands don't play the strings the same way, mm
I know you will still love me the same

'Cause honey your soul can never grow old, it's evergreen
Baby your smile's forever in my mind and memory

The common foe that troubled both their loved one, had brought these two individuals together, yet it was the common love for music that had originally ignited a spark. A spark that evolved in to a full fledged fire, day by day, touch by touch.

He could feel a small smile creeping up her lips as they continued to sway to the song. He remembered how she was always there, as his pillar of strength, even when the times got tough. As an artist, he too had suffered from his fair share of failures in life. Their profession was a risk that both were filling to take, and when the times got tough, her one smile was enough to soothe a hard day at work.

Even emotionally, his companion for a life time was the one that bridged the gap between himself and his own mother. She came, she shook, she touched and finally she healed.

Slowly but surely, she had began to break those rough as concrete barriers, to find a vulnerable heart not willing to show its true colours. She found, fought and nurtured the good in him, to come out and to know it was completely fine to be, well, good in life.

I'm thinking 'bout how people fall in love in mysterious ways
Maybe it's all part of a plan
I just keep on making the same mistakes
Hoping that you'll understand


They had fought. They had shouted. They had pushed and pulled.

In fact they never got along together to begin with, extreme opposing personalities they are, one naive the other arrogant. They never had the perfect fairytale life, heck what is even a perfect fairytale life? There are no happily ever afters' in reality. No, that is when life actually just begins.

Their personalities were too contrasting at the best of times, if he would say black, she would say yellow! Agreement on the issue of colours was always a fully fledged war.

Continuing to sway to the music, he closed his and rested his chin above her head, hearing a chuckle escape from her throat. Smirking a little at her thoughts, he knew that their height differences still amused her till this point in their lives.

He sighed and thanked her aiyapaa and their fireflies, for always looking after both of them. Their marriage was a risky one, no matter how crazy they were about each other.

Of course they had their fair share of petty arguments, the occasional breaking of a vase and the very often slamming of the door, though they never slept a night without reconciling.

More often than not, getting them to agree upon a issue was a cause for a democratic vote to be held in their household.

But both of them knew the value of love and trusted each other enough to never let go of their relation, no matter how ugly the spat.

Their ability to look past and embrace each other's differences was what strengthened their relationship, maybe even to this very point both the parties were doing the same~ Giving and taking a little at a time.

As the music came to a end in the Moorthy-Malhotra household, a couple in their 70's closed their eyes together for the last time.


But baby now
Take me into your loving arms
Kiss me under the light of a thousand stars
Place your head on my beating heart
I'm thinking out loud
That maybe we found love right where we are, oh
~*~

AN: I would like to thank Ipti, Sanju, Kanwal, RP, Partner, Sush, Maya (Sid's mistress😳), Kiret, Ri, Samyukta, Dua, @zaya-firdose, @ArshiR, Suha, @_celestial_, @Rajeshwari_KR, Captain Uditi (😆), @apardh_ba, @nadiafarjana, Zoha, Ray, @aishu3003, @JAAN19, @rima4ever, Kaetki, Pritam, @ishqbulava, @MuguetDScorpion and last but not the least Bushra!


Thank You ALL for making my birthday SOOO special! From all those sweet messages to all the siggies and avis! You all are just tooo sweet! I think I might get diabetes! Jokes apart, you all truly made this birthday one to a remember for a life time to come! I don't get overwhelmed every often, but you all certainly managed that feat! I don't think I will ever have enough words to thank you all! I will try anyways- THANK YOU🤗
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apardh_ba thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Such a beautiful song and I loved this os. Its funny act I loved all manan works but trust me you write really very well. Keep writing this beautiful pieces. Hope to read more bout murthy- malhotra residence.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Eff, my first spot. Throws a fit. 🤔
Edit:
I am so sorry. Late hogai. Back to the OS.
I don't need to tell you how much I love your writing. I've done that, and now I will only sound like a maska lagaoing machine. 🤪
The idea of falling in love and growing old with your love is my favorite. And its Manan here, my heart is bound to grow into a mush ball.
I loved this one. And its creepy, coz I was reading Ed Sheeran's interview when this OS popped up. :o

"She came, she shook, she touched and finally she healed."

"They had fought. They had shouted. They had pushed and pulled."

You see why I always say that you're an incredible writer. ^^Those lines above, beautifully put. That's something I need to learn from you, no joke.

The song was adding beauty to the already beautiful OS. <3

P.S. I was confused looking at my name in the A/N, and that's when I realized that I was the last one to wish you. *smacks herself*. Next time, won't be late. Pakka. <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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RES 😳

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This was just so beautiful, it made go all aww and left such a warm feeling in my heart
You really are a wonderful writer, you wrote their whole life in such a brilliant way 👏
He sighed and thanked her aiyapaa and their fireflies, for always looking after both of them.
@Bold I loved this line, its so true also Aiyappa and fireflies had and will always continue playing an important role in their lives.
I have always found the concept of dying together old so good and romantic it has always brought tears in my eyes, I enjoyed reading it while listening to classic Ed Sheeran song 😳
Your very welcome 🤗 and hope u had a lovely bday
edit: I just want to add I loved how Moorthy-Malhotra household sounds, its makes me all gush about the prospect of them living together and sharing a life together 😳
Edited by Desigirl_21 - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sanely_Insane

Eff, my first spot. Throws a fit.🤔



Not me this time either :O WHYYY
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RES
I'll unres when I get back tomorrow :P
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Pari!!!! (scrolls up again to check the username and DP) Yes Pari!!! 🤗
I might not be exaggerating if I say your writings get me as excited as watching a KYY episode.
This was just too damn BEAUTIFUL. 🤢
I had a picture of grey-haired Manik with those bedroom eyes (still looking sexy😆 ) and a petite Nandu with that friendly smile of hers regardless of the wrinkles that existed on her face. Both swaying in each other's arm floating with the music as if they're still in their twenties.
I loved how you mentioned their height difference. That's one of the reasons why I ship MaNan.
I friggen love it when the guy is tall and the girl is short and petite. 🤢
She let out a soft gasp as she felt her shoulders being squeezed ever so slightly and she instantly melted underneath his touch on her skin Even while being married for countless years now, her husband still had the same effect on her.
His touch would still cause havoc on her senses and her innocence still radiating an aura of its own for him.
@BOLD
Their love is just EPIC!
Pari your writing style is to die for.
Continue writing please but yeah don't forget to study as well 😳
P.S. That song was like the icing on a cake. It fitted your story PERFECTLY.
I haven't heard the song before but now I'm replaying it over and over. I'm loving it!
*And yeah Happy Birthday again
Hope you reach the stars with your success!
Edited by Malika.Dua - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: apardh_ba

Such a beautiful song and I loved this os. Its funny act I loved all manan works but trust me you write really very well. Keep writing this beautiful pieces. Hope to read more bout murthy- malhotra residence.


Naaaw! You are tooo kind darlo!
Too sweeet! I am glad you find my writings worth a read and comment🤗

Btw, what is your name?😃
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Originally posted by: Sanely_Insane

Eff, my first spot. Throws a fit. 🤔


You are here and that's all that matters for moi😳

Unres?😳
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