MaNan Two Shot - Fade To Black | Completed.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello people. I am back, temporarily. Well, here is an one shot on MaNan by my friend. Apparently, she is too lazy to come to IF, log in and post it. Here, I am posting it on her be-half. This one shot may turn into two shot, not guaranteed.

Kindly address all the comments to Kriti (-CheekuBeetch-), writer of the one shot.

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Part 1:


A chill runs down my spine as he turns on the shower. I gasp at the coldness.

"Manik wh..what are you doing?" I demand. His grip on my arms tightens as he pulls me closer. I can feel my eyes going wide.

"Have you woken up from your dream? Now get out from here!" He retorts.

He slowly let's go and I turn to leave. My eyes travel to his chest and the rest of his chiseled body, there is no denying the fact that Monster Manik is very sexy!

I ogle at his defined chest and wonder if I could touch him. But soon my reverie is interrupted-

"Manik! Are you in there?" Cabir's voice cuts in. I can see a faint silhouette through the door, and if I can then-

My thoughts are cut short by a sudden sense of warmth. The proximity is almost dizzying. His body radiates heat and I find myself giving in to his touch. My hands slowly find their way around his torso.

I see his lips moving but the words don't register in my mind. I press myself against him, and a wave of mint washes through my senses. He smells almost too good.

I shut my eyes and paid attention to his heart beat. All the stress and anxiety drains out in that moment.
But that moment lasts for mere seconds and then it's gone.

I hold back a whimper as Manik withdraws his arms. The strangeness of this emotion is beyond a definition. Does he feel the same way? These odd sensations in the stomach.

I gaze into his eyes, searching for the same emotion. His eyes gleam and I can see a glint of affection in his eyes.

His hands travel to my head, tracing their path. My breath hitches as his eyes flicker to my lips. His face is just a fee centimeters away. I can feel his warm breath on my lips, as he leans further until the tips of our noses brush.

This is the moment. I want this, I realize. I let him guide me, as his hands keep me from falling to me knees.

His lips brush mine. He plants a small peck and then pauses, asking for my assent. He doesn't have to wait long.

I caress his face and engulf him with a kiss. He responds immediately, and pulls me even closer. The touch of his bare skin makes something explode inside my stomach. This strange feeling is of ecstasy and maybe... love?

In no time we are leaning against the wall. Trapped between his arms, I struggle for my breath. I feel exhausted and energetic simultaneously.

His lips trail down my jaw and my neck. He brushes away the hair that is sticking to my neck. His hands fondle with my waist as they move further upward.

He stops short in the middle of unbuttoning my top. His expression is pained and weary, he is unsure. His hands slowly move back, and his face drops at the realisation of the situation.

He moves back, and walks out of the bathroom in a mixture of haste and dejection.


Part 2

Edited by Flame.Of.Rose - 10 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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woww fantastic part
well described😳
thanx for posting on her behalf adi😛
and well-written kriti👏👏
Edited by aishu3003 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this is great. i really love this.
it was so intimate, and well written.
woah!
Love this Kriti <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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woww...lovd it...well described i say 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was amazing Kriti.

Please do write more on MaNan.

---Zoha
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This was really good Kriti 👏 I loved how u described their close moments
Do write more on MaNan
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Heartfelt thanks from Kriti's side to everyone who commented and praised it. Well, since we all were very persistent so she gave in to our demand and wrote the second part. My bad, I completely forgot about sharing it here, anyways do enjoy.

Again, all the comments are to be directed to Kriti (-CheekuBeetch-) , the writer of this piece of fiction. I am merely sharing it with you all 😆

Forewarning: Mature content ahead. Read at your own risk 🤣
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Part2:

I watch him, as he leaves. My eyes sting with the realisation of rejection. My whimpers are drowned by the running shower. I feel ashamed. Embarrassed at my gullibility.

I stand under the shower as the water pours down and washes away the humiliation. I start to relax. At this moment, my mind is blank. I unbutton my top and proceed to remove it. The cold water feels like ambrosia against my skin.

I squeeze the shampoo bottle, a wave of citrus strikes my senses as I massage my hair.

I grab the soap and lather it onto my skin. I can feel the stress evaporate from my body.

My hands move to unclip my bra. The first hook slides off easily, and just as the second hook comes off I hear a sound behind me.

My eyes fly open and I swiftly turn around. There he stands in all his majesty, Manik Malhotra. His stare makes me feel even more naked than I already am. He doesn't even attempt to be discreet, I can see the lust on his face. The towel falls from his hand as he closes the distance between us.

In no time his lips have found mine again. His kisses are desperate like there's never going to be an another one. His hands burn into my back as he pulls me closer.

Suddenly my feet leave the ground, he picks me up in his arms and moves towards the bed. He lowers me gently onto the bed, this gesture is extremely contrasting to the display of raw passion!

I see him looking at me, lying on his bed. I see the genuine spark of affection in his eyes. I see the human behind the demon that he seems to be. It is in that moment, that I want nothing else more than him.

I pull him down on the bed. The shock on his face is beyond amusing , and a few giggles mange to escape before my lips are engulfed by his once again.

My bra is now lying on his bedroom floor, thereby eliminating all the barriers between us. His eyes travel all over me, making me self conscious. I turn away, feeling ashamed.

"Nandani" I hear him call. I don't move. "Nandani look at me" he says.
"Please" he whispers. His lips rest on my nape and his warm breath gives me goosebumps.

I turn to look at him, but I cover my chest. He pulls me closer, as close as he can and wraps his arms around me. I hear him say," don't be ashamed, you're beautiful. The most beautiful girl I've ever seen." I look up at him, his smiling face. And an involuntary smile plays on my face as well.

He plants small kisses down my neck, sucking and biting at the sensitive spots. A gasp of pleasure escapes my lips, every time his teeth graze my skin.

He kisses my breasts, and plays with my hair as my nails dig into his back. I arch my back, giving in to him. I want to surrender my whole life to this man and be his until forever.

His tongue plays with my nipples, and my body aches for more.
I move on top of him, straddling him under my weight. I sit on top of his stomach, cross legged.

His laughter fills the room; he props his head up on a pillow, and moves back effortlessly to support his back on the headboard with absolutely no effort, like I weigh nothing.

He crosses his arms and eyes me amusedly. I shift myself, so that I don't fall. That would be embarrassing. Not that he's not laughing anyway..

"What's so amusing?" I ask
"You Nandu.."
"What have I done?" I ask again.

My gaze shifts to his playful smile, the smile that I love. "Well, you are using me as a table aren't you?" He says. "Not as a table, but as a chair Monster Manik" I reply.

"Monster? What did I do now? Why do you call me monster all the time?" His face scrunches up in confusion as a sulk makes it's way on his face. He looks so adorable, that I just can't help pulling his cheeks. His frown deepens.

"Fine. I won't call you a Monster. Such cuteness can't be defined as monstrous behaviour. I'll call you Monstu, what say?" His eyes widen at the name. And he sits up immediately. His forehead touches mine, and my breath hitches.

"Nandu..is that what you'll call me when I make you scream?" He whispers. "Why will you make me scream?" I ask him with utter confusion.

His hands grip my waist tighter as they move upwards. He smirks, and I don't need to be told the reason anymore. Heat creeps up my neck and my whole face is flushed with a red hue.

I let him guide me, as he once again takes charge, and is on top again. The husk in his voice makes me melt when he says:

"This is going to be the best night of your life Nandu"

And every other thought,every other worry, all the questions, the rationality and the difference between right and wrong fades to black.

Edited by Flame.Of.Rose - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautifully written.
MaNan ☺️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nicely written and the last line ws really very good. It gives comp meaning to d title.
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thats my comment!!!!!!!!

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