||Manmarziyan|| SS Manik-Nandini-Dhruv-- Updated. - Page 4

Originally posted by: SweetSassy

Am I really going to Comment?

See, I was committed that I won't comment, but see where I landed? In Reply Box!

You better comment or else I will discontinue this as well! :) :P

Well, I was disappointed that you discontinued Adhoore, but as you started this FF, I am delighted! xD

Chal Jhooti! You would have been happy to be free of torture! :P

Well, let me first compliment you for that FF's name: Manmarziyan! This a soul touching song!😳

Yes! I like it too! :)

So, its basically not a lovey-dovery FF! Well, I am thinking again if I gonna continue to read it or not!(Kidding😆) Moi love to see the protagonists together, and you have already separated them! :(
But as my Pudding had wrote it, defo I am gonna stick to this FF!😆

Bwahaha! Wokay Done! :P Let's see how it shapes up...even I am unsure about it! :P

The First Part was beguiling mixture of love, friendship and pain, as I found it to be!

A lot of suspense is there in the First part itself, so moi waiting for the story to unfold!

You Keep Writing! Moi Will Keep Enjoying!

Wokay Captain!

P.S.:You are going to update daily! Pari wanted someone to pinch her only, I want someone to rather slap me!🤣🤣 Let' see, kab tak degi tu next update! 😆

Abhi...do minute mein! :)

Originally posted by: dewcute

unresd on page 1😛

Chapter One B.

Manik held his collar taut, while Dhruv loosened his grip. The football field was their regular venue to take out their pent up anger on each other. Seeing Dhruv loosen his grip, Manik smirked and jerked him away.

Manik shrug his shoulders as Mukti entered. He pulled her towards himself, screwing up Dhruv's already screwed mood. Once again Dhruv pushed Manik.

"So you finally had to call your Miss Savior,didn't you?" Dhruv laughed.

Mukti reacted before Manik could think of a witty reply, "How do these girls call you soft spoken and the most sopisticated boy of Royal Academy is what I fail to understand"

"Literary Prefect, you weren't invited her...so just stay AWAY" Dhruv's anger was rising, but would she stop?

They kept reminding each other how awful they were. Manik was no more in their fight, Mukti was enough to defend herself and Dhruv was enough to disgrace her. They kept bickering till she finally called his name.

"Fevistick" her voice was loud and clear. Dhruv shouted in reply, "Nandini, stay out of this. Go and attend the classes, I have to deal with her today."

Nandini held him by hand,dragged him to a corner and whispered.

"Just forget her. She isn't important. How can you miss lectures just because you want to fight buddy?"

"But I didn't" he tried to defend himself, but she was someone who never let him complete what he had to say.

"Just forget everything and come with me" saying so Nandini dragged Dhruv while Manik and Mukti side hugged.

Nandini's back hung on her shoulder while she walked slowly due to its weight. Dhruv held her hand gesturing her to stop and took her bag.

"If your back is hurting can you not ask me to carry it for you? Bloody Fevicol", he narrowed his eyes.

"We are late for the computer class" she said in a wary and all of a sudden felt a sudden pull.
They raced till the class and was asked to share the same computer which Navya was using. They hit each other before settling down while rolling their eyes at a lame joke of Navya.

Nandini suddenly realized that she had left her case study in her bag which she had to show Mr. Dhruv Aggarwal so that he could help her perform better.

She went towards her bag, unzipped it and tried to search for the papers, while she felt a stare. She turned and saw Manik standing near the Notice Board, tying to read but left quickly. She went towards the board to find out what he had been reading, only to discover blank pages pinned on the board.

That was so quick! :P

Checkmate and Yours.Till Perpetuity Updated as Well! :)

Originally posted by: -.serendipity.-

Wow! Another story from you! Girl, you are on a roll!

This one is quite interesting. I'm waiting to see how it shapes up!

Keep writing,

Kiret

Originally posted by: BeyondWords

Yeah!

There is one more coming soon! :P

I shall! :)

Originally posted by: -.serendipity.-

Ek aur? Waiting! :P

Originally posted by: BeyondWords

Yeah! Imma on writing spree! Badly! :P

Originally posted by: -.serendipity.-

Ahhh, I wanna write so much but I don't have time :( I have way too many fics going on at the same time!