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M a n m a r z i y a n.

A Short Story.

A Story of Two worlds.

Of passion ambition, desire and regret.



I n d e x.

Chapter 1A: Page 1

Chapter 1B: Page 6

Chapter 1C: Page 16

Chapter 1D: Page 22


Yun to solah saawan aaye gaye

Sixteen monsoon have passed by


Gaur nahi kiya humne

But I have never paid any attention



Bhiga man ka aangan is martaba

But this time, the courtyard of my heart is drenched



Kya jaane kya kiya tumne

Who knows, what you have done


Dil mein jaag ishq waali manmarziyan manmarziyan

The desires of love have aroused in my heart


Zid ki maari yun to solah

So grossed with obstinacy, these sixteen


Bholi bhaali saawan

Innocent monsoon


Mannmarziyan aaye gaye

full of willful desires


Abb talak se kuch alag si manmarziyan

From now on, these willful desires are different


Hum zameen pe, bhiga man ka

I am on the earth, the drenched courtyard of my heart


Toh falak se aangan

From the heaven to the earth


Manmarziyan iss martaba

The willful desires this time


Manmarziyaan

The desires of love, so different


Sikkon jaise hai uchhaali yeh manmarziyan.. manmarziyaan...

These willful desires seems to be flying like a coin


Zid ki maari yun to solah

So grossed with obstinacy, these sixteen

Bholi bhaali saawan

Innocent monsoon


Mannmarziyan aaye gaye

full of willful desires


Be adab see par gazab see

They are wayward, but strange


Manmarziyan manmarziyan

these willful desires for love


Hosh khoya

I lost my consciousness

Par sambhali manmarziyan

But then I controlled my desires for loves


Zidd ki maari aaye gaye

They have arrived because of being stubborn


Bhuli bhali manmarziyan manmarziyan

O these innocent willful desires for love



Heya All the wonderful readers!
This is the first time that I am using a Song as An introduction to a story, but it has many reasons to it, which you will know as you read the story!
The story basically is not Love but Pain which we all endure when we lose a part of us, yet we are helpless.
#Disclaimer: This is a complete work of fiction. Any similarities is a mere coincidence!
This story is going to be updated everyday, Only if I see active readers reviewing it! :)
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Chapter One...

She peeped into the room, her eyes searching for just him.

There she saw him, imitating one of the teachers and laughing away. She smiled and immediately smacked herself in her mind for staring a boy, that too him.

She was supposed to hate him. She had always hated him, just the way he hated her. They convinced each other four years back about that, so there was no looking back.

He was too popular and she was just a regular student. They both had once been the pride of the school, but things changed with the passage of time. Her subjects didn't allow her to do anything but just study, but however he tried he couldn't leave what he hd always aspired for.

He, the sports prefect and she, a regular sixteen year old student, how differently had they shaped up, with the rolling of time.

"Sometimes we don't realize what we have till we lose", he had said when they were not more than 7 years old, and today she realized what he had meant.

She kept staring till she felt a hand on her shoulder.

" What are you doing in his class" Dhruv frowned as she looked away.

"I came to meet someone else" saying so she paced towards the water point.

She washed her hands, still wondering what Dhruv was doing in Manik's class. As she turned, she collided with Dhruv and as a result he collided with him, Manik Malhotra.

Nandini saw Dhruv's expressions and cringed, while she could feel Manik's stare. She didn't have enough courage to look into the eyes of either of the two guys, so she walked away, without uttering a word.

She heard them fight again and sighed.


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Edited by BeyondWords - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ummm
so here...dhruv n maanik r nt buddies
interesting...very interesting...n it wl b updated daily😲

array waaah
Edited by pratsy - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: pratsy

ummm

so here...dhruv n maanik r nt buddies
interesting...very interesting...n it wl b updated daily😲

array waaah


Umm...You will know that in the next update! :)
Yes! I am updating Daily! :)
I know it is tough to digest, but that's how it is! :P


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Originally posted by: BeyondWords


Umm...You will know that in the next update! :)
Yes! I am updating Daily! :)
I know it is tough to digest, but that's how it is! :P


toh..nxt upd gonna be tomorrow...right
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res😛
unres😆


Another one?from you!!!!!!!!!!!😊
and u are going to update this daily...😲
i doubt for how many days??😆
just joking,i trust you for this one😛,better u won't break it😳
so,a triangle love story?dhruv and manik are not friends!so much to unfold...
will wait for your next update😳
jiya😛
Edited by dewcute - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: pratsy

toh..nxt upd gonna be tomorrow...right


Yus Yus! :)
I thought that would make you happy! :)

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I love your Siggy quote! :)
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Originally posted by: BeyondWords


Yus Yus! :)
I thought that would make you happy! :)

umm...no...i wl b happy if u upd by evening😆bt i shud nt be more demanding odrwis eu wl kick me out🤣so babe...tk ur tym n upd :)
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Originally posted by: pratsy

umm...no...i wl b happy if u upd by evening😆bt i shud nt be more demanding odrwis eu wl kick me out🤣so babe...tk ur tym n upd :)



🤣 Not really! But I haven't scraped everyone yet! So i will have to do that before I update!
I swaer PMing, scraping is extremely difficult! :"(

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