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Suha

@TheShipWeirdo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

And finally Manik gets to kiss her 😆 Loved it hun, great job. Do write more!

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: TheShipWeirdo
And finally Manik gets to kiss her 😆 Loved it hun, great job. Do write more!

Thx U😳. I will

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ForeverForU

@ForeverForU

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

I was cheering for Manik
finally he got the kiss...Hot it was<3

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Originally posted by: ForeverForU
I was cheering for Manik
finally he got the kiss...Hot it was<3

🤣 Yea Bechara Manik. So many failed attempts!!! Must be a serious blow to his ego 😆 .

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

I wonder when Manik would get naughty again with Nandini 😉 so that I could get another inspiration? 😛

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: nadiafarjana
Maar dala

😛 but we go by the precap today , their first kiss would be more sensual than wild😉

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AyaNi.CabIni

@AyaNi.CabIni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

😉

Edited by JAAN19 - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: kritu17krits
loved it

Am glad you loved it😳...the level of writing is hardly up to the mark of the other amazingly gifted writers in the forum, still the narcissist in me is rejoicing

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manan_flab

@manan_flab

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

dude... uh just killed it yr... so much heat so beautifully uh expressed our baba's feelings

finally kahi toh baba ko mauka mila toh kiss his nandini...

'hotness personified' is the word for this OS

i dont know about the OS by malika uh told me to read

but i definitely wanna see more of ur writing...

loved it girl...

n pls continue... ;)

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Originally posted by: manan_flab
dude... uh just killed it yr... so much heat so beautifully uh expressed our baba's feelings
finally kahi toh baba ko mauka mila toh kiss his nandini...
'hotness personified' is the word for this OS
i dont know about the OS by malika uh told me to read
but i definitely wanna see more of ur writing...
loved it girl...
n pls continue... ;)

That's really so sweet of you Simi!😆... I wrote this OS when I caught up with all the episodes till this one within 3 days! My first weekend at IF! You can imagine, it was weekend, no fresh episode and I was so damned restless! all type of scenario playing in my head, and I could not sleep. Finally I woke up and wrote this one😆.

Don't worry, there are plenty more talented writers out here who will definitely pamper you with all types of OS.😳

Check the link below whereby the links of many of the OS I told you about ( not necessary all 😆) are posted there...

Kaisi Yeh Yaariyaan: Index FF/SS/OS

Have fun

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