MaNan OS: Thank Me Properly

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Guys, I originally wrote this part as an addition to an already amazing OS by Malika.Dua entitled A night spent in my Monster's house.

Check it. it is really nice it is our point of view what would happen on Monday 06 October 2014

My OS started when the Fab5 has left Manik house but Noyonika just pointed out downstairs and Bechari Nandu is trapped inside Manik room.

Upon request by some of you, I am posting it in a different thread. By the way you find the OS hot, don't blame me. Blame Monster Manik. He is totally corrupting me 😉

Enjoy. ManAn Kiss😳 . Monster Manik wala Style main😉

Warning: My writing sucks big time!!! so apologies in advance!😆

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It was getting late. Nandini was legit worried that she was still trapped in Manik's room . She glanced at the guitar's shaped clock on the wall. 11.30. Aiyyapa what would Chachi think? Manik was totally frustrated as well.Despite all his efforts to make her get away, Nandini was still in his room.

The expression "kebab mein haddi" struck on his mind. He lost count of the number of Haddiyan that cropped up tonight. Unbelievable!One by one, all the members of Fab5 landed at his place.

"You got so many occasions! Why you didn't leave? I told you to wait for my signal, why you didn't move when i signaled you? So you are dumb.You totally ruined my night!", Manik let out. And my peace of mind he added to himself.

" Now you are blaming me?!It all happened because you drenched me." retorted Nandini angrily, throwing a cold glance at Manik who rolled in his eyes in response to her icy words.

Manik continued to pace the room, thinking of a possible way how he could make Nandini leave the house without Noyonika noticing her. He had his share of drama and complications for today and having to give Nyonika any explanation regarding Nandini's presence was the last thing on his mind.

Meanwhile , filled with worried Nandu started to babble to herself and started questioning what would happen if someone find her here at this time and in Manik's clothes. The whole idea made her blush with embarrassment.Somehow in between her incessant talk, Alya's name cropped up and Manik tired with all the lies he has been saying to hide Nandini from others, voiced out aloud that Alya and him are no longer a couple.

Nandini, could not help herself but sympathized with Alya. She knew that they had been together for a very long time and she knew that Alya was definitely devastated by it. She recalled the goon wala confession scene, how she was worried about Manik getting away from her.

Monster Manik hardly thinks about others' feelings. He is so full of himself! Nandini thought and she could not resist telling Manik that such relationship cannot be broken over some silly misunderstandings.

Manik on the other hand was getting frustrated and frustrated at the course of the events. And Nandini's endless chatter was doing no good. On top of that he regretted he gave Nandini his shirt and shorts to wear. She was looking mesmerizing and damn hot in his clothes and and he was constantly distracted by her presence. He was inches from grabbing her in his arms.

Why can't Nandini see how much I want her right now , he thought to himself. With each passing second he was losing grasp over his self control. She really needs to leave the room now. She has no idea how damn hot she was looking tonight. Drenching her on impulse was definitely a mistake, now it seemed that Manik could hardly think straight with her roaming around like this. Given his state of mind, he was in no mood to hear lectures about relationships.

Manik: Why the hell you pointed out at my house today. Now look in what situation we are, you idiot.

Nandini: Listen Mr Manik Malhotra, I came here simply to say thank you for saving Rishab's Life. If I am trapped here, it is all because of you. Because of your stupid anger!

Manik: Ohhh. Thank you bolle ne aiyi thi. Theek se thank you nahin bolla gata hai tum se and thank you bolle ne aa chali"

Nandini ( Clueless at his hint) sweetly added : "But I said thank you na"

At this point, Manik's patience ran out.No longer in control of his emotions, he rolled his eyes in exasperation at Nandini's naivety, grabbed her arms and pulled her close to him and said sarcastically:


"So you want to thank me?Lesson number one Professor Nandu: How to say thank you p-r-o-p-e-r-l-y". Monster Manik wala style main!

He bent down and placed a kiss on Nandini's lips. This time he did not give her the time to stop him. The kiss was meant to be short just to shut up her non-stop babble and also because he was dying to kiss her since the beginning of the evening, ever since he found her sleeping peaceful in his couch .But the moment his lips met lips, it was as if his whole world was on fire and the flames were ravaging everything around him. He pulled Nandini even closer to him , one arm sliding around her tiny waist and other one moving towards her upper back, trapping her in his embrace and he started kissing her passionately.

Nandini was taken aback by this sudden intimacy. Her first reflex was to push Manik away but at the first touch of his hungry lips, the mere touching of their lips, seemed to set her on fire. Her resolve to break free died down and her clutched hands trapped again his muscled chest opened up and her palms were touching his bare chest and her lips refused to pull away. She was completely drown in the moment.

By the time Manik pulled away, both were breathless.Nandini was looking at him with a bewildered expression, and Manik huskily said" That's how you say thank you properly". Then caressing her chubby cheeks with one hand while the other hand grasping her waist even closer to him, he bent his face in the typical Manik way to her ears and added, " Next time you plan to tell me thank you, don't forget how I like my thank you to be." Then with the signature Manik Malhotra's smirk, he almost threatened her, " Unless you are ready to thank me my way, don't you dare show any gratitude to me. I am nobody's hero. Am the bad guy. Don't forget who I am. I am Monster Manik.". With a sexy smile, barely whispering, " Yours Truly Monster Manik", he dropped another brief kiss on her jawline.


Then all of a sudden, he broke all contact, took a step back and he walked away leaving Nandu in a totally shocked state and our poor Nandu trying to figure what has just happened to her. More than she was startled at Manik's action and she was baffled by her own response to Manik's kiss.


Manik went to the window for some fresh air. He was in bad need of it. He really needed to calm himself. He has been aching to kiss her since he found her asleep in his room, he thought kissing her would ease the flames of his desire but now it seemed to have a reverse effect. His whole body was aching to touch Nandini again, to feel her again and to kiss her again. He closed his eyes and tried to calm himself once more.


What just did happened to him? How could he lose control over his emotions like that? It was just a stupid kiss for God sake. He was no novice to kissing but then why? At this precise moment he was hit by a jolt of realization; it was not just merely a kiss. The connection he felt with Nandini extended beyond physical attraction. Never has he been so passionate with Alya, not even at the height of their relationship. With Nandini, it was something else. Something special.Something different. Something that he could not put words to.

He turned around and saw Nandini, frozen on the same spot he left her, her hands touching her lips, looking as confused as he was, her lovely eyes equally filled with questions. Their eyesight met and the whole world stopped moving. All they could hear was their own heartbeats. Their changing heartbeats.❤️
Edited by Noorie30 - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lo ho gaya mera kaam tamaam! 😕
Extremely HOT OS!...itni garmi me neend kaise aayegi mujhko dunno...
neend udd gayi meri!!! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow... Such a piece of work.. Finally he succeeded in kissing her... Must say a hot os...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shalbi

wow... Such a piece of work.. Finally he succeeded in kissing her... Must say a hot os...



Manik is so hot himself😳, and how can his kiss not be? Dont forget that our Manik got expert seduction skill😆. Aur wayse bhi, manik toh besharami ki height paar kar chuka hai!!! He left no stone unturned to show how much he wanted to kiss Nandini! manah ke first three times was kinda accidental but his last two attempts were so obvious.😳
Edited by JAAN19 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Maar daal... Finally he kissed her ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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HOT is the word for this OS !☺️
Absolutely loved it dude..finally he gets to kiss her
I love your way of writing..u hav described their emotions perfectly. .waiting for more such works from u.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hmm...Ok...☺️
That Was A HOTNESS over loaded "OS"😳

Great job👏😳

jiya😛


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Well that's typical Monster Manik wala kiss.😆 ... Hot, passionate, sexy and Raw 😳 just like his current state of Mind😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Truly HOT OS... finally he kissed her.. Manik style of kissing is very unique... do write more on ManaN
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Posted: 11 years ago
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With Manik being so naughty since the past few episode, the OS was bound to be Hawt 😉.
Thank you for the appreciation.☺️ Am really happy you like it. Your comments really motivate me to write more. I am touched😳

Hope to come up with another OS soon.❤️ lots of love to you all
Edited by noorjahan30 - 11 years ago

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