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Posted: 10 years ago
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Suhaaa! 🤗
Okay, so I'm super late for commenting on this.. so lemme get around to the actual comment instead of blabbering away! 😆

You had me hooked at the title itself. I'm a sucker for cliches! :P
And Nandini sounds adorable in this story. Though, I'm not much of a believer in the whole soul-mate concept, I love watching and reading about them. [yes, I'm a walking contradiction 🤣 ]

The fact that she's making so much of an effort to meet that one special guy is commendable. 😆 And, she's actually willing to sit in a coffee shop and inhale those bitter fumes even though she doesn't like the taste of coffee, can she get any more adorable? 😳

And Aha! Manik is in full character with his smirks and attitude intact! ❤️ Their whole exchange is way too awesome! Their bickering never fails to make me smile.

Absolutely loved the first part! ❤️
Whoever he was, I was certain I wouldn't want to get involved with him ever again.

^Yeah right! As if fate would let that happen! 😛

I LOVE AUs! And it was a delight to read this one! <3

-Sharmi
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
I'm not exactly in the right mind to edit the comment now! Blame MaNan, but yeah will edit it soonish. .
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
Awesome story...
Plz pm me when you update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
Edited.
Off to read Part2! 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
This is SO adorable!
Don't we all stalk guys on FB and Instagram😆 (I know I just did😛)
Anyways! I love the concept of this SS, it's so fresh and crisp!

And very Manik-Nandini in their behaviour, like it's true to the CS in the show!
I never knew you updated and now I am SO late in commenting

Anyways! I hope you update sooon! And gurl, why would we be disappointed when you give such amazing updates!

~Pari

PS: Imma sorry but my reviews are horrible and I tend to blabber, so yea xD
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: infinity_

Suhaaa! 🤗

Okay, so I'm super late for commenting on this.. so lemme get around to the actual comment instead of blabbering away! 😆

You had me hooked at the title itself. I'm a sucker for cliches! :P
And Nandini sounds adorable in this story. Though, I'm not much of a believer in the whole soul-mate concept, I love watching and reading about them. [yes, I'm a walking contradiction 🤣 ]

The fact that she's making so much of an effort to meet that one special guy is commendable. 😆 And, she's actually willing to sit in a coffee shop and inhale those bitter fumes even though she doesn't like the taste of coffee, can she get any more adorable? 😳

And Aha! Manik is in full character with his smirks and attitude intact! ❤️ Their whole exchange is way too awesome! Their bickering never fails to make me smile.

Absolutely loved the first part! ❤️
Whoever he was, I was certain I wouldn't want to get involved with him ever again.

^Yeah right! As if fate would let that happen! 😛

I LOVE AUs! And it was a delight to read this one! <3

-Sharmi


Sharmi <3 Gah, I love you people! Thanks a bunch for the very kind words :D And even I love cliches a lot; if that wasn't visible already :P

Nandu is adorable? Seriously? Eeek, you made me so happy! Specially because I'm loving Nandu nowadays (and you know why *wink wink*). Manik in character? LET ME LOVE YOU! Because I was seriously so afraid that I probably messed him up since, as much as I love characters like him, writing them is definitely my weakness.

A biiig hug to you 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: nadiafarjana

Awesome story...

Plz pm me when you update


Thank you :) I'll surely do that!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: gujjupari

This is SO adorable!

Don't we all stalk guys on FB and Instagram😆 (I know I just did😛)
Anyways! I love the concept of this SS, it's so fresh and crisp!

And very Manik-Nandini in their behaviour, like it's true to the CS in the show!
I never knew you updated and now I am SO late in commenting

Anyways! I hope you update sooon! And gurl, why would we be disappointed when you give such amazing updates!

~Pari

PS: Imma sorry but my reviews are horrible and I tend to blabber, so yea xD


And I do too 😆 But eeps, Pari, you liked this update? 😳

Uff, I swear, everyone in this forum is way too kind while giving compliments. And don't be sorry, just a comment from you is enough :D Which, by the way, was very sweet <3

Thanks, again for those nice words 😳 Here, have a big hug 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
Hey
I just came across this...!! The reason I actually wanted to read it is because of its title..!! Damn unique n was looking for something different...!! Which I usually don find a lot...!!
Well so far it seems awesome...!! It is slight natured...shows Nandini as a sweet little innocent girl believing in "TrueLove" that saying she also is very much like a normal teen girl wid a crush... The insta n fb...damn also knowing manik's full name...!!
Dat being sed it didn't make it sickly sweet but kept the track where manik is curious n wonders about her stalking him!! And dats where I tot girl u can write damn well!! I can't wait to read more from u..!! Its a different concept n I like it!!
Regards
Safrena
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -ScaredAngel-

Hey
I just came across this...!! The reason I actually wanted to read it is because of its title..!! Damn unique n was looking for something different...!! Which I usually don find a lot...!!
Well so far it seems awesome...!! It is slight natured...shows Nandini as a sweet little innocent girl believing in "TrueLove" that saying she also is very much like a normal teen girl wid a crush... The insta n fb...damn also knowing manik's full name...!!
Dat being sed it didn't make it sickly sweet but kept the track where manik is curious n wonders about her stalking him!! And dats where I tot girl u can write damn well!! I can't wait to read more from u..!! Its a different concept n I like it!!
Regards
Safrena


First off, I'll just start by saying that I'm way too distracted by your DP. Omg Ian *.*

Back to this, thanks a bunch! Really, really, really means a lot to me! Lol, I totally forgot about this story, I swear. Reminds me I really have to update xD After my exams end, maybe.

Thank you again, for those kind words! I'm so glad you liked the characters portrayal. And eeeps, I write well? How many more times do I need to thank you? :D

Now I've got a huge grin on my face, but so not complaining.

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