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Sparks-galore

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Thanks for consolidating everyone's input 😛 This is looking very good everyone ❤️

Here's a lead to start us off again..

'Its been a few hours already and this train just won't stop. What's happening?' she wondered.

It was pouring down now and she was barely able to see anything outside the train's window and she had to muster all her concentration prowess to see where this train was at.

'Hills and trees? In the middle of a city? Nah... Where the hell am I?' And then it dawned on her..

'City

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nicky13

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Story continue after TC scene...
Manik- ok theek hai-2 ...

But both we're feeling awkward and they try to look here and there

Manik again - waise tum thodi Bahut smart tou ho yeh tou manna padega... Kya handle ki hai situation ...

Nandini - dekha Maine kaha tha na ke main smart hoon... C maan Gaye tum bhi...
Manik- o miss smart jiyada hawa mein mat udo mujhe pata aise ideas ladkion ko kahan se aate hain... Bollywood movies zindabad ...

Nandini- haan tou movies dekhna kuchh tou kaam aaya na ...

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nicky13

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Hey sorry I continue story after the TC scene

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Sparks-galore

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: nicky13
Hey sorry I continue story after the TC scene

No worries Nicky😊 I'll add my lines after your dialog

Here goes..

During the eye lock, however, Nandini noticed hat Manik's brow was bleeding (as a result of the brawl with Adi)

Manik, however brushed aside her questioning expressions and dozed off yet again (his favorite past time is guess)

Another hour or so passed. ' Why haven't we arrived at a station yet?' she wondered.

The rain was pouring down now. She couldn't really see outside the train's window and had to muster all her concentration prowess to figure out where they were headed.

'Hills and trees? In the middle of the city? Nah... ' and then it dawned on her. 'Ayiappa, where am I ' ...

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Tisha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Sparks-galore

No worries Nicky😊 I'll add my lines after your dialog

Here goes..

During the eye lock, however, Nandini noticed hat Manik's brow was bleeding (as a result of the brawl with Adi)
Manik, however brushed aside her questioning expressions and dozed off yet again (his favorite past time is guess)

Another hour or so passed. ' Why haven't we arrived at a station yet?' she wondered.
The rain was pouring down now. She couldn't really see outside the train's window and had to muster all her concentration prowess to figure out where they were headed.

'Hills and trees? In the middle of the city? Nah... ' and then it dawned on her. 'Ayiappa, where am I ' ...

As she turned to face Manik, she saw blood oozing out from the corner of his mouth! She felt an urge to clean it and as she was going to place her finger on his wound he regained her senses and slapped herself in her mind

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Tisha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

@Nicky

Update it in the main post saying that you have posted the whole thing in Page 5!

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nicky13

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: BeyondWords

@Nicky

Update it in the main post saying that you have posted the whole thing in Page 5!

done 😊

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Gangakapoor17

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

'After some time she comes to reality and stop adi and manek... ,then she apologized to adi and told him she comes in 5 min. And adi leaves from there😭

Then she ask manek tum!!! mere boyfriend nahi ho(just as deepika in ye jawani hai deewani).

Manek replies' to vo hai kya'( just as ranbeer)

(sorry but I want to continue from here)...

nandini replay its not your businesses 'ki vo mera bf hai ya nahi and leaves from there...

manek thinking in his mind that she is right but why he behave like this, why he feel some unknown feeling when he saw nandini with some other person

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mayaya.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

by BeyondWords
As she turned to face Manik, she saw blood oozing out from the corner of his mouth! She felt an urge to clean it and as she was going to place her finger on his wound he regained her senses and slapped herself in her mind

Suddenly the train stopped, and she woke Manik up. They got off the train and looked around.

Manik-where are we?

Nandu-WHAT? HOW CAN YOU NOT KNOW WHERE WE ARE? If you don't know, how the hell am I supposed to know?

Manik-calm down...I'll call Dhruv and ask him to ask someone to come a get us.

Nandini looked around as Manik called Dhruv. She felt a little uncomfortable, after spotting some guys looking at her. She moved closer to Manik, who had just hung up his phone. He was about to say something, but looked at where she was looking and got mad. He slipped his hand around her waist, and even though Nandini was surprised, she leaned into him more. The guys seems to stop looking at her. Nandini sighed.

Nandu-thanks

She moved away, but was stopped with Manik's arm around her waist.

Nandu-Manik what are you doing?

Manik-oh shut up, I don't voluntarily touch you. Your zip has gone down.

Nandu-WHAT? oh my god! Manik hurry up!

Manik-shut up, what do you think I'm doing.

CONTINUE FROM HERE ONLY PLEASE!

Edited by -MyMy- - 10 years ago

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nicky13

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Posted: 10 years ago

#50

Nandini- yes I m asking the same kya kar rahe ho tum... Dekho tum galat samjh rahe ho main aisi- waisi ladki nahi hoon... Wo tou wo ladke mujhe ghoor rahe the iss liye main tumhare pass aayi thi... Taaki un logon ko ye na lage ke main akeli hoon... Dekho tumne mujhe bachaya uske liye thanks ... Lekin usse jiyada kuchh nahi ok... Tum ko galatfehmi ho rahi hai... Main aisi bilkul v nahi hoon...

Manik put his finger on her lips- Shhh shhh chup bilkul chup ... Nandu was quite and looking into Manik's eyes ...their eye locks ... Both were lost in each other ... But suddenly Nandini feels Manik's fingers on her back ... Manik closed her zip ...

Manik- Ho giya Nandini ...

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