FAN-FICTIONPYAAR KI EK RAAT BARICH PAGE 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 20 years ago
#11
thank u so much
it was great
huh.. there r friends now 😆
plz cont soon
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Posted: 20 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: ~Angel~

thank u so much
it was great
huh.. there r friends now 😆
plz cont soon

ya friends...ahista ahista pyar hoga na!! lol..or it depends on nazia..however she wants to do it😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
#13
Wah Wah nazi..plz cont yaar!

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Posted: 19 years ago
#14
i really liked it plz continue as soon as possible!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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FanFiction Continued

preview: after they shake hands...

Angad: kripa chalo meine tume churdeta hoon hotel meine?

kripa: nahin angad meine kudh chala jaunga?

angad: are tumbhi na khamoka kuch bhi kehdeti hoon dekhoon itni raat hogayi hai meine tumne hotel par choddethi hoon?

kripa: are chalo baba ab tum itna force karehe hoon toh chalo?

angad: okay guys meine abhi kripa ko chod kar wapas aunga aur tab tak hum sab dare and truth kelenge?

kripa: chalo angad mujhe bohoth dar lagraha hai?

angad: chalo tume meri gari meine betoon?

they drive off and then there in the hotel it is raining and kripa is scared becuase all her freinds are with angad's friends and she is all alone in the hotel kripa is shaking she's feeling coldand she is scared?

angad: acha kripa ab meine chalti hoon mere dost meri intezaar karrahihai?

kripa: angad tum abhi jare hai hoon? plzz maat jao meine akeli hojaungi? mujhe bohoth dar lagraha hai?

angad: kya kripa tum bachi nahin ki tumme dar lage?

kripa: yaar angad tum kehti hoon ki tum mere dost hoon aur ab tume mujhe churaha hoon?

angad: acha baba! hai bagwan tumne mujhe kiske saath choddiya joh itni darpook hai

kripa: meine darpook bnahin hoon chalo na angad?

angad: tikke hai meine abhi meri dost ko sms karke kehdethi hoonki woh sab waha ajay?

angad sms his friends and all of angads and kripa's friends are back in the hotel they all are in kripa's room talking?

kripa's friend: cholo hum sab kuch kelte hai?

angad: good idea yaar cholo?

kripa: hai tum toh yeh sab kaho gi? acha meine pehle jati hoon?

angad: nahin meine pehli?

kripa: nahin meine pehli?

angad: kripa meine kahana meine pehli?

angad's friend: acha baba hum chalte hai tume dono bhi na jagre keliye hamesha tayaar rehti hoon?

angad's friend play and it lands on angad everbody gives a good one?

kripa's friend: acha angad hum sub ne decide kiya hai ki tumhara dare hai ki tum kripa ko kiss karo?

angad: kya kripa aur meine use kiss karo? kabhi nahin ise acha hai ki meine kisi kali bili ko kiss karo?

kripa: angad mujhe koi interest bi nahin mujhe tumhari kiss nahin chaye ise acha hai ki meine kissi nakar ko kiss karloon? woh itna betar hai ki kya bataw tum toh kuch bhi nahin?

angad: acha toh tum mujhe nakaar kehrahi hoon? acha ab meine tume bataungi ki angad ko kiss karna kaisa ata hai?

kripa: ergggggggggggggggghhhhh?

kripa starts running and angad's chassing her becuase he has to kiss her it's a dare? and then suddenly kripa says......................?

guys prithvi's entry will come soon the next time i continue but it would be really different not ekta style?


nazia

Edited by naziaakther10 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#16
guys i have continued it i hope you like it well theres a big new twist comming but this is totally different not ekta style?
nazia
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Posted: 19 years ago
#17
yeah i would darling soon?
nazia
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Posted: 19 years ago
#18
prithvi's entry is next episode and it's really different he will be different and the story would be different too?
nazia
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Posted: 19 years ago
#19
gr8 work Nazia. pls continue soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#20
yeah i would soon if you guys notice prithvi would be entering the next part and for all the prithvi fans don't forget to read?
nazia

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