kabhi Dur Kabhi Pass fanfic (eng ver)

guys ill be posting all the english episodes in here so dont forget to come back n visit this post if u wanna read more. i hope u have already read the character evaluation post. here goes the story. hope u all like it.
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Episode 1

at the sharma residence. morning sun rises and we see a door opening. there is a big living room dining area. there r stairs that leads to the second floor of the house. on the second floor a door opens n a beautiful lookin girl comes out of the room. she is wearing white t-shirt and blue jeans. she is combing through her wet hair wid her fingers. she finally looks up and we get to see a beautiful face wid brown eyes that are sparkeling wid happyness. its kripa.

kripa: is the breakfast ready?

ramukaka: yes, everyone is here. They are all waiting for u downstairs. Come fast.

kripa: coming Ramukaka

she comes running down the stairs to the dining area. we get to see another simple but beautiful looking girl. its harshini. we see gayatri surving breakfast. n suryabhan is reading teh daily news paper. dadi is doin pooja. she enters the dining area wid pooja ki thali. everyone takes the arti n gets ashirvad from her.

dadi: gayatri are the preperation for the evening ready?

gayatri: yes, I have sent invitation cards to everyone. They all must be arriving in the evening. Here is ur juice.

dadi: than u. its all gud. Who is doin the decoration?

kripa: don't worry grandma. Im here.

dadi: oh ur doing the decoration itll turn up really bad then.

every one laughs

kripa: not fair. Im not that bad. Do u remember when I decorated the house on Harshini's birthday the house was looking so beautiful. Everyone was complimenting me.

dadi: but this time u have to decorate the house even more beautifully other wise they will tell u that u made the house look so gud on the birthday but on her wedding it looks nothing compared to the birthday party.

kripa: don't worry grandma. Ill handle everything. I've told the flower man to arrive at 10. its already 10:30 I donno y he hasn't arrived yet.

harshini: I think he is stuck in the traffic. If not then he must b looking for the special flowers u ordered.

kripa: may be ur r right didi.

we hear a door bell.

kripa: ill get it. It must be the flower man. Now he will tell me the 100 reason of being late. People are so irresponsible these days. This generation I tell u.

suryabhan: beta ur from the same generation.

everyone starts to laugh.

kripa goin towards the door. at the door we get to see a back of a man. he is wearing faded colored jeans. white shirt. he is very muscular. he doesnt have phoolon ki tokri but instead a der sara saman wid him.

comin up:
kripa n angad's first encounter. harshini n pritvi's prewedding party and harshini's mehndi.

if u dont no the characters go to the Kabhi Dur Kabhi Pass hindi version in the forums. hope u all like it.

thx my friend she is christian indian so she knows the inidan cultures and all but she doesn't know how to speak it....and she knows i am writing a fan-fic on this and so she asked if she can read other ppl's because i told her everything that will happen in mine and all and not many ppl wwrite in english only i think 1 person did and so she will rlly appreciate you going and writing it in english...and thx from me too!!!

this is damn kewl.....plz continue

thanks u guys ill post the 2nd episode soon. i have written 11 episode in the hindi version if u can read englishhindi do go n read it. im glad u all liked my fanfic thanks for ur response.

hey u guys do let me no if u want me to continue posting this story in english
i will do that if u guys want me to
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