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Posted: 20 years ago
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hey guys well scince every 1 is writin fanfics i thought i shuld give it a try and if u guys dunt like it tell me the truth ok well here goes!!!

Characters

Angad:A stylish guy, who acts love means nothin to him, but inside hes waitin for the perfect girl, hes buildin his career

Krithick:Older than everybody but is still part of the gang, angads older brother, has a secret crush for mishty.

mishty:prithvi's younger sister and has a secret crush for krithick

prithvi: loves his sister very much, has a attraction toward kripa, but hs a dark secret hidden from every 1

Kripa: Same as in show, but dresses differently, building her career

Josh: Energy of the group, not a rockstar

Mahak: Introduced later in the story

We see a red car zoom by, then we r lowered into a light blue and white room, a few flowers here and there, we see the camera zoom into a girls brown eyes. again we see the red car, taking a stop.we see a guy step out, then we see the girls lips form into a smile, the guy enters and it is no other than angad.

A: kripaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

K:The camera is zoomin into a room and kripa pops out kya hai

A:jaldi karo were getting late

K:coming

ten mins later a dashing kripa runs down wearing a light ble glittering sari, hoop earings, and blue high heels

A: kya yaar kripa itni dear lagay magar phir bi bouth lagray ho

K:shut up angad airnt we gettin late aur haan gift utalo

A:va kya teveer hain main party dear se jahraha hoon sirf tumahara liya aurbartau jaise main driver oon no way ur gift u pick it up

K:ok wat ever lets go

In the car

K:angad seriously main teek to lagrahi hoon na checking in the rear view mirror

A:sorry kripa i should have been more clear, tum bouth se bibather lagrahi ho

K:angad!!!!! she punches his arm

A:sorry sorry i was kiddiing ur looking very nice

K:thank u

A:under his breath not

K:wat

A:nothing

the car takes a sudden dtop infront of a very butiful ballroom.

thats it for today sorry for the bad urdu!!

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~Angel~ thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
#2
don't worry if can't write urdu
then try in english

but i loved ur starting
plz cont soon 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
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I LOVED UR STARTIN I THINKS ITS REALLY GOOOD PLZ CONT 😛
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Posted: 20 years ago
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nice starting can't wait for the next part.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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that was great plz continue soon
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Posted: 20 years ago
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guys ill continue latar on today

Edited by Mini786 - 20 years ago
Mini786 thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Part 2
I forgot one character
Aliya:angads sweet cousin but more like of a sis to him
A s angad and kripa step out a blue carstops behind angads red buety.out the car come prithvi and mishty
A:hey dude
P:hey
K:so wats up mishty and did u talk to u noe ahmmmmm?
M:huh whos oh giggling no not yet
A:hey whos this ahmmmm person huh?
P:mishty do u want to talk about sumthing?
M:no bahiA:mishtyits so obvious the ahmmmmm person is me
M:no angad hes more better lookin
K:really
A:just kidding so chalin BAHBI
M: wat howd u noe ? is it that obvious
K:yeah it is
M:it would b better if I could noe about the other side if angad
A:no way u like him so u talk to him
K:prithvi y airnt u sayin anything do u not like this
P:actually kripa I think krithick would b perfect for her
M:bahi
A:ok guys lets go in now
Aa:hey bahi krips ,prithvi and mishty
A:nothing much
J:finally u guys r here lets dans and kripa gifts go on the table there lets see now mishty and angad kripa and krithick and aliya and prithvi
A:ok giving mishty a side glance
:josh continued and me, u noe me I can et any 1 as he turned around to see nobody listenin and walkin away
A: my sweet bahbi doesn't want to dance with me
M:angad do somthin
A:ok ummm bahi I want to dance with kripa so can we switch
Krith:ok soundin casual but lookin happy and glad
The song changed to a close dancing songangad and kripa were dancing when kripa slipped and angad caught her they were so close and for the first time angad and kripa looked into each others eyes deeply. They oth had a sensational feeling . they both stayed likethat for a minutethen got out of there trance
A:kripa I don't feel like dancing
K:yeah me either
Then they went and sat down at a table, it was only kripa and angad and between them one question wat was that feeling burning in them?

Guys as I said my grandpa passed away so I wont log on for a few days so I wont post for a while so plz don't mind and if I do they will b a lil shakey b/c I cant concentrate im so sad bye
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Posted: 20 years ago
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nobody liked it? awwwwwwwwwwwww 😭
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Posted: 20 years ago
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loved it plz cont

angadrox
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Posted: 20 years ago
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that was great
plz cont soon

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