pyar! bas ho jata hai.

well, mmm i am gonna write a story which has the same characters and there personality except its gonna be different which is why i am strating at the part when kripa first come to mumbai.

Kripa: Wow, mumbai what a place. i can't believe i got chosen out of thousand of girls to get a scolarship to world famous music college. I will be living in a dorm provided by the music college with some girl named Mamita. Well maybe she is nice cuz it would be nice if we could get alog. It would make my stay easier but right i should be happy i got in to a.b musical college.

Kripa walked down tp the entrance thinking of all the good thing. Just then someone bumped into her but she was so happy she didn't care. Kripa kept on walking. Little did she know the girl she bumped into was mamita.

Mamita: Useless people, cant u watch where u are going. probaly another one of those people to fufill their dream but they don't know this mumbai and u bettez be careful here ugg.

Mamita walked away to meet someone coming of.

Kripa took the bus to the dorm, the classes would start tommorow.

Dorm people: What is ur name?

Kripa : um, kripa why?

Dorm people: Ofcourse silly we have to give ur dorm room ok.?

Kripa smiling: yep.

Kripa got her number and went to the dorm room assigned 249. WOW she couldn't wait to start her first day of college and best of all meet Privithi, the famous superstar that she couldn't stop wooing.

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well, mmm in this story angad will be kripas best friend and privithi will be u know big and all.

Kripa woke up early and went to the bathroom to take a bth, but as she was going she bumped into mamita waking her up as well.

Mamita turned around and saw kripa: wait a mintue, u are the girl tht bumped into me on railway station right?

Kripa: yea, but wht are doing here, i thought mamita was gonna share a room wit me and ..

Mamita cut her short: mamita well i think that my name i am maimta.

Kripa: well, mamita hello we're roomate then right?

Mamita;: what eva.

Kripa: wow, little wierd.

mamita: what are u here for, to become singer i am guessing right?

Kripa: yea, i can't wait to fufill my dream. U know what when i got accepted to come here i was so happy, and mumbai is the perfect to fufill my dream and i love this mumbai,ooo i can't wait.

Mamita snorting: Mumabi is not as great as u think. i can just like u frm another place and iwas excatly happy as u, but everything changed. you bettez be care ful mumabi ain't no princess lane you bettez watch out for ur self kripa.

kripa felt uneasy but i guess she just said tht incase anwyaz, today was was kripa first day and she was exicted ofcourse. yep awesome.

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Kripa didn't want to ask why she thought mumbai was so bad but something inside her wanted to find out.

Kripa: Well, i was just wondering why do you think mumbai isa bad place cuz u can achieve so many dream here etc.

Mamita: dreams? yea u can achieve dreams here if u are lucky kripa. Anwyaz, don't bother me anymore.

Kripa walked away and got ready to go to college.

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Kripa was walking when someone tapped her from the back. Kripa turned around and saw a guy about her age.

Angad: Hi my name is angad and i was wondering do you know where mrs. lovely's class is cuz i am new and i don't know excatly.

Kripa smiling: Well, i am new too so i am not sure either but i think it's that way. By the way i have her too. Wanna go together?

angad: ok lets go.

Kripa and angad walked down the hall together.

Kripa: So angad where are u from?

Angad: Well, i live in mumbai, i always have how about u.

Kripa: well, i came from nanital and i really wanna be a singer. it woud be so awesome u know.

Angad: yea.

Kripa and angad both got to the class and walked in and kripa was so happy and she couldn't believe it.

Angad: hey kripa sit next to me.

Kripa: ok

Angad: Are we friends kripa?

Kripa: I'll think about it.

Angad smiling: ocourse.

Mrs.lovely: plzz quiet down we have a special guest coming today the superrockstar prithivi is coming today.

Kripa shocked at first but then started to smile. : i can't believe privthi is coming here today.

Mrs. lovely tried to quiet the class down but ti was impossible until privithi came.

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wow really good, plz continue

Originally posted by: Angad's angel

wow really good, plz continue

wow, thanx yaar to everybody. yep awesome.

Originally posted by: Ejaz4eva

wow, thanx yaar to everybody. yep awesome.

no need to say thanx your story is really good👏