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Posted: 18 years ago
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i m still working on it i m a non-violence lover and it is really hard for me to make them fight.any ideas
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Posted: 18 years ago
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tnanx rimsibani 😳 .i will b posting tom for sure enoy my last parts and krrp replying
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
just loved the whole thing from characterization to plot well angads jealous that kripas sharing his love
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey grt fan fic i just looved uit
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Posted: 18 years ago
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recap- kripa gives everybody a suprise.aaliya introduced kripa to her group they all become good frnz.angad was quiet and clam on kripa's deed which suprised everyone.in his bedroomangad sayshe will see kripa in collage
a-(full of anger)samajhti kya hai voh kripa apne aap ko .(mimicks)i m sorry....(angry)sorry my foot.aaj to main papa ki wajah se chup tha warna bata deta ki angad khanna kya cheez hai 😡 😡 .use to maim kal collage main dekh loonga afterall she is a fresher...


PART-6

NEXT MORNING
Angad's bedroom- angad is sleeping like a baby 😳 .he is some where on bed and his blanket is some where else.the cushions are on floor except one which he is hugging.there is a cute smile on his face 😊 as if he is dreaming somethinfg really good.suddenly there is a splash of icy cold water on his face .angad wakes up suddenly 😕 .as he take hold of himself sees nishant,kannan and aaliya laughing at top of their lungs.
a(half in sleep)-kya hua 😕 aur ye bhi koi tareeka hai kisi uthaane ka
n,k,aa- 😆 😆 😆
dadi enters
dadi-achaa ab mere chote aur sabse pyaare pote ko koi nahi satayega
a- 😳 😊 😃
angad is very happy.he feels his share of love is still his and is not shared he is happy to see his family stillplyaing jokes with him otherwise kripa has...dadi snaps in front of angad's face to bring him back.
aa-(to angad)bhai aaj main aapko aaisi news doongi ke aap khushi se pagal ho jayange(looks at kannan)
kannan smiles and is blushing 😳 nishant is happy than ever.dadi is also smiling.angad is still in sleep and is trying to figure out the reason for eveybody's expression.
a(sleepy)-koi is suspense ko khatam karega plz 😡 😕
dilip and naina enters
d-bhaut jald is ghar mein ek nanha sa mehmaan ane wala hai
suddenly angad gets up from is bed and goes to naina
a-mom subah subah aap log mere saath kbc3 kyun khel rahe ho.vaise hi dimaag ka dahi hua pada hai.
all give angad a ur hopeless look 😒
aa-main bua aur aap chacha banne wale hain
a-(casually)to is koun si badi baat hai...
suddenlly he realises what aaliya said 😲 and jumps .
a-main chacha...main chacha banne wala hoon (to kannan hoding her and nishant tight)oooooh bhabhi u r great ab main is ghar ko toy house mainbadal dooga.this is reaaly great can't havev words to explain(to nishaant)aaj se bhabi ki double care karni padegi. [:D/]

everybody knows how much angad loves kids.angad was on cloud nine.he thot how perfect way his day has started.
AT BREAKFAST
ANGAD was much more excited till he hears dadi talking about kripa with naina and kannan .aaliya has gone by now.she left early becos she had basketball. angad thot kripa see u in collage.and gives a mean smile which ofcourse nobody else sees 😈

AT COLLAGE
unlike other days angad was on time.everybody has got the news and was congratulating him josh told angad that today they have planned a suprise party for nishant bhaiya and kannan bhabhi.angad agrees with them and confirmed that he will help them after finishing an important work.he goes to canteen and says something in the ears of owner.angad knew kripa was going to be late as he heard dadi in morning that kripa is notr attengding first 2 lectures as she is busy in unpacking and setteling down
a(thinking)- settle to tumhe main karooga kripa 😈

AFTER TWO LECTURES
all sitting in canteen except angadkripa comes and says hai to everyone.aaliya goes and hugs kripa 🤗
aa-(giggling) hai would be massi.how r u
k-(in same tune)awsome would be bua
m- welcome to our collage
sudeenly a deep and husky voice interrupts
voice-no not yet
all r suprised and turn around.this is angad.all r confused and looking at angad, trying to figure out what he is upto
a- 😈 no u r not at all welcome.after all u e a fresher and as per the rule u have to do what the old students says u to do(looking at josh lakshya.kaavya and josh)what say guys 😉
ka- yeah u r right 😃
l-yaar hum ye kaise bhool gaye 😕 😃
j-angad tunm aisa kuch nahi karoge 👎🏼
kripa is standing confused.she is wondering what is this all going on.angad noticies that
a-kripa confuse mat ho
kaavya interrupts
ka-(wondering)lekin hum kripa se karvange kya 😍
l-i m sure angad ne kuch na kuch to soch ke rakha hoga
angad goes to kripa.they are in front of eachother.all are beside them.angad sees in those beautiful eyes who are looking at him confused.he just wanted to be in those eyes forever.he keeops on staring at her.all looking forward to see what angad will do next but angad does not care,he has seen many girls but have never come across to agirl who has such innocent eyes.he was lost in them.her confised face made him to think twice what he was about to do.but all of sudeen he remembers holi incident and he is back to reality
a-tumne bas ek special drink peena hoga
k-kaisa drink 😕
by the time the waiter comes there with a glass of thick yellow color liquid in it.josh figures out and is about to say something when angad stops himby noddong his head left to right.his eyes are full of anger
a-(full of attitude)angad khanna ko bhigane ki ye choti si punishment hai 😡
all are confused.kripa is shocked by angad's dual personality
a- (turning towards kripa in full attitude)haan to kripa iss mein maine kache eggs tode hai. khass tumhare liye(gives her a dirty look)by world's worst chef(smiles evily) 😈 angad khanna pe color wala water dala.how dare u 😡 dadi jo mujhse ziyaada pyaar kisi se nahi karti kal tumhaare aate hi mujhr bhool gayi.meri dadi...meri dadi
there is alot of pain and anger on his face 😡 🥺 kripa understood everthing but she has never thot that angad will do this.though there first meeting was short kripa thot angad was agood person but now she knew that she was wrong.suddenly a hate grew for angad in her mind and heart.now she had a determinedlook on her face.
a-piyoo isse(raising his his voice in anger and commanding)
k-(very determined and controlling her anger)i will not drink this
by saying this kripa was about to leave when angad hold her hand.now angad is at back of kripa holding her hand.her turns her hand and bring her close he is frowning
a-u have to drink this 😡
k-angad mera haath chodo.and let me make one thing very clear that tumhare jaisi dual aur ghatiya personality wale log mujhe bilkul pasand nahi hain.aur jo log mujhe pasand nahi hote nain unki koi baat nahi maanti.
angad is frowning. whole canteen is is shock .no body have ever dared to speak like this to angad.kripa manges to realse herself from angad's grip.she goes and picks the glass from they tray and brought it in front of angad's face
k- 😡 aur rahe baat is drink ki toh...
she leaves the glass.the glass hit he floor and breaks.the echo of sound of braking glass is going around whole canteen.kripa gives angad and awinninglook and leaves. there stand angad full of shock and anger


i kow it was a complete crap.i really disappointed u guys 😭 .i m sorry.but plz plz plz do reply


ASEVER ❤️
AMNEET 😉
Edited by amneet89 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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THANX🤗

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Posted: 18 years ago
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I TOLD U ALL IM A DUMBO, I WROTE THIS PART AS PART -4

I CAN'T REMEMBER ABOUT MY OWN FF

Edited by amneet89 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Simiran

its good cont soon please and can u make them a little longer parts its really good

I HOPE THIS PART IS LONG ENOUGH😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
hey i jusr read all you write verry well and no need to say sorry ok and conti soon i love to read 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i just started reading... awesome!!! i just hope they dont get carried away....

continue soooooooonnn

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