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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bluff_2911

damn GOOD KEEP IT UP 😃 plz add some more 😳



thanx bluff....i mwriin
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: banizz

arre jaan u heard wrong...i din go anywhere bu yes i had gone for a few months to canada to meet my other half..i just cae back last august but u had yer nos. n all changed....aur uske baad i got admissioned in hindu colg...silly i m doin b. cm hnrs.




great i m doin mathematical science....lets meet up...u know wat priya i have to tell u a lotttttttttt......man life was so borin without u.....nd u are so evil...jab aayi this then u cud have taken ma no. from neha. or mani......wat abt that...but u r 4given....hey...hw did u like m a fanfic?
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: rimsibani




great i m doin mathematical science....lets meet up...u know wat priya i have to tell u a lotttttttttt......man life was so borin without u.....nd u are so evil...jab aayi this then u cud have taken ma no. from neha. or mani......wat abt that...but u r 4given....hey...hw did u like m a fanfic?

its nice....prab lets meet at delhi haat..what sya....yaar i really wanna meet u.....jaan i m free for u the whole week....temme....actually my email id is teh same ....come online..we will talk there....k?...aur listen..ur fanfic is good.....u will not stop writing... u get that?? you will not because I am gonna read it...now cum online.😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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k..i will not sweetu..nd yes my id is also da same...n i m cumnin!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I just read you fanfiction today and you had great parts. Please Continue Soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey thanx...actually i m njuz abt to post another part
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: karipa

be fasttttttttt plzzzzzzzzzzzz



onits way, hun😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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#7

In the morning she left early for angads home. As she reached heis home, she thought. So she tried his cell, but it was still switched off.
SHE GOT IRRITATEDAND THOUGHT THAT SHE WOULD HERSELF GO IN THERE. AS SHE GOT OUT OF THE CAR, DADI WHO WAS ALSO GOING IN SPOTTED HER.
"Arre beta, kripa tum?" she called out to her. Kripa turned and saw that it was dadi. ' oh god! Ab main kya kahungi dadi ko'.
"who dadi main to abs aise he", the struggle going on in her mind must have shown on her face because then addi asked, "kya baat hai kripa? Tum itni pareshan lag rahi ho?"
kripa din luk directly at her and replied, " NMahi dadi, aisi koi baat nahi ahi."
"Nahi kripa, mujhe 65 years ka experience hai, beta tum bahut pareshan lag rahi ho.", she paused and then asid, "Agar kuch tumhe pareshan kar raha hai toh bol do, kyunki jab tak tum use apne dil mein rakhogi, who tumhe tab tak pareshan karta rahega jab tak who naasoor nahi ban jata. Aur tumhe pata toh hoga hi ki naasoor kitna bada dukh hai."
Kripa felt dadi was right and when she felt that all her troubles are too much for her, she started crying and tehn she blurted , "dadi can we talk, please?"
"Of course beta", she said smilingly, "lets go to my house." Kripa drove both of tehm to her house. Kripa was crying very much and then she told addi everything. Each and every single thing.
When she had finished dadi smiled and said,
"kripa tumhe kya lagat hai, angad tumhare saath aisa kyun kar raha hai?"
"pata nahi dadi, mujhe toh kuch samajh nahi aa raha ki angad iss sabh mein josh ko beech mein kyun laa raha hai, aur agar laa bhi raha hai toh itni sick baat kyun kar raha hai." She said half crying.
"hmmm…." Dadi took a breath and thought, 'yeh ladki bhi ana, isse abhi tak anhi pata chala, k angad isse pyaar karne laga hai?' then she smiled to herself and said, "kripa tum chinta mat karo mai angad se baat karungi."
"pakka dadi?" she asked her.
"pakka. Ab tum ghar jao, aur yeh rona dhona band karo….uuuf yeh khich khich , agar dadi se baat karni hai, to hiss sab ko band karma hoga."
Kripa den wiped her taers and smiled.
"that's like my good girl."
Dadi and kripa had breakfast together and then she left.
All her way home kripa could not help but think about the way angad had held her, she was so close to him…..so close that she could actually feel his breathing ….so close that she could actually feel hers and his soul meet. Suddenly the thot of mishty hating her crossed her mind and she felt hatred for angad. Pure hatred.

Meanwhile at Khanna residence, angad had came back home very late last night and was very heavily drunk. He thought about the time when he held kripa so close to him...that he could actually count the few freckles she had …. She was so gentle and delicate but he had held her arm so tightly, it must have hurt her.
"What crap, yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai." He said to himself and shook his head. " all these thoughts dammit. Usne mujhe thappad maraa tha mera bas chalta tohmain use choddta nahi."
So his whole day passed by thinking, smiling, thinking, fuming and thinking about kripa.
Then the thought of her holding josh's hand to get up crossed his mind, and he was full of fury. So he took out his punchbag out and tried to vent out his feelings on it. Then somebody knocked on his bedroom door,
"kaun hai?", he asked.
"teri dadi.", it was dadi.
Angad smiled and said," dadi ko knock karne ki zaroorat nahin hai. Dadi owns angad." He hugged her.
"cahl chal, batien kam bana.agar itna h hai toh dadi ko batata kyun nahi?"
" Kya, I mean kya dadi?", he was astonished to hear this.
"Wahi, jiski wajah se tu is punchbag ko itna maar raha hai, hmm."
"Arre dadi who to workout—"
"tab fir tu aisi baatien naa kiya kar, I own u, because u don want to tell ur dadi the truth."
"Nahi dadi, main toh sahi mein-", he then paused, looked at her and smiled. She returned the smile and he said, "aapko kaise pata chal jaata hai dadi, aap batao naa. You know everything, sab kuch."
"main teri dadi hoon naa, isiliye." She replied a little amused.
"Theek hai dadi, toh aap mujhe bas itna batadijiye, agar koi hamien tabancha (slap) mare toh hume kya karma chahiye? He asked hesitantly.
"Umm..hume uss se poochna chahiye, ki usne aisa kyun kiya." She said matter of factly.
" aur agar hume pata ho toh?"
"toh hamien dekhna cwoh galti kisne kii jiski wajah se tabaancha pada."
"Aur agar dadi, galti maarne waali ki ho?" he was lost in thots now.
"Tab depend karta hai ki hum galat kise kehte hain aur sahi kise." She said this and got a little irritated. Indeed it was a tough job to make angad see the way.
"dadi, aap mujhe galat maanti hain na?" he said, his voice full of sarcasm.
" Matlab kya tumhe kise ne tabanchaa maara hai?" she wanted to haer his side of srory but to be true she was taken aback at what he said.
"Oh dadi abniye mat. Maine subah aapko aur krpa ko yahan se jaate hue dekha tha."
"Achcha hai, main bhi usi bare mein baat karma chahti hoon."
"Dadi aap mujhe kripa ki problem solve karne ka mauka toh do."
"Angad problem kripa ki nahi, tumhari hai. She din think twice before saying this. "kripa ne tumhe kuch nahin kaha, tum uss bachchi ke peeche pad gaye ho."
"Dadi", he was trying to keep his calm now. She was his dadi and she was siding up for kripa. "Aap mujhe waqt do, main iss sab ko theek kar doonga."
" theek hai tumhe maine waqt diya, par tumhe bhi mujhe iske badle promise dena hoga."
"promise."
"baat to sunlo angad, tum mishty aur kripa ke bich ki saari problems door karoge, aur dobara aisa kuch anhi karoge jisse uske rishton mein daraar aaye. Promise me angad." She demanded.
"Pakka , promise."
"Who bachchi subah se itna ro rahi hai, keh rahi thi wapas jaana chahti hai. Angad badla hamesha limits mein reh kar poora hota hai, but u, u crossed all ur limits."
"Arre dadi. I will use the right way now. Pukka. Promise." He smiled but he felt a dreadful guilt pang in him. He knew it was all his mistake.
After a dayz time, angad cleared up everything between kripa and mishty by telling the latter a goofy story of how he dint read kripas sms abt the party.
Edited by rimsibani - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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#8


After this dadi and kripa met almost everyday. But she and angad did not face each other since then. On one of these visits,
"Dadi kya aap mere saath who jo famous shiva mandir hai wahan chalengi?"
"arre kripa tumne toh mere dil ki baat keh di. Aaj wahan pe badi aarti hai, main wahan jaana hi chahti thi." She smiled and said.
"theek ahi dadi, toh aaj shaam chalien."
"umm..haan, but actually maine na aaj angad ko promise kiya tha ki aaj who aur main ikatthe lunch karenge and its almost ready. Who aata hi hoga." She said.
But kripa, who was trying to avoid him, thought that she would leave now and come back later.
"Aur main chahti hoon", dadi continued, "kit um hamaare saath lunch karo." She smiled at her and knew that she was planning to leave.
"kripa, kya soch rahi ho? Jaane ka? Ab kyat um uske saamne kabhi nahi jaogi? Face him. Moreover usne sab theek toh kar diya hai." Kripa knew that dadi was right.
"par dadi, mujhme himmat nahi hai."
"Toh himmat banao. Mujhe nahin pata. Tum ruk rahi ho bas. End the topic now." She commanded and went to the kitchen. Kripa was in deep thots wen she suddenly heard the clang-clang of utensils. She ran towards the kitchen and saw that dadi had fallen to the ground and was crying in pain, "kripa…aah…kripa"
"Dadi, dadi kya hua?" but she very well knew that whatever that had happened to addi was serious. She panicked and dint know what to do. She was in no postion to lift dadi and bring her in the room, all she could think of was getting a doctor, but she hardly knew anyone there. Then she remembered that angad was coming so she called him.
Angad was surprised to seekripas cell number on his screen. He picked it up and said disinterestedly,
"Kya hai kripa?"
"Angad… angad…. Dadi….. main yahan dadi ke paas hoon…aur…aur unhe patanahi kya…", she then yelled at him, "Angad jaldi dadi ke ghar aao, jaldi."
Angad was confused as well as scared to hear all this.
"Kripa, tum..tum wahin raho, main, main aa raha hoon." On his way abck he thot all the horrible things that could have happened to dadi, and started crying.
"Dadi, aapko kuch nahi hoga, angad aa raha hai."Kripa said this to an unconscious dadi.
Within minutes angad had comeand they both took her to the hospital. Angad din utter a single word and kripa too was crying. The doctors in the hospital admitted her in the I.C.U.
Angad as obvious was not reacting to anything, kripa thought it would be wise to call the others. So she called dilip and naina and her mom.
Her dad had gone to Australia with josh for some business work. The three came as soon as they could.
"angad, mama? Kripa how is she, ab kaisi hain?" naina came and asked, she was very upset.
"Who…aunty, amin dadi ke saath thi, ander se aawaz aayi, main gayi to dekhaki dadi neeche giri hui thi—" kripa now got into a hysterical position. Gayatri acme forward to console her.
"Excuse me, Mr. Khanna." The doctor who was cheking dadi came and said, "Mrs. Khanna has, I am sorry to say, drifted into coma. Ab unko shayad kal tak hi hosh aaye.", dilip and naina was almost about to breakdown when he added, "but its acute, so please don't think its very serious. Aap Mr. Khanna, plz saari formalities poori kar dijiye." He said this to angad, but angad was sitting and was totally devastated and he dint reply.
"Aap mujhe bata dijiye, main kar deta hoon." Dilip said.
"ok, main abhi paper laata hoon." The doctor then sent some papers, which dilip signed.
"Kripa achcha hua beta tum waha thi." He said,"achcha naina, tum angad aur kripa yahan se jao, media aati hi hogi, gayatri tum rukjao."
"nahin dilip, main nahi jaungi. Angad, kripa beta tum dono ghar jao."
"Nahi naina, baat samajhneki koshish karo, tum, angad aur kripa jao. Gayatri, I hope you have no problems, please stay." He added looking at gayatri.
"of course dilip. Main rukti hoon. Dekho naina agar tum rukogi toh media waale tarah tarah ki baatien karenge, aur look at angad, use bhi to dekhna hai,. Amin sharmas ki spokesperson hoon, main ruk jaati hoon.
"Theek ahi", naina said, "angad , kripa, cahlo. Angad. Angad?" she called him twice, but he did not get up. Dilip then shook him and then his senses drifted back. So finally, the three returned to Khanna mansion. Angad went to his bedroom and stayed there the whole afternoon. Kripa and naina were sitting in the drawing room. They kept themselves in touch with dilip, but dadis condition did not improve. And so went the afternoon, wellwishers came and went. Then at 8.00 pm gayatri came and relieved some of their tension by telling them that dadis condition was improving, but she was still in coma.
" Arre kripa, naina ne kuch anhi khaya hai, jao make soup for her."
" ji mama."
" nahin beta maine kuch nahi khana. Don't bother."
"naina , kuchtoh kha lo."
" nahi gayatri, bhookh nahin hai. Mama ki tension lagi hui hai."
"achcha aur angad ne? usne kuch khaya hai kya?" gayatri asked.
" Arre kahan gayatri, who to subah se bahar hi nahi aaya."
"Toh kripa jao, jaake angad ke liye soup bana do. Jao."
"ji mama." She went to the kitchen and made soup for him. It was raedy within minutes and she went to his room to give it to him. She knocked twice but there was no response. So she opened the door and asw that he was…………



continue it tom………


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Posted: 18 years ago
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#8


After this dadi and kripa met almost everyday. But she and angad did not face each other since then. On one of these visits,
"Dadi kya aap mere saath who jo famous shiva mandir hai wahan chalengi?"
"arre kripa tumne toh mere dil ki baat keh di. Aaj wahan pe badi aarti hai, main wahan jaana hi chahti thi." She smiled and said.
"theek ahi dadi, toh aaj shaam chalien."
"umm..haan, but actually maine na aaj angad ko promise kiya tha ki aaj who aur main ikatthe lunch karenge and its almost ready. Who aata hi hoga." She said.
But kripa, who was trying to avoid him, thought that she would leave now and come back later.
"Aur main chahti hoon", dadi continued, "kit um hamaare saath lunch karo." She smiled at her and knew that she was planning to leave.
"kripa, kya soch rahi ho? Jaane ka? Ab kyat um uske saamne kabhi nahi jaogi? Face him. Moreover usne sab theek toh kar diya hai." Kripa knew that dadi was right.
"par dadi, mujhme himmat nahi hai."
"Toh himmat banao. Mujhe nahin pata. Tum ruk rahi ho bas. End the topic now." She commanded and went to the kitchen. Kripa was in deep thots wen she suddenly heard the clang-clang of utensils. She ran towards the kitchen and saw that dadi had fallen to the ground and was crying in pain, "kripa…aah…kripa"
"Dadi, dadi kya hua?" but she very well knew that whatever that had happened to addi was serious. She panicked and dint know what to do. She was in no postion to lift dadi and bring her in the room, all she could think of was getting a doctor, but she hardly knew anyone there. Then she remembered that angad was coming so she called him.
Angad was surprised to seekripas cell number on his screen. He picked it up and said disinterestedly,
"Kya hai kripa?"
"Angad… angad…. Dadi….. main yahan dadi ke paas hoon…aur…aur unhe patanahi kya…", she then yelled at him, "Angad jaldi dadi ke ghar aao, jaldi."
Angad was confused as well as scared to hear all this.
"Kripa, tum..tum wahin raho, main, main aa raha hoon." On his way abck he thot all the horrible things that could have happened to dadi, and started crying.
"Dadi, aapko kuch nahi hoga, angad aa raha hai."Kripa said this to an unconscious dadi.
Within minutes angad had comeand they both took her to the hospital. Angad din utter a single word and kripa too was crying. The doctors in the hospital admitted her in the I.C.U.
Angad as obvious was not reacting to anything, kripa thought it would be wise to call the others. So she called dilip and naina and her mom.
Her dad had gone to Australia with josh for some business work. The three came as soon as they could.
"angad, mama? Kripa how is she, ab kaisi hain?" naina came and asked, she was very upset.
"Who…aunty, amin dadi ke saath thi, ander se aawaz aayi, main gayi to dekhaki dadi neeche giri hui thi—" kripa now got into a hysterical position. Gayatri acme forward to console her.
"Excuse me, Mr. Khanna." The doctor who was cheking dadi came and said, "Mrs. Khanna has, I am sorry to say, drifted into coma. Ab unko shayad kal tak hi hosh aaye.", dilip and naina was almost about to breakdown when he added, "but its acute, so please don't think its very serious. Aap Mr. Khanna, plz saari formalities poori kar dijiye." He said this to angad, but angad was sitting and was totally devastated and he dint reply.
"Aap mujhe bata dijiye, main kar deta hoon." Dilip said.
"ok, main abhi paper laata hoon." The doctor then sent some papers, which dilip signed.
"Kripa achcha hua beta tum waha thi." He said,"achcha naina, tum angad aur kripa yahan se jao, media aati hi hogi, gayatri tum rukjao."
"nahin dilip, main nahi jaungi. Angad, kripa beta tum dono ghar jao."
"Nahi naina, baat samajhneki koshish karo, tum, angad aur kripa jao. Gayatri, I hope you have no problems, please stay." He added looking at gayatri.
"of course dilip. Main rukti hoon. Dekho naina agar tum rukogi toh media waale tarah tarah ki baatien karenge, aur look at angad, use bhi to dekhna hai,. Amin sharmas ki spokesperson hoon, main ruk jaati hoon.
"Theek ahi", naina said, "angad , kripa, cahlo. Angad. Angad?" she called him twice, but he did not get up. Dilip then shook him and then his senses drifted back. So finally, the three returned to Khanna mansion. Angad went to his bedroom and stayed there the whole afternoon. Kripa and naina were sitting in the drawing room. They kept themselves in touch with dilip, but dadis condition did not improve. And so went the afternoon, wellwishers came and went. Then at 8.00 pm gayatri came and relieved some of their tension by telling them that dadis condition was improving, but she was still in coma.
" Arre kripa, naina ne kuch anhi khaya hai, jao make soup for her."
" ji mama."
" nahin beta maine kuch nahi khana. Don't bother."
"naina , kuchtoh kha lo."
" nahi gayatri, bhookh nahin hai. Mama ki tension lagi hui hai."
"achcha aur angad ne? usne kuch khaya hai kya?" gayatri asked.
" Arre kahan gayatri, who to subah se bahar hi nahi aaya."
"Toh kripa jao, jaake angad ke liye soup bana do. Jao."
"ji mama." She went to the kitchen and made soup for him. It was raedy within minutes and she went to his room to give it to him. She knocked twice but there was no response. So she opened the door and asw that he was…………



continue it tom………



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