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Posted: 20 years ago
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She runs away, but Angad just doesn't leave her alone he runs after her.

K: what is it now.

A: nothing, I'm bored Kripa, its really fun talking to u.

k: well ur a boring person

A: awww ur so sweet

K: Angad please na.

A: ok meri ma, I'm leaving. Here sit wid ur book.

K: Thanku, for letting me read my book

A: ur welcome and when u two get married don't forget to invite me.

K: ok I won't

A: bye

K: ok bye, go now.

He goes away, thinking "this gurl is crazy."

They both go to class.

(I'm changing the story a bit. Angad isn't a rockstar but still rich. Kripa and angad take the same classes at the academy.)

Angad goes in and sees kripa, he goes to her and says, "u know what Kripa I never noticed u before. But now where ever I go ur there."

k: ummm maybe thats coz the classes just started two days ago.

A: ha that could be the reason

K: just shut up.

The teacher comes in and tells them that there is gonna be a field trip to Delhi. Anyrbody who's interested can sign up.

Ok now i'll continue later.

luv ya raman

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Posted: 20 years ago
#22
too good please continue it yaar
Kaj! thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
#23
sorry deepey, i didnt know u carried on
deepey thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
#24

oops kaj sowwwwwwy. I did it again, I didn't know u were gonna continue.

So that there's no confusion, tell me r u gonna write the next part??? or should I.

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Posted: 20 years ago
#25
hey deepey, u wanna carry on or shall i?
Kaj! thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
#26
oops. lol. ok i'll write the next part. is that ok?
deepey thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
#27

It's up to u kaj, whatever u want.😛

this is getting really confusing😆. kaj u write the next part and i'll do the one after that ok.😆

luv ya raman

Edited by deepey - 20 years ago
Kaj! thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
#28

ok i'll mix mine n deepey's story together. Kripa is in the classroom sitting nxt to Angad after they met in the canteen. The teacher is announcing the field trip to delhi.

Angad:so u wanna go?

Kripa:Where?

Angad:to hell, where do u think?

Kripa:naa im quite happy here. But i think u should go

Angad:main delhi ki baat kar raha hoon

Kripa:i dunno. Shayad

Angad:Shayad ka kya matlab?

Kripa:maybe. Main delhi jaa kar kya karoongi.

Angad:masti karenge aur kya

Kripa:Tum bhi jaa rahe ho?

Angad:haan

Kripa:to phir main nahin jaaongi

Angad:kyun? Mere saath sharam aati hai kya?

Kripa:aur nahin to kya? tum sirf gandi baatein karte ho. Sharam to ayegi hi naa?

Angad:hey come on Kripa, be a sport. Chalo na.

Kripa:ok ok, sochoongi. Khush

Angad:😃

Angad:aur haan, packing karte waqt, salwar kameez nikaal kar, mini skirts or dresses pack karna. U'll look hot...gorgeous, sexy...irresistable.

Kripa:ANGAD!!! Ur so sick. Leave me alone😡

She walks off again n Angad is thinking "ye ladki bhi naa, bilkul pagal hai. Uff"

Ok Deepey u can carry on.

(it was quite crap naa?)

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Posted: 20 years ago
#29

Kaj it was really good. How can u say its crap. I loved it👏

Angad:aur haan, packing karte waqt, salwar kameez nikaal kar, mini skirts or dresses pack karna. U'll look hot...gorgeous, sexy...irresistable.

Kripa:ANGAD!!! Ur so sick. Leave me alone😡

She walks off again n Angad is thinking "ye ladki bhi naa, bilkul pagal hai. Uff"

Ok I'll start now.

A: looks after her thiining god this gurl is crazy.

That night Kripa is home alone when the phone rings.

K: hello

hello

K: umm who's this

tumhari maut

K: what, who's this

suna hai, that ur parents are out on a business trip and ur home alone.

K: what who's this

She runs to the door and locks it.

K: hello, hello.

The person hangs up.

kripa is hella scared. She checks the house and thinks I should call somebody.

Just then the door bell rings, kripa is hella scred she goes to the door and slowly opens it. Somebody goes BOOM.

Kripa gets hella scared but its just Angad, he's laughing like crazy at the door and kripa is shaking. She starts hitting him, and yelling: "Angad, u stupid, pagal, duffer, u know u scared me to death."

angad comes inside still laughing and closes the door, "aww poor baby got scared."

Kripa hits him again. "I swear what if i had gotten a heart atteack or something."

A: don't worry, I won't let u die that easily. I still have to torture u.

kripa hits him Again and says " god angad the pjone call really scared me."

A: what phone call, i din't call u

K (gets scared): what if u didn't call me than who was it.

Angad looks at her face and laughs again.

Kripa hits him again, "oh so it was u"

A: god yaar i think u broke some of my bones. Ouch stop hitting me.

K: waisey what r u doing here.

A: nothing, I came to ask if ur going to the field trip. Have u decided yet.

K: No, i stll have to ask my parents

A: why, ur old enough. You can make ur own decisions

K: yeah but still

Ok kaj ur turn.hope u guys liked it.😛 If somebody else wants to continue just tell us. ok

luv ya raman

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Posted: 20 years ago
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K: waisey what r u doing here.

A: nothing, I came to ask if ur going to the field trip. Have u decided yet.

K: No, i stll have to ask my parents

A: why, ur old enough. You can make ur own decisions

K: yeah but still

I'll continue

A: hey im sure they wont mind u going.

K:I know. Lekin main nahin jaana chahti.

A:Kyun?

K:Meri marzi. Ab tum jaa sakte ho. Tumhe sharam nahin aati. Itni raat ko ek ladki ke ghar aate hue.

A:sharam waram, what is that? mujhe sharam nahin aati. Hey Kripa, jab tak tum jaane ke liye haan nahin ke dete main jaaonga nahin

K:Kya???tum yahin rahoge?

A:Ofcourse

K:to phir raho, mujhe kya

Angad gets irritated n naughty at the same time. he goes behind Kripa n lifts her up n swings her. She is screaming

K:ANGAD!!! Chodo chodo.

Angad lyes her down on the sofa n lifts her top n tickles her tummy. She is kicking her legs in the air n laughing non stop

K:Angad stop it pls pls. aaargh pls

A:nahin, jab tak tum haan nahin keh dete main nahin rukoonga.

K:ok ok. Yes. main jaaongi

He stops n covers her tummy. He is sitting on the floor while she sits on the sofa. They look at each other n laugh. Kripa gets a magazine from the table n roles it up n hits him with it. SHe chases him round the house. Then he finally goes out the house runnig while she is catching up

A:Bye Kripa see u 2moro. Meet u at college n be early coz we r all gonna leave for dehli at 8 am.

He says that drives off. She is looking at him driving away n smiling to herself thinking "Pagal. Shaitaan"

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