NEW FANC. WITH A TWIST

Hi all,

i thought lets all get together and have some fun. we all have beenreadin fan fic. lets all make one together.

it very simple. i am starting with the story and someone else can continue from where i left and so on the chain can continue. everyone can include their bit. and then we will see what kinda story we make up. it like chinese whispers with a twist.

hoping u all will like it.

chao,

STORY BEGINS:

a young girl with beutiful eyes, gr8 hair, pettie and simple anmed kripa lands at the mumbai station with her father. there she goes to stay with her father's friend to learn music. she is staying there and everyone is nice to her except for a few ppl. she meets a smart, debonair young man there who happens to be the son of her father's friend. his name is angad. he is passionate a born flirt. he also a rock star( i know the start is the same but had to keep the spirit of the show alive.).

they meet each other in the music academy. kripa is walkin in the corridor. angad is talkin to someone in the corridor and kripa is walkin her nose deep into books and a wlakman on her head. she doesnt see him and bangs into him. her books fall down and angad bends down to help her.

their eyes meet.............they keep on lookin..... at each other...

WHAT DO U ALL THINK WILL HAPPEN NEXT. PLEASE CONTINUE

ok i'll continue.

A: what the hell. Dekh kar chala karo. Can't u see through those fat ass glasses ur wearing.

K: oops sorry. I didn't mean too.

angad just brushes her off, yeah yeah whatever.

They both walk past eachother.

somebody else do it, i really have no energy left after I eat dinner. I'm feeling really lazy.

gr8 job guyz! itz been a long time sinse ive had time to read fan ficz! im not much of a writer so plz continue! and deepey u did a gr8 job even if u feel lazy! sunshine good job!

After bumping into each other, they go their own ways.

Angad goes to the canteen in the academy to get himself coffee. He gets the coffee n turns around. He accidentally spills the coffee on the girl behind him in the queue. The girl is kripa. She is shocked n her top is stained with the coffee.

Someone pls continue

noone continued? nevermind, i'll continue.

Angad:Damn i didnt see u there.

Kripa:Thanx for the shower (in a jokey kind of a way. not rude)

Angad:Hey its not my fault. Y were u so near to me in the queue

Kripa:Hello?! This is a queue. If i stand 5 metres away from u, someone else will push in. U know its ur fault but ur not gonna agree to it. N sorry, u dont even know the meaning of that word right? Instead of saying sorry ur blaming everything on me.

Angad:well u bumped into me in the morning too.

Kripa: Yes i know. It was my fault n i said sorry. Now its ur fault say sorry.

Angad:What?! Forget it!

Kripa:uff...theres no point waisting my time on u. Keep ur sorry to ur self n make sure ur ego isnt bigget than ur head or else u wont be able to walk through the door.

Saying that she leaves n looks at her leaving furiously. He is confused. He has never been spoken like that to by anyone. For the first time someone who is young has dominated him (thats what he feels like). Then he shakes his head thinking "Kaisi ladki hai uff". Then he spots this slim n sexy girl. so now he is busy chatting her up as usual.

Now someone pls continue

Ok i'll continue I really like this story line.

Angad is chatting wid some girl while Kripa just looks at him angrily.

She leaves from there. She goes home and her mom says, "Kripa beta hurrry up and go get changed. Today ur dad's best friend and his family are coming over for dinner."

K: ok mom. I'll be right back.

In the evening Naina, Dilip, Angad, and Karthick come to their house.

Everybody is hugging and chatting while Angad is just sitting there being ignorant. he thinks "Kaha mom ne phasa diya."

Just then Kripa comes out with some juice for everybody, looking really pretty in a baby blue plain salwaar suit.

Angad is shocked seeing Kripa. Kripa also looks at him but doesn't say anything.

She hugs Naina and Dilip and simply says hi to Angad and Karthick.

(I'm making all the family members positive)

Then she goes back inside in her room.

Outside everybody is eating and enjoying thmselves while Angad just keeps looking at the door in which kripa went. He feels really uncomfortable.

Kripa's dad notices this and says, "R u ok beta. I know u must not be used to this. Being a famous rockstar and all."

A: no i'm ok uncle I just need some fresh air.

Kripa's dad: "ok why won't u go outside and have a walk. i'll ask Kripa to show u around."

He calls Kripa outside, "Kripa beta tum Angad ko apna ghar dekhao, garden, show him the paintigs that u made."

(By the way Kripa's family is pretty rich too)

Ok I'll continue later.

Then Kripa comes into the living the living room n doesnt look so please.

She looks at Angad n says "Chaliyen".

They both start walking towards the Garden

Angad: Hum bahar kyun jaa rahein hai?

Kripa: Aap ne hi to kaha tha ki aap ko fresh air chahiye

Angad:Haan chahiye par mujhe tumhara ghar dekhna hai, tumhari paintings aur most importantly, tumhara bedroom.😈

Kripa isnt too pleased

Kripa:sorry par main kisi areh gaireh ko apna kamra nahin dikhati. Par kyun ki papa ne kaha hai to main tumhe dikhaoongi. BUT Dont touch anything in it. ok?

Angad:yeah ok whatever

They enter her bedroom n Angad feels like he is in paradise. He looks around him. He is mesmerised by her photos n paintings.

Angad: Nice pics yaar. U look much better in the photos.

Kripa:Thanx (sarcastically)

Kripa is feeling irritated n uncomfortable around him coz of what happened in the academy. But she still speaks to him politely as he is a guess in her house.

Kripa: Aap kuch peeyenge?

Angad: Yeah sure.

She goes downstairs to get him something to drink. Meanwhile Angad is roaming around her room touching her things. He spots her diary. He reads todays entry:

Uff...what a crap day. Pata nahin kiska chehra dekha tha maine ute samay. Academy ek batameez ladka milla. Kya naam hai uska..haan Angad the rockstar. Ghamandi. Sorry kehna nahin jaanta. Samajtha hoga ki har ladki usse inferior hai. I dont think so. hes dealt with the wrong girl. Agar woh aaj sorry kehta to shayad main uske baare mein ye sab nahin likthi par usne mera mood kharab kar diya. Sirf mood bhi nahin, t-shirt bhi.

Angad is amused by this. Kripa comes into the room n sees him with the diary. She puts the drink on the table n snatches the diary off him

Kripa:How dare u? Maine kaha tha na kisi bhi cheez ko haath mat lagana. To phir tumne mere diary ko kyun khola?

Angad:Agar private hai to samhaal kar rakna chahiye, table par nahin rakna chahiye. Waise Kripa, parne do naa. Mere itni taarif kiya hai apni diary mein. Main tumhari previous entries bhi parna chahti hoon

Angad is trying to get the diary off her but she is trying to run n holding it behind her.

Kripa:Angad no, go away.

She bangs onto the table n some pics of her fall. They r modelling type pics where she is wearing sexy outfits. Angad sees this n is impress n cant get his eyes off the pics.

Angad:Wow!!! Tum sexy bhi ho? Yummy!

Kripa:ANGAD!!!

Angad:arre sach hi to keh raha hoon. Tum modelling karti ho kya?

Kripa:Nahin woh mere cousins mere ghar ayethe aur hum ne aise hi, mazaak ke liye photos khinche. Pls give me my photos.

Kripa's mum: Kripa...Kripa, neeche aajao. Angad ko bhi boolao, khaana ready hai.

Kripa is tensed n saying:Ayi mum

She leaves her diary on the table n rushes down stairs. Angad puts the pics in the diary n tucks his diary in the back of his trousers. He pulls his shirt out to cover it. He goes downstairs to join them for dinner