fan-fic..pyaar main pagal

hi friends, im bhavna..just joined IF today and im very happy to be here😃...its such an addictive place right? anyways, i've written a fan- fic just for fun...please read it and if its boring or u dont like it please inform me so that i know...i have not wrote a fan-fic before so this is my first time...bye

Kripa and Angad have been childhood friends as (just like the actual serial) kripa's father and angad's father were good friends but they have not met for 10 years.

Kripa and angad are exactly the same characters as in the serial, kripa believes in love and angad does not.

And now, kripa is coming to mumbai from nainital to become a singer and is going to stay with the khanna family.

The story begins when kripa reaches the Khanna house.

Kripa rings the doorbell and Teddy answers it.

Teddy: Can I help you maam?

Kripa: Haan. Im Kripa Sharma, main Mr Khanna se milne aayi

Hoon.

Teddy: yes, yes. Dhilip sahab ne mujhe baataya tha ke

aap aane Wale hain. Please come in.

Kripa : Thanks.

Kripa follows Teddy into the house and is amazed by all the

Beautiful decoration of the house.

Kripa : wow! Kitna khoobsurat ghar hain!

Dhillip : thank you. Tum kripa hoon right? How are you?

lovely To See you Again! Flight kaisa rahaan?

Kripa: im fine uncle, and the flight was great. Aap kaise hai?

Dhillip : main bhi theek hoon beta. Waise tumhare papa kaise

hai? Its been a long time since I last saw him.

Kripa : he is also fine uncle. Aapko bohot yaad karte hai.

Dhillip : great! Kripa beti, humne tumhare rehne ka intezaam

Humhare outhouse main ki hain. Tum abhi wahaan

jao, And then come here for dinner. Main tumse

naina, anitah, Karthik and angad se milwa doonga.

they will be very happy to see you.

Kripa : ok uncle. I am also very excited to meet them.

Teddy takes kripa to the outhouse and kripa is left there feeling very exited about her new life im mumbai.

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Kripa rings the doorbell and teddy shows here to the dining room where the rest of the family is seated.

As kripa enters the room, everyone smiles at her and greet her,

Except angad, who is staring at her, mesmerized by her beauty.

He just can't take his eyes of her, as if this was the first time he saw a girl.

Dhillip: kripa! Come in. you remember naina aunty don't

you?And what about karthik and angad? You three

used to Play together all the time, remember? And this

is anitah..(sorry but I forgot how she is related to

them..😆)im sure you must be very excited to see

them after such a long time.

Kripa : yes uncle, I am.

Naina: hallo kripa beti. How are you? Aur ghar pe sab kaise hain?

Kripa : everyone is fine, aunty.

Naina : great. Come on lets start eating now. I hope you like

the Food.

Kripa sits down opposite angad and smiles at him, and he smiles back. 😳

During the whole meal, angad could not take his eyes off kripa.

He thinks to himself: She looks so different…I wonder if she's single..oh god..yeh mujhe kya hogaya hain…main kripa ke bara main aisa kyu sooch raha hoon??? I have never felt like this for anyone before…what is happening to me??

After the meal, kripa says good night to everybody and goes back to the outhouse to rest as she is feeling very tired after her flight.

In angad's room, he is still thinking of kripa. 😳The way she laughed, smiled, her beautiful eyes….her red lips…her rosy cheeks…and falls asleep after a while.

yeh mujhe kya hua hain....

kya hogaya hain...

kuch mil gaya hain...

kuch kho gaya hain...

yeh kyu hua hai...

itna peta hain...

main uski deewana hoon....

ok hope this part is nice too...sorry if my spelling for the hindi dialougues are not correct...

that really good please continue!!!

The next morning, angad woke up early and went to the beach for a walk and is surprised to find kripa there, sitting on a bench, looking at the sunrise.

Angad: kripa? Hi!

Kripa: oh hi angad! What are you doing here so early in the morning?

Angad: I just came for a walk…what are you doing here so early in the morning?

Kripa: wo mujhe raath ko neend nahin aa rahi thi aur subha bhi jaldi uthgayi isliye main beach aayi morning walk ki liye.

Angad: oh ok. I hope you are feling alright..you are not feeling sick are you? Please tell me if you are, I can bring you to the clinic.

Kripa: no angad, im absolutely fine. Thanks anyway. so tell me, how have you been? Kitne saalo ke liye hum nahin mile…tum ne

Mujhe miss kiya ke nahin?

Angad: tumhe kya lagta hain?

Kripa : nah…I don't think you missed me..itne badhe rock star jo ban gaye hoon.. im sure you never feel lonely with all your fans

Chasing you around all the time…right? Waise nainital main tumhare bohot saare fans hain..

Angad: oh really? And are you one of them?

Kripa: haha very funny…

Angad: kripa yaad hain jab hum chote the to hum hamesha beach par aake sand castles build karte the?

Kripa: haan, mujhe yaad hain. Aur phir tum hamesha mare upar sand dalte the.. You were so irritating!

Angad is very happy that kripa remembers their childhood days so well..😃

Angad: maine kab aisa kiya? I was a good boy ok. 😆You were the one who used to irritate me with your stupid dolls…I hope you have grown out of them…

Kripa: hey, I liked my dolls ok...mare dolls ke bare main kuch mat

Kehna…

Angad: ok ok…hey tum yahan singer banne aayi hoon na?

Kripa: yup. That's my goal. I want to make singing my career. I

Just hope I can become a successful singer like you.

Angad: well, im not sure you can become as successful as me( he jokes)…but Im sure ke tum apne sapna pura karogi. In fact, I have

A brilliant idea…tum mare saath kyun nahin kaam karti? After all I am looking for a new singing partner for my next album.

Kripa: nahin angad..you are such a popular and successful rockstar.. main tumhare saath kaise gaa sagti hoon. Im not even

As experienced as you are..tumhe to ek bohot ache aur

Experienced singing partner hona chahiye.

Angad: oh come on kripa.. in fact I would consider myself to be

So lucky if you could become my singing partner. Maine

Tumhe gaate hua suna hai…aur tum saachme bohot

Talented ho..my voice is nothing compared to yours..

Please kripa…hum dost hain na, to jab hum saath main

Kaam karenge to kitna mazaa aiga! Please??

Kripa: angad…you really know how to compliment a woman…

Angad : ya that's one of my specialities…and he winks at her…😉

So, are you going to sing with me?

Kripa : ok…id love to…but only if you are sure that its o.k.… I don't want to create any problems..

Angad : ya of course its ok…thanks kripa for agreeing to sing with me… im sure that we will do a great job together..

Kripa : no, thanks to mujhe tumse khena chahiye.. U don't know what a great opportunity you have given me to become a singer… thanks angad… you are a real friend..

Angad : hey, no problem…anyways, we should be heading back now..

Kripa : yea you're right…lets go

Angad smiles at kripa and they walk home together, talking and joking around… angad is elated that kripa has agreed to sing with him as this will give him an opportunity to spend some time with her and get to know her better..

ok guys..i hope you liked it..i know i must have made hundreds of spelling mistakes😃...please dont mind..and please write your comments too...