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Originally posted by: angelgirl_29299

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promo:

we see karthik and priya get married,then we see a picture of both of them,someone is holding it and burning it.who must it be?

Very Good job, keep KYPH alive....really do miss this show....all I ask of you is to write more English so I would understand everything...Keep It up....

part nine
in the afternoon:
angad is playing wid the kids and he's chasing them.they pass by karthik and he starts to laugh.then they pass by aliya,kannan and priya and they start to laugh too.then they pass shabbir and nishhant and they both start to laugh too.now kripa is folding cloths and standing next to the bed,now the kids and angad come running in.angad trips over something and falls on kripa.they both stare at eachother when kripa says "angad utho meine baut kaam karne hai,utho!" angad says "agar mein nehi utha to" kripa says "to..umm..pata nehi lekin utho,varna mein scream karongi" angad says "scream karlo" kripa is about to scream when angad covers her mouth.then kripa bites his hand and angad gets up saying "ouch,kripa mein abhi tume teek karta ho" angad chases kripa around the house while the kids run after them and watch.all of them have fun.when they reach the living room they fall on the sofa.kripa is on top of angad and both of them are laughing so hard.
then eveyone decides to go shopping.kripa tells angad "angad tum hume shopping par lekar jow na plz!" angad gets surprised at kripa says "mein to tum logo ko to 2 -3 din paila lekar geya who!" kripa says "plz angad aur waisey bhi dekho priya jub sey aye hai,she's bored aur i want to spend time wid my best friend for a while plz!" angad says "okay get ready and quick!" kripa runs upsatsir and tells everyone to get ready for shopping.(shopping for priya and karthik's engagement).they all then go shopping.kripa buys a pink dress and priya buys a red dress and kannan buys a blue one and aliya buys a purple one.they buys more stuff that matches their clothes like jewwlery,shoes and stuff.then when they r done,everyone goes back home.they have their dinner and then they go to sleep.the next morning everyone is having their breakfast they r laughing about wat happen the past few days.then the door bells rings.kripa goes to open the door.she opends the door and she see's someone and is surprised,it ends on kripa's surprised face.
sorry it's short,i gotta go and get ready,i'm going to new jersey,i'll post another part if i get time to go on the computer there.anywayz i hope u liked it.
😊

recap:she opends the door and she see's someone and is surprised,it ends on kripa's surprised face.

part10

kripa opens the door and is surprised and shocked.she sees anita crying.anita comes to her and hugs her,kripa hugs back and asks "anita tum kyun ro rehi ho kya huwa hai"anita keeps crying.kripa brings anita in and when everyone sees her crying and are shocked.everyone keeps asking her wat happen but she keeps crying.then kripa asks her again and anita says "manek ghum hogaya hai" kripa says "matlab wo" anita says "itney dinno sey wo ghar bhi nehi aya aur pura hafta hogaya hai"everyone is shocked.angad says "anita tum nehi worry ho,hum usko doondey gey"kripa make anita calm down.angad,shabbir and nishant try to find out where manek is but they found nothing.then angad goes to the police station and tells everything to the asp and gives a picture of manek to the acp.then he gets manek's picture posted on the news paper.then he goes home.kripa tells anita about karthik and priya's wedding and anita is happy for karthik but then remember's manek and gets upset.
kripa - anita tum kyun itni worry ho rehi ho,manek mil gaye ga"
anita - kripa mujhe dhar lagra hai,kahi manek ko kisi ney kidnap kiya ho ga
kripa - tum kaisey ke sakti ho yeh
anita - kuch dinno sey manek ko phone calls arehi thi aur wo bhot tense ta
kripa thinks about wat anita said.
kripa call angad and tells that

kripa - angad shayad kisi ney kidnap kiya ho ga menek ko
angad - tume kaisey ke sakti ho yeh
kripa tells him about wat anita says
angad -kripa nainey manek ka photo newspaper mein post ki hai shayad koi phone kare
kripa then talks more to angad then hangs up.

the next day

a phone call comes and kripa picks up the phone
person - mujhe pata hai,manek kider hai,agar tum chati ho kai manek wapas agai to tume 8 lakh deney ho gey
kripa gets surprised
kripa - wat!kaun ho tum aur manek kider hai.
person - mein tume baad mein phone karunga phir patana ki kab milna hai
the guys hangs up and kripa is surprised.
kripa tells angad everything about the phone call.
angad arranges the money.
the guy this time call angad in angad's cell phone.
person - to kab mere paisey milengey
angad - mein kider tume paisey dun
the person tell angad where to come and angad reaches ther.
angad enters this dark area.the person wid a mask comes.
person - mere paisey
angad - pahle manek.
the person takes angad to manek
manek is unconsioues then wakes up and sees angad.
manek - angad tum,plz mujhe ider sai bir nikaldo.
person unties manek and manek goes to angad.
angad hands the siut case to the person then angad and manek start to walk.
when the person says
person - hey mere paisey!
angad - tum samajh te ho ki angad khanna bevakuf hai
person put a pistol on manek's haed but angad kicks off the pistol off maneks head.
angad starts beating the person up and asks him
angad - tumne kyun ki hai yeh manek kai saat
person - isleye usne meri business ko barbad karliya hai
angad - huh
person - isne meri company ke saat cheating ki hai
manek - angad yeh jhoot bol raha hai mere upar ilzaam laga hai,iske baitey ne hi hud mujhe blame kiya hai.
angad beats that person up more until the police comes to arrest the person.
angad brings manek home.anita is sitting in the living room wid kripa worried and crying.
then anita sees manek and runs to him and hugs him,
anita - tum kider te manek
manek tells everything to anita.
then everyone is happy and stuff.
then one weeks passes and it's the day of karthik and priya's engagement.
everyone has fun and stuff.angad sings and song wid nishant and shabbir.
the song is from "dus" the song "cham se wo ajaye maan mein cha jaye"
then kripa ,kannan and aliya sing "bhol churiyan"
then they have the ring ceremony and stuff and have fun.
then everyone takes pictures then karthik and priya take a pic together,then we see someone holding their picture and is burning it.

hope you enjoyed it! 😊 happy halloween!😃

part 11:

then we see that person burning the picture and saying "i will never let them stay together in peace!"

the next morning:

we see everyone doing their own work.then we see kripa and the girls talking.

priya:kripa tumne kabhi mujhe bataya hi nehi ke tum aur angad kaisey mile.
kripa:priya!
priya:plz kripu!
kripa:teekhe teekhe,mein batatee ho
she tells everything
priya:wow kripa ur so lucky to have such a gug life partner.
kannan:okay okay ab yeh baat bataoa priya,kee tum aur karthik kaisey mile.
priya:okay,jub karthik aur mai america mein te to hum ek hi building mein rehtey te.to ek din hum dono miley,then hum dost ban gey phir we realized we both luv eachother and want to get married.
kannan:oh itni jaldi
priya:kannan mujhe pata hai lekin baut lambi hai kahani to meiney choti karli.
aliya:okay ab hum koi aur baat kar sakte hai.
they keep talking and stuff.
then we see the kids.
prateek:bhim,bali,aj halloween hai na.
bhim:haan prateek.
prateek:mere paas ek idea hai.
bali:kaisa idea
prateek: ek prank hai chalo mein patata ho.
he tells them the plan.
we then see three kids wearing really scary masks.they turn off the lights in sur's room while she's coloring.then sur gets scared.we then see the three monsters popping in each side of the room around sur and sur gets scared and screams.then sur takes out a party spray can and sparys it at the boys then the boys spray it at her.then all of them have eggs and throw it at each other.we then see angad video taping all this and laughing.then he shows it to kripa and everyone and they start laughing.then we see angad,karthik,nishant and shabbir together in a room planning a trick for the girls and the girls are planning a trick on the boys.then we see the boys in scary masks wid eggs and party spray and same wid the girls.then the lights go off in the house.we see the boys coming out luking for the girls but then the girls attack the boys and the boys attack the girls.they have so much fun.then they all go trick or treating.each of the kids come back home wid 2 to 3 big bags of candy.and angad,nishant,shabbir and karthik wid their costumes civered wid party spray and eggs,the ladies luk at the way they luk and kripa is video taping this and laughing.
then after two days

its a mehendi rasam for priya's and karthik's wedding.
then priya sings a song called "mehndi mehndi"

priya:
Na Na Na Na Oh Na Ji Na Na
Mehndi Mehndi Na Mujhko Lagana Mujhe Saajan Ke Ghar Nahin Jaana
Na Na Na Na Na Ji Na Na
Mehndi Mehndi Na Mujhko Lagana Mujhe Saajan Ke Ghar Nahin Jaana
Chaahe Kuch Bhi Kahe Dil Deewana Dil Ki Baaton Mein Mujhe Nahin Aana
Chaahe Kuch Bhi Kahe Dil Deewana Dil Ki Baaton Mein Mujhe Nahin Aana
Na Na Na Na Na Ji Na Na
Mehndi Mehndi Na Mujhko Lagana Mujhe Saajan Ke Ghar Nahin Jaana

Main To Ghoongat Mein Chal Gayi Chunri Mujhse Lipat Gayi
Main To Ghoongat Mein Chal Gayi Chunri Mujhse Lipat Gayi
Neend Na Aaye Mujhe Jaag Main Jaaon Kahin Lup Chup Jaaon
Kahin Bhaag Mein Jaaon
Kahan Se Aaye Jaane Kahan Le Jaaye Yeh Raasta Anjaana
Chaahe Kuch Bhi Kahe Dil Deewana Dil Ki Baaton Mein Mujhe Nahin Aana
Na Na Na Na Na Ji Na Na
Mehndi Mehndi Na Mujhko Lagana Mujhe Saajan Ke Ghar Nahin Jaana

Main To Jaadoo Ki Pudiya Main To Shishe Ki Gudiya
Main To Jaadoo Ki Pudiya Main To Shishe Ki Gudiya
Root Na Jaaon Kahin Toot Na Jaaon Chalo Saath Saheli Main Na Jaaon Akeli
Chup Na Rahoongi Saajan Se Kahungi Tu Pass Na Aana
Chaahe Kuch Bhi Kahe Dil Deewana Dil Ki Baaton Mein Mujhe Nahin Aana
Na Na Na Na Na Ji Na Na
Mehndi Mehndi Na Mujhko Lagana Mujhe Saajan Ke Ghar Nahin Jaana
Tujhe Saajan Ke Ghar Hai Jaana
Tujhe Saajan Ke Ghar Hai Jaana

then kripa sings a song for priya and then kannan sings.
then aliya too.

then they put mehendi on priya's hand and write karthik's name on her hand.
then it's the wedding.kripa,kannan and aliya r getting priya ready for the wedding.priya is wearing a pink wedding gora.kripa is wearing a red lengha,kannan is wearing orange and aliya is wearing a blue one and anita is wearing a purple one..then we see karthik,angad,nishant and shabbir waiting for the girls.karthik is wearing a gold sherwani wid a red scarf,angad is wearing a black sherwani wid a red scarf,nishant is wearing a yellow sherwani wid a red scarf and shabbir is wearing a blue sherwani wid a dark blue scarf and manek wid a brown sherwnai wid gold scarf.we then see the gurls come down wid priya and priya sits next to karthik in the mandap,before they do their pere,the gurls hide karthik's shoes.then the pere's go on and karthik puts the sindoor and mangulstr on priya.then when they get up to take the blessing then karthik luks around for his shoes and says
karthik:mere jhootey kider hai
nobody say nothing.
then karthik says
karthik:mujhe pata hai ki tum larkiyon ne hi mere jhootey liye hain,ab mujhe do jhootey phir paisey milenge.
the gurls say
gurls:pehle paisey.
then they keep fighting for the money and shoes,then karthik gives the money and the gurls give the boots.
then they take pictures.we then see someone hold karthik and priya's picture and burning it.who is it?

i hope u enjoyed it!

hellllllllloooooooooooooooooooooo!anybody!omg u didnt like the part i wrote! 😭 i knew it was gunna be bad! 😭 this is my first time i'm writing a continuation or something and i never ever wrote a fanfic since i came to I-F,sorry if u didnt like it 😭 i'll try to write the next part better.

It seems like you have a great story in your mind

recap:we then see someone hold karthik and priya's picture and burning it.who is it?

part 12

then the next morning:

we see everyone having breakfast and then karthik and priya come to the table to have breakfast,then:

evryone one is silent and karthik says

karthik:sub itney chup kyun hai

after long everyone starts to talk and it gets loud.

anita: how was ur suhaag raat
aliya: haan,bhabhi ap bole na
kripa is laughing
angad is laughing too.
then evryone is getting louder and the kids see them talking and yelling all loud and the kids start making noise and screaming,then the grownups see them and start laughing.then the men go to office and everyone else doing their own work and at home.karthik,angad,shabbir and nishant go to this ceremony to see if they won the contract and who they r working wid.the announcer says

announcer:welcome everyone,aaj golden tower kai contract ki meeting hai aur aj hum deke gey ki kuan 2 companies yeh contract jeeta hai......the two companies r......khanna industries and.... kapoor industries.

everyone claps and stuff.angad,karthik,nishant and shabbir wonder who the chairmen of that company is.the annoucer calls angad and karthik to the stage to recieve the contract papers and then the annoucer calls the chairmen of kapoor industries,then we see a lady coming in,she's wearing a blue and green sari,we see her eyes,her lips and her smiling.we see karthik,angad,nishant and shabbir luking,karthik's face turns all shocked and stuff and gets worried.both companies r congrating each other,then karthik comes in front of that lady and says:

karthik: congrats...tanisha (he says it wid a seriuos face and kinda angry)
tanisha:thanks...um karthik.
angad:tum dono ek dusre ko jante ho
before karthik says anything
tanisha:haan,hum dono america mein mile hain
angad:wow,to aap kab idar aye hai
tanisha:ek din pailey
angad:to aap humare ghar reh sakti hai,waisey bhi aap ke paas koi ghar nehi ho ga idar.
tanisha:haan,if it's okay wid karthik.
karthik:umm...okay.
then they all go home.kripa asks angad
kripa:angad yeh kaun hai
angad tells her everything about the contract and that karthik knows her.
tanisha luks at the whole house and smiles.
tanisha:nice house.
kripa:thanks,come i'll show u ur room.
kripa takes her to her room,then we see karthik in his room all tense.
karthik,thinking:yeh kya karehi hai,agar isne sab ko pata diya mere past ke bare mein america to...omg,mujhe kuch karna ho ga.
after 2 weeks everyone likes tanisha and stuff then we see all of them in the back of the house outside sitting and talking.
tanisha:abhi kuch hi dinno mein hum yeh contract ktam karlenge aur mein chale jow gi.
kripa:to tum idhar kyun nehi rehti,mumbai mein.
tanisha:i cant lekin jub mein jowngi to ek surprise chor kar jowngi.
aliya:tanisha to tum jub america jowgi to tum kya karo gi
tanisha:pata nehi,i guess continue on wid my life.
everyone in the house likes tanisha as afriend but karthik always takes her wrong all the time but everyone makes him act nice to her.then in a few days they r done wid their contract and we see everyone in the living room saying bye to tanisha.
tanisha says
tanisha:mene kuch patana hai aap sub ko
karthik gets worried
kripa:bolo tanisha.
tanisha:jub mein america mein ti,mein karthik ko milee tee phir baad mein priya ko.
tanisha tell everyone about wat happen in america

~flashback~

we see tanisha and karthik as friends at a party,then they see priya and priya knew karthik for a long time.
priya hugs karthik and we see tanisha all jealous and stuff.karthik was always as a friend to tanisha but tanisha would take karthik's kindness as love for her.
tanisha luvs karthik.then one day tanisha finds out kathik proposed to priya and she said yes.tanisha got mad and went to karthik and told everything to him that she loved him and stuff but then karthik got surprised and tanisha tried to seperate karthik and priya but she was not successful,karthik broke his friendship wid tanisha.
~end of flash back~

tanisha then says that she had an affiar wid karthik and priya gets surpised and stuff.

karthik:priya ye jhoot hai,mera koi affair nehi tha iske saat.
tanisha:jhoot mat bolo karthik.
karthik:mein nehi jhoot bol raha.
priya:BUS!bhaut hogaya!karthik meone kabi omeed nehi kiya yeh tumse!
karthik:but priya tumhe hud pata hai ki isne koshsish ki ti hume juda karne mein!
priya:pata hai lekin,mujhse milne se pele tum dono ek hi kambre mein rehtey te.
(karthik used to live in a apartment in america)
karthik:priya lekin hum dost ke tara rehe hain.
priya starts to cry and runs to her room.
kripa doesnt believe tanisha and goes to her
kripa:ab tum ja sakti ho...aur haan,vaki hi tumne hamare liye ek surprise diya hai,tumne do pyar walo ko alag kiya hai,dont u feel ashamed.
kripa gets all mad and starts yelling,angad tries to control kripa and takes her away from tanisha.
karthik starts to yell at tanisha and says that he will not let this happen and stuff.he kicks tanisha out of the house.
tanisha is outside and she says
tanisha:i will ruin u karthik khanna,u will have to pay for this,nobody can run from tanisha kapoor.
then we see karthik going to priya and tries to explain to her but she doesnt belive him.karthik goes to another room and starts to cry,angad comes and says to him
angad:bhai,i believe u,mein hamesha aap ke saat hoon.
kripa:haan bhai,mein bhi,i belive u,hum dono aap ki help karengey.
karthik hugs angad and says thanks.
it ends.

priview:priya decides to leave the house,everyone one is upset.

i hope u enjoyed it! 😊
sorry if u didnt like it.
o yea i couldnt write for yesterday and before that cause i was in the hospital wid my cousin.she had a baby on november 2,and i had to stay wid her to take care of her.she had a baby girl and the baby's name is mehnoor,i chose the name and my other cousin too.i'm a aunt now yay! 😃

hello anyone,nobody liked it!aww!i knew i was bad!well i'm gonna try to write better and i might post the next part in a while.