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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 4

recap:while he's luking for them he here's kripa's scream.angad get's scared and run s to where kripa is,he finds her in their bedroom and kripa on the floor crying.

angad finds kripa on the floor crying.he goes to kripa and asks wat happened.kripa doesn't say anything.angad sees a chair on the floor and says "tum giri ho na ". kripa says " haan" angad picks her up and puts her on the bed.he sees her foot and twists it or something and kripa's foot is better.angad then asks "tum nay keyl re tee hide and seek?" kripa says no.angad then goes and luks for the kids.he finds bhim behind the curtains,he finds bali hiding in a closet and he finds sur and prateek under the dining table.angad then goes out wid shabbir and tells him everything about pritvi.shabbir then asks "ab tum kya karogey,do u believe mishti about pritvi" angad says "i don't know,mujhe nehi lagta kay wo such kehrey he".shabbir then tells angad that he's gonna help angad find out the truth shabbir says "tumne kripa ko pataya iske barey"angad says "nehi,mujhe pata be nehi hai ke mein kasey batoa uska" shabbir says "i think u should tell her,baad mein agar usko pata chal jai key tumne use chupaya ye baat to tume pata hai ke usko acha nehi lagey ga" angad then thinks about it and decides to tell kripa.angad goes home,he sees kripa's parents and bobby.kripa's dad knows about pritvi.angad meets them and then kripa's dad tells angad "mein tumse baat karna chata hoo angad,akeley mein" angad goes in a room wid kripa's dad ,kripa's dad asks angad if he told kripa about this angad angad says no but he's deciding to.kripa's dad says "jo bee tum karey ho tum say kare homujhe nehi lagta key wo sub kuch such hai pritvi ke bare" angad says "mujhe bee nehi lagta".angad then goes back in the living room to everyone. kripa says to angad "angad mama aur papa hamare ghar mein rehengey kuch din ke liye is that okay" angad says "ye koi puchney ke baat hai ,ye inka ghar be hai ofcorse they can stay".later on everyone has dinner,after dinner angad goes to his bedrrom and sees kripa wid the baby, the baby is crying,angad goes to kripa and takes the baby and tries to make him stop crying.the baby stops crying kripa says to angad "wow vo chup bee hogaya,angad mujhe lagta hai ke tum kuch chupare ho mujhse" angad then says "haan kripa, vo pritvi.." kripa says "pritvi kya" angad says pritvi wapas agaya hai" kripa is surprised and sits on the bed kripa says "kya!"
angad tells her evrything about pritvi that he lost his memory and everything. kripa then says "angad ab kya karengey hum, mujhe nehi lagta ke mishti such kehrehi thi" angad agrees wid her.then they both go to sleep.

everyone wakes up the morning except kripa.angad calls everyone in the living room after breakfast and tells them "aaj kripa ka birthday hai,aaj party ho gee,koi bee nahi kripa ko nehi batay ga" everone agrees angad says "kripa ko pata be nehi chal ne dey ke hume uski birthday yaad hoi okay" everyone agrees.angad takes kripa out somewhere so eveyone could get everything in the house ready for kripa's birthday.angad and kripa go shopping,while they r shopping kripa thinks "aaj meri birthday hai aur kisi ne nehi muhje wish hiya angad ne be nehi kiya" angad tells kripa he is coming in a minute,kripa waits for him.angad is in the jewlwery store,getting a diamond ring and set for kripa's birthday.he comes back and sees kripa and takes her home.angad calls back home and asks if evrything is ready,and everyhting is ready.angad and kripa enter the house and evryone says "surprise!!" kripa is surprised and happy.she turns to angad and says "mujhe laga ke tume yaad be nehi hai meri birthday" angad says "mai tumaheri birthday kaise bhool sakta who,jub tum nehi ti idar to mein har saal tumhare liya gift rakta ta closet mein,mein tume kab be nehi bhool paya" kripa hugs angad and says "i luv u angad ,thnx for eveything" angad says "i luv u too".everyone is enjoying the party and angad sings a song for her wid nishant,the song is "rock n roll soniye from kank".and then he sings "dil nadiya from krish".then they cut the cake and enjoy more.angad is dancing wid kripa when he gets a call.he goes out and recieves the call.the person calling says "kripa sirf meri hai,sirf meri hai" angad gets angry and says "kaun hai,who is it?! 😡 " the person says "kripa ki jaan katrey mein hai,i'm going to kill her!" angad is about o say something when the person hangs up. angad gets worried.angad tells nishant about this and also shabbir.three of them suspect pritvi and mishti.angad is really worried and it ends on angad's worried face.

sorry if i made some mistakes.i hope u liked it!i'll continue more later. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Omg,,,I luv ure parts,,tem!!!!u guys should be script writers 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 5

recap:the person says "kripa ki jaan katrey mein hai,i'm going to kill her!" angad is about o say something when the person hangs up. angad gets worried.angad tells nishant about this and also shabbir.three of them suspect pritvi and mishti.angad is really worried and it ends on angad's worried face.

angad goes back to the party and goes to kripa and hugs her.everyone enjoys the party.the party is over and everyone is asleep.angad and kripa are awake.kripa says to angad "angad thanks sooo much is party ke liye,mein to soch rehi thee ke tum mere birthday bhool gey" angad says "mein tumhari birthday kabhi nehi bhool sakta kripa" kripa sees angad's upset faces and asks "angad tum kyun itney udas lagre ho" angad doesn't know at to say,kripa luks at him and says "agar tum kuch chuparey ho to koi baat nehi tum kabhi bhi muhje pata sakte ho,okay" angad says "okay ,wo mein asai hi soch raha tha pritvi key bare" kripa says "angad,pritvi ko bhool jow,wo hamara past ta, bhool jow usko" angad says "kaise kripa,wo kuch bee karsakta hai" kripa says "angad don't worry" angad then says "okay",they go to sleep.

in the morning kripa wakes up and doesn't see angad anywhere in the bedroom.she goes into the kitchen and sees angad,prateek,sur,bhim and bali making breakfast.
she sees all of them crowded in the kitchen and starts laughing. angad and the kids turn around and see kripa laughing.they see themselves and start laughing too. kripa says "tum sab kya kare ho,kitchen ka kaam mera hai" prateek runs to kripa and says "mama hum ap key liye nashta bana re hai" kripa says "oh". rest of the people wake up and all of them have breakfast.angad
and nishant take the kids to their school.kripa,kannan and aliya r left home.angad reaches his office,while he's doing some work, he gets a call.it's the same person from last night saying "kripa is mine,only mine,i'm going to kill her" angad gets angry and says "shut up,kripa sirf meri hai or meri rehgi,and tum kuch nehi kar sakte" the person says "mei to kuch bhi kar sakta who baut kuch" the person hangs up and angad gets worried.back at home we see kripa in the kitchen alone,kannan and aliya r in their bedrooms.we see a man in a black mask coming towards the house.we see kripa in
the kitchen.then we see angad in his car coming home all worried.we see the man wid the mask in the house.
angad reaches home and goes in.we see the man behind kripa.angad come near the kitchen and he hears kripa's scream,angad runs in the kitchen and sees the man run wid kripa.angad runs after them.the man gets into his car and angad follows them in his car.angad follows them and reaches in this house. he follows them inside.
the man ties up kripa in a chair and tells her "baag ne ki koshish mat karna" angad reaches in the back of the man and grabs him.kripa sees this and yells "angad!".angad takes the man's gun and tries to take off the person's mask,angad takes it off and sees an unknown man.angad asks him "tum kis ke liye kaam kare ho!?tell me!" the man says "mujhe nehi pata,mujhe sirf pata hai ki us bande ne mujhe ye kaam diya hai,mujhe sirf uska number pata hai" angad says "mujhe wo number do ,give it to me!" the man gets scared and gives the number"angad call the guy from the man's cell phone.the person then picks up the phone and says "hello,ab kya hai!" angad hears pritvi's voice and is surprised.kripa luks at angad and asks "kya hoa angad ,kaun hai" angad says "pritvi".it end on kripa's and angad's shocked face.

hope u liked it,i'll continue later. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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recap:angad call the guy from the man's cell phone.the person then picks up the phone and says "hello,ab kya hai!" angad hears pritvi's voice and is surprised.kripa luks at angad and asks "kya hoa angad ,kaun hai" angad says "pritvi".it end on kripa's and angad's shocked face.

part 5

kripa says "muhje pata tha ki pritvi kabhi nehi badal sakta,i just hate him!",angad decides to tell kripa everything about the calls,he tells her everything.kripa says "tumne kyun nehi bataya muhje pehle?"angad says "tum itni kush ti and main nehi chata ta ki tum udas ho jow,muhje pata bhi nahi tha key mein kaisey tumhe patata,i'm sorry kripa" kripa forgives him and both of them go home.angad drops kripa to their house and he tells kripa he going out somewhere for some work and he goes.he goes to the man who worked for pritvi and tells him to come wid him,they both make a plan of exposing him.they both go to pritvi's house.the man goes to pritvi,pritvi says "kaam ho gaya" the man says "haan sir" pritvi starts saying "gud job!tume tumhare paisey milengey,kripa meri nehi ho saki aur ab aaj wo angad ki bi nehi hai,kripa agar meri nehi ho saki to angad kee bhi nehi,i'm sorry kripa lekin mujhe ye karney para,ho sake agar tum mujhe maaf kardo" angad comes in behind pritvi and says "u r wrong "amit" or should i say PRITVI" pritvi turns around and sees angad and says "oh tum,ab tume pata chal gaya mera such" angad gets angry and says "mein tume nehi chorunga,mein tumhare sara such sub ko bata dunga" pritvi says "tumne abi tak kisi ko nehi pataya aur pata ney bhi nehi dunga" angad says "too late, kripa knows and these people know too" the police comes out and arrests pritvi.pritvi says "kripa to mar chuki hai aur why am i being arrested!" angad says "kripa zinda hai aur usko tumahe bare pata hai" the police tells pritvi "you are arrested for almost killing kripa khanna" the police takes away pritvi and angad goes back home and tells kripa everything about wat he did,getting pritvi arrested.kripa says "ab koi bhi nehi humey alag kar sakta angad,aur ha angad wo humney nishant aur kannan ki shaadi ki date fix kardi" angad asks "kub hai date and tumne mere bagar fix bhi karli date,koi baat nehi,to kub hai shaadi?" kripa says "next week".angad says "teek hai to shaadi kai liye shopping karni hai kub?" kripa says "mein kannan sai puch loongi lekin shayad kal"
i gotta go now i'll write more tomorrow.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 6

the next morning everyone goes shopping.angad and kripa go together wid the baby and the kids,kannan and nishant go together and aliya and shabbir go together.after their shopping they go out to eat and then go home.

a week passes by:

everyone is enjoying the shaadi,we see kannan getting ready and kripa,aliya and tanu helping kannan.we then see nishant wid angad and shabbir down waiting for the girls.nishant says to angad and shabbir "ye larkiyo bee na,itni dair karti hai" and angad and shabbir say "i know! itni dair karti hein pata ney wo kya karehey" then after a while we see the girls coming down and nishant sitting in the mandap (watever u guys call it).kannan is dressed in a pink wedding dress and kripa in a red sari and aliya in a purple sari.nishant is dressed in baige,angad in black and shabbir in brown.kannan comes and sits next to nishant.they do their pere and and nishant puts the mangulstr and sindoor on kannan.then they have their suhaag raat.

next day,everyone have a surprise for nishant and kannan.nishant and kannan come downstairs for breakfast and everyone is quiet,kannan and nishant wonder y everyone is so quiet.all of a sudden everyone gets all loud and start asking question about yesterday night,and kannan and nishant were just sitting there listening to them,then kripa comes out of the kitchen and makes everybody stop.angad and kripa say "humare paas tumhare liye ek surprise hai" nishant and kannan say " aur wo kya hai" angad and kripa take them to the living room and give them two tickets to switzerland for their honeymoon and they take them outside and they gift them a car.kripa says to the both of them
"surprise acha laga" kannan and nishant say "haan lekin itni takleef kyun ki tum dono ney" angad and kripa say "o my god,wat r friends for and tum dono ney hum dono ko ek saat kardiya fir se to hum kuch bhi karsaktey hai tum dono ke liye" nishant and kannan thank angad and kripa.
In two days nishant and kannan leave for their honey moon.
in one night all the kids r asleep and also everyone else.angad and kripa r watching a movie,a scary movie.kripa is holding on tight to angads hands.in one part of the movie a boy is dancing wid a girl and all of a sudden he turns into a vampire and sucks the girl's blood,kripa gets scared and holds on tight to angad's arm,and angad could hear her cry a bit and scared,angad turns off the movie and faces kripa and says "tum abhi tak dhar ti ho is movie sey" kripa says "haan".angad sees kripa is getting a little sleepy.he gets up and picks up kripa in his arms and takes her to their room.he puts kripa down gently on the bed and he gets into the bed and turns off the light and they both go to sleep.
the next morning everyone wakes up except angad and kripa.the kids winder why angad and kripa didn't wake up.the kids go up to angad and kripa's bedroom and see them sleeping and hugging eachother.the kids start laughing.angad wakes up and sees the kids laughing and sees y thry r laughing,he tells them to go out and that he's coming.angad wakes kripa up and tells her to make brwakfast.she makes breakfast and gives it to everyone.she sees the kids upset and asks them why they r upset.the kids say "hum itney bore ho re hey,aur humare sare dost meley par gey hai aur hum bhi jaaney chaatey hain" kripa says "tumhare papa lekar giangey na" angad says "haan get ready mein tum log ko lekar ga ra who" the kids get happy and start jumping.they get ready.the kids,angad and kripa go to the mela.they have alot of fun.

i'll continue tomorrow,i'm really tired now.hope u liked it.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Very nice please continue soon :)
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Posted: 18 years ago
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recap:the kids,angad and kripa go to the mela.they have alot of fun.
part 7
all of them r in the mela and have fun.angad takes the kids to a lot of fun rides.while all of them go to buy candy,kripa sees mishty and tells angad when angad turns around to luk,he doesn't see her.angad tells kripa not to worry she can't do anything.they have fun.it gets dark and everyone is leaving,while leaving kripa sees mishti again and once again angad luk back and doesn't see her.they all go home when they reach home everyone sees naina sitting on the sofa upset.angad just sees her and leaves up stairs to his room.kripa sees this and gets upset and goes to naina and asks her "mami ji,kya hoowa,aap kyun itni udas lagre hai" naina luks up seeing angad go and kripa sees this and says "angad haina" naina says "haan,kripa mein angad ke nafrat nehi baardasht kar sakti,mein both sharminda who,jo kuch meine kee hein past mein,wo to meine kee hai lekin mein angad se kabhi nafrat nehi kar sakte,mein uski both care kartee who,meine usko itna pyar deney kee koshish ke lekin wo.." kripa says "mein angad se baat karti who,aap sirf tension mat liye" kripa goes up stairs and sits next to angad she says to him "angad,tum mom ko maaf kardo please" angad turns to her and says "kaise kripa us ne meri zindagi,mera naam badal diya hai,usne mere mom ko barbad kardiya tha,kaise kripa,aur tum,tumko pata bhi hai usne kya kiya hai aur tum phirbhi yeh bhol rehi ho kei mein usse maaf kardoo" kripa says "angad,wo tumhare mom hai,usne hi tumhare dek bal kee hai,angad wo tumse both pyar karti hein usne hi tumhe ma ka pyar diya he,aur haan tumhare mom ko,tumhare dad ne barbad kee ti,mom ne nehi angad" angad says "nehi kripa,i just can't" kripa gets angry and takes angad out of the bedroom and says "dekho angad,mom ko dekho,wo kitni udas lag rehi hein ,jo bhi unoney kiya hai she feels bad,angad plz maaf kardo mom ko,mere liye" angad says "kripa!i can't,now stop bothering me!" kripa gets tears in her eyes and runs to her room and starts crying.angad tries to stop her but kripa doesn't talk to him.after a while angad says "fine,mein maaf kardeta who and i'm sorry kripa plz" kripa gets happy and hugs him and says thanks.angad goes down satirs to his mom and says "mom,aap mat udas hoi,meine aap ko maaf kardiya hai,aap meri mom ti aur ab tak mom hai" naina gets surprised and happy and says "angad please mujhe maaf kardi,i'm really sorry" angad says "mom bhool gow kein maine kabhi aap se nafrat ki tin,mom i'm sorry too" naina gets happy and hugs angad.then everyone goes to sleep.
the next morning everyone wakes up.naina makes breakfast for everyone,she gives breakfast to sur and prateek after evryone but both of them refuse.angad takes both of them to thier bedroom to talk.angad says to the both of them "aap kyun nehi dadi ke saat baat kere aur unki bana huwa nashta ka rehe?" both of them say "aap ne to pehle bataya ta ke dadi se nehi baat kare hum" angad says" ab aap karsakte hai isleye meine unko maaf kardiya hai,ab gow unka baba huwa nashta kow" sur and prateek run to naina and say "sorry dadi" and they hug her.naina gets happy and syas "okay ap ab nashta kow okay" they both sit and eat their breakfast.after breakfast,angad goes to office and naina and kripa r at home wid the kids.the kids sit wid naina and play games,kripa sees this and gets happy and says "haan to aap logo ko maza ara hey merein bagar,wow" the kids say "haan" kripa goes to them and starts playing wid the kids and naina.they have fun.naina asks kripa "kripa mujhe pata chala ki pritvi wapas agaya tha" kripa says "haan mom" kripa tells everything about wat happened,to naina.naina says "o my god kripa mein to samaj rehi this ke pritvi to jail mein ta" kripa says "haan mom wo jail se bhaag geya tha lekin police usko firse arrest kardiya,aur mom meine mishti ko dekha tha us mele par,mom mujhe dhar lagra hai ke wo kuch kar legi" naina says "kripa tum worry mut ho wo kuch nehi karsakti" naina tells kripa bout the years angad had wid sur wid out her it was okay but wid out her angad spolit sur alot and missed kripa alot.
when angad comes back from office kripa brings his dinner to their bedroom,she asks him "sur ne baut tung kiya ho ga jub mein ehi thi idar heina" angad says "tume kaise pata chala?" kripa says "mom ne pataya ta" angad says "haan,mom bhot worried hoti thi sur ke liye" kripa says "ab mein agey who,mein sur ka dyan raku gi"angad and kripa talk for a while.
after two days while in the after noon everybody was talking togehter in the living room when they see someone enter in.it is kannan and nishant.everyone is happy for them to come back.they both see naina and angad and kripa tell them everything about how angad forgave naina.nishant and kannan are happy.
2 months pass by and it's sur's birthday.kripa and kannan and aliya r getting everything ready for the party,naina took the kids out for a day to ahve fun so they can get everything ready for the party wid out sur and the kids knowing.
everything is ready and all the guests and invited people are her.sur comes and gets surprised and happy and hugs kripa,kannan and aliya and says thnx.everyone is enjoying the party,it's time to cut the cake.they cut the cake and sing happy birthday for sur.
angad and kripa sing a song for sur.
sur then sings a song for kripa,then angad.
the song for angad is from the movie "mein aisa hi hoon" the song is "chanda ne poocha taro sey taro ney pucha hazaro se,sub sey pyara kaun hai,papa mere papa,papa luv u papa."
then angad sings the last part
"chanda ne pucha taro se taro ne pucha hazaro se,sub sey pyara kaun hai papa,tere papa,papa tere papa"
kripa gets happy and everyone else too.everyone is dancing.angad and kripa together,aliya and shabbir togehter,nishant and kannan together.all of a sudden kannan faints.evryone gets surprised.the party is over and they call the doctor,the doctor is checking kannan and the doctor comes out and she says "kannan maa bune wali hai" evryone gets happy especially nishant.kannan wakes up and finds out she is pregnant and gets happy.the doctor says "she is one week preggy"
everyone is so happy.
2 weeks pass by and it's prateek's birthday,this time angad handles all the work for prateek's b day.finally they have the party and prateek is so happy and hugs angad and says "thank u papa ur the best,my superman papa is the best" angad is happy and picks up prateek and takes him to his b day cake,it's time to cut the cake,they cut the cake.angad sings a song for prateek and then evryone has fun,the party is over.
over the next few months kripa takes care of kannan and the kids.it's the 8th month of kannan's pregnancy.evryone is excited.they have kannan's baby shower.this time the kids helped doing the decorations.angad and kripa r happy for kannan and nishant.nishant is soo happy he got a room ready and filled up wid toys for the baby.the baby shower is over.a month passes by and everyone is in the hospital.the doctor comes out and she says "congrats it's a girl" everyone is soooo happy.kannan asks nishant "iski naam kya rakna hai nishant" nishant says "gauri".nishant and kannan r holding the baby.
eveyone is back home wid the baby.it's dinner time and everyone is at the table except for the kids and kannan.kripa goes in kannan and nishant's bedroom and sees the kids surrounding the baby's carriage.kripa says to them "tum log ko dinner table mein honey chai he,chalo gow" the kids go.kripa has her dinner wid kannan they both have dinner togehter.kripa goes upstairs.when she enters her room angad comes right in front of her and says "hi" kripa says "tumne mujhe dara liye tha,ab kya hai angad mein baut tired hu" angad says "tum apne sare time dusro ke liye deti ho,mere liye nehi"angad luks at her wid his naughty face "kripa says "oh no angad i know wat ur thinking" angad just keeps luking at her and kripa keeps luking at angad,they both lay down on the bed and angad turns off the lights and u might know the rest.
i hope u liked it,sorry if u think i dragged it too much.i'll write more,right now my hands r freezing and tired,i'll write more later. 😊
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Keep it up!!!
I luv it!!!
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recap: angad just keeps luking at her and kripa keeps luking at angad,they both lay down on the bed and angad turns off the lights and u might know the rest.

part 8

in the morning everyone is awake.everyone sees karthik and r surprised.(by the way karthik went america for a while).karhtik sees a baby in kannan's hand and he knows she's married wid nishant and congrats her.karthik says "mre paas aap logo ke liye surprise hai" evryone wonders wat it is.karthik says "aap ko aaj raat pata chale ga" angad says "abhi kyun nay bhai" karthik says "bas ab aap logo ko aaj hi raat pata chale ga,aur mujhe nashta milega mujhe bhot bhook lag rehi hai" kripa says "haan mai leke atee ho" everyone has breakfast.the kids are sitting close to kannan's seat for the baby and karthik sees this and starts laughing and says "yeh bacho itne obsessed hai baby par" everyone starts laughing and the kids wonder why.kannan tells the kids and the kids run to karthink and start attacking him and everyone cant stop laughing.then they see the baby banging her spoon on her plate and she picks up the plate and put it on her head,everyone starts lauhging more.aliya while laughing says to karthik "bhai jub sey aap aye hai,hum baut hasne lage hai 😆 " everyone keeps laughing until angad falls off his chair and everyone starts laughing more.prateeks runs to angad and falls on him and starts laughing.then everyone calms down,then again they start laughing.after breakfast angad goes to kripa and says "mujhe baut dard ho raha hai kripa" kripa says while laughing "kidar" angad says "tummy par" kripa says "isleye ke tum baut aaj hase ho breakfast mai" angad then starts tickling kripa and they fall,they start laughing more,the kids see this and start laughing more.gauri,the baby starts crying and kannan goes to her and takes her to angad,kannan sees angad on the floor laughing wid kripa and the kids laughing too,kannan starts laughing and also the baby.kannan says to them "jabbi bi gauri cry karney sharu kare to mujhe isko tum dono ke paas lakaer ane chai hai" they all laughing more.then we see karthik calling someone and tells that person "meine sab ko bata diya hai tum arehi ho,i cant wait"
in the afternoon,everyone is enjoying thier day.the kids are playing wid gauri and karthik is wid angad and angad is wid his and kripa's baby,ummm,rishi.kripa is wid kannan and aliya talking.
in dinner time,everyone is eating and karthik says "ab wo surprise abhi kuch minute mein aye gee" everyone wonder wat or who it is.
we see a girl in a blue shalwar kameez wid silver desingings on it.then we see her walking towards the door to the house.we see her ring the bell.we then see karthik walk to the door and he's happy to see her,we then see the girl's face.(you guys u decide how the girl luk like cause i have no idea who he luks gud wid,give me some ideas.)karthink call everyone to the living room,karthink introduces the family to the girl then finally he says "everyone this is priya,priya yeh hai meri payari si family" kripa gets surprised and says "priya!TUM o my god" priya and kripa hug.karthik asks "tum dono ek dusre ko jaantey ho" kripa says "haan jub mein school mein ti to hum dono dost te aur abhi bi,school mein to wo merese 2 saal bari ti lekin hum ache dost hai" karthink is happy to know they know each other.karthik tells aeveryone that priya and him luv each other and that they r deciding to get married.everyone luks upset and naina goes to kartik and says in a disapointed tone "mujhe pasand hai priya".kartik and priya get happy and everyone else too.
priya is staying at their house cause she has no family.
priya becomes very gud friends wid kannan,aliya too,priya spends her time wid the gurls in the house alot.
the next day everyone is done wid their breakfast and a pandit is in the house to fix the date for kartik and priya's engagement.the pandit says that in 2 weeks there will be a gud day to do the engagment.everyone is happy.then we see the kids running out of a room worried and upset,angad asks "kya huwa bacho umm prateek kider hai?" bhim says "uncle,prateek rora hai" angad asks "kyun" bali says "uski fight hoi te sur ke saat ab wo baat nehi kare aur prateek nehi fight karne chata lekin sur naraaz hai usse isleye" angad calls sur and prateek in their bedroom and asks them "tum dono phirse lare te,very bad,chalo batoa kyun lare te tum dono" sur says "dad,prateek gauri ko carry kara ta aur meine usse gauri cheen liya,phir wo roney sharo gaya" angad says "sur,tumne kyun cheena gauri usse,wo tumhara chota bhai hai" sur says "i'm sorry dad and i'm soo sorry prateek" sur and prateek hug and prateek says "it's okay sur didi" angad is happy and takes them to the living room.when angad enters the living room he sees everyone luking at him and the kids laughing.angad says "kya hua" kartik goes to angad and punches him in the back. angad says "ow,bhai y did u do that" kartik says "tumhare peeche lika hai ke mein tume punch karoo"angad says "wat,no" angad puts his hand on his back and sees a paper saying "punch me!" angad is embarrased and everyone laughs,angad catches the kids and starts tickling them.eveyone laughes more.it ends on angad tickling the kids lying on the floor.

i hope you guys like it. 😃
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OMGGG U R SOOO TOTALLLY GUD AT THIZZZ..U ROCKKKK....KEEP WRITEING PLZZZZ....I LOVE ITT...FEELZ LIKE KYPH NEVER ENDED

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