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Posted: 20 years ago
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Romance between A-K continues for a while. When Naina comes to know of this, she tells Angad that Kripa is a poor choice for a partner and their association will put Angad's career in jeopardy. She tells him that Mishti on the other hand would be more suitable as her family is a big player in the music industry. Angad flatly refuses to marry Mishti as he cannot think of anyone other than Kripa as his life partner.

However as it turns out, his popularity among his fans begins to decline. Ambitious as he is, it begins to bother him. With his family constantly adding fuel, he unknowingly takes out some of his career frustrations on Kripa and he starts getting more and more distanced from Kripa. Kripa notices this and feels hurt by Angad's somewhat changed attitude and behaviour towards her. Finally, one evening she invites Angad to the outhouse and there she seduces him!😉 (What can I say, I like women in power😊). Angad though going through career frustrations, still cares deeply about Kripa. He certainly had no intention of sleeping with Kripa before he married her. But he succumbs to Kripa's charms and it turns out to be the most magical night of his life. Next morning when he wakes up to tell Kripa that they should get married ASAP, he finds Kripa's note telling him that she is leaving Mumbai for good. She wishes the very best for his career. She also says that even though their paths were never meant to go together, in her mind she would always be married to Angad. However she frees Angad of any sense of responsibility for her or their relationship. Angad is totally heartbroken and realizes that he has broken her heart. He blames himself and feels that he doesnot desrve Kripa after the way that he has treated her.

From then on, he stops socialising completely and spends all his time either working or alone in the outhouse. He has moved in there after Kripa left him and he doesnot let anybody in and cooks and cleans (now I find this aspect very appealing😉, I don't know about you guys). He has pretty much stopped communicating with his family.

All his hard work pays off and he wins numerous awards. But he hardly cares and doesnot even bother to attend the award ceremonies or the lavish parties that his family throws on his success. Naina knows that it is his way of punishing his family for teaching him that all that matters in life is fame and fortune.

Finally it gets to the point that Naina realizes how much her son is hurting and she and her husband make a trip to Nainital. She then pleads with Kripa's parents to tell them where Kripa is. She tells them that only Kripa can save Angad from destroying himself. Finally they relent and give them Kripa,s adderss.

Naina and her husband arrive at this small town where Kripa teaches music in a school. They meet her and beg her to Visit Angad. Fionally Kripa agrees but tells them that it can only be a short visit as she has some other obligations at the school.

Kripa knocks on the outhouse door. Angad initially says go away, but when K says its me Kripa, he opens the door and stares at her. K- won't u ask me to come in? i came to congratulate you for being nominated for like the Oscars of the indian music industry. A- thanks. why don't you sit down. I have some food left over of u r hungry.

Kripa is somehow trying to gulp down the food that Angad had cooked. Then Angad asks if she is back for good. K- no, I am leaving in two days. A-oh, ok. Well, it is getting late and maybe you should find yourself a room to sleep in. Next morning Angad has already left for the studio when Kripa wakes up. When Naina comes to know of this, she asks him what the problem was. Angad tells her that she is only here to leave him again the next day. Naina- Haven't I always taught you to go for what you want? If you really want this woman, then you should go after her and get her. After all everything is fair in love and war. A slow smiles creeps up on his face and he says goodbye to his mom.

Next, Kripa is opening the door to her apartment. A familiar voice calls her from behind-Train late thi kya? ( Angad is back to his usual cocky and assertive self, which is all I care about tonight!)Wonder if some of the other writers would take up from here or make corrections for that matter! Good comments would always be appreciated.

Bye.

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Hey Fantasi ur story is really good... Keep it up and too hope some one continue's it..

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Posted: 20 years ago
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I wished ekta would have selected u as her creative script writer😉😉😉.You would have done a lot better then wht is coming up for the next weeks🤢🤢🤢
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Posted: 20 years ago
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tht was reely a good story👏👏

Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!😊

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Posted: 20 years ago
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what a rocking story you should have been the writer instead of Ekta
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Hey great story. Keep it up!
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Posted: 20 years ago
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wow its exellecent story. plz carry on.

~sweta~

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