Prithvi calls Kripa to some moon-lit/candle-lit/tubelight-lit fancy restaurant and is waiting for her with a violin and a bouquet of carnations. He has booked the whole place just for himself and Kripa so that he can formally propose to her and ask for her hand.ALL smiles and dreams he is waiting for her to come.
Kripa, completely unaware of what Prithvi has in mind heads for the restaurant in the evening.Just as she is about to leave the Outhouse, she recieves a call from guess who...........ANGAD!
Angad: "Mujhe tumse abhi milna hai."
Kripa ( angry and hurt):" I don't give a damn! Meri beizzati karne mein koi kamee reh gayee hai kya? Ab kya chahte ho? Mujhe tumse nahiin milna, main tumhe zindagi mein dobaara kabhi nahiin dekhna chaahti."
Trying hard to control her troubled heart, she slams the phone down and bursts into tears.Still, she gathers herself up and leaves in the car sent exclusively by Prithvi.
Angad, who is less angry and more concerned about Kripa finds out from Kripa's parents ( who are staying with selfish Khannas , thanks to Damini Bose but Kripa still chose the Outhouse..ahem..ahem..ahem) that Kripa has gone to meet Prithvi at a certain restaurant.
Once again, Angad gets all flared-up and furious in jealousy and follows Kripa in his car.
It is a stormy evening and the sky is overcast, quite reflecting the state of our gorgeous two-some.
Angad is very upset, jealous, angry...everything and he drives rash and bad enough to stop Kripa ! He overtakes her car and screeches the car to a halt right in front of Prithvi's car. The driver is forced to stop the car.Kripa is literally shocked out of her wits to see him and is actually struck by the blazing intensity of his face.
Angad approaches her car and Kripa recovering from the initial shock of seeing Angad comes out of the car and screams at him...
Kripa(usual fiery self): "Jo us raat kiya, kya wo kaafi nahiin tha jo ab tum mera raasta bhi rokne lage? Kyun aaye ho tum mere peechhe? Sirf ye dekhne ke liye ki main kahaan ja rahi hoon..kisse mil rahi hoon? Alright, main Prithvi se milne ja rahi hoon. Sun liya? ab hato mere raaste se."
Angad continues to look at her and without looking away from her face, he tells Prithvi's driver in a strong icy tone....
Angad( to the driver): Tum ja sakte ho yahaan se. Prithvi se kehna ki Kripa khud pahonch jayyegi...use kucch kaam tha.Go...right now!"
Poor guy is in no mood to wrestle with Angad and inspite of Kripa's protests, he leaves.
It starts to rain heavily but none of the two moves even an inch.
Kripa( seeing the driver go): "Tum poore paagal ho ye to mujhe usi rat pata chal gaya tha jab tumne meri maang bharkar mere aatm-sammaan ka mazaak udaaya tha(these EK heroines, I tell you)...tum mujhe jhukana chaahte the, haraana chaaahte the, mujhse badla lena chaahte the na? To wo sab to ho chuka hai, right? To ab kyun aaye ho?Mujhe jaane do."
Kripa has tears streaming down her cheeks and she turns to leave but Angad pulls her back to face him and looking intently into her eyes, he tells her...
Angad( all emotion but laced with egotism😡): Maine tumse pehle bhi kaha hai aur aaj phir keh raha hoon. When i want to speak to you, it means i want to speak to you. Yeh...jo tumhara attitude or gussa hai na, yehi mujhe wo sab karne ke liye majboor karta hai jo main nahiin karna chaahta. Chalo mere saath."
Kripa is so dazed by Angad's strange behaviour that she follows him and she feels too shattered and wrung-out to oppose him. Angad takes her to the sea-side and yeah, it's still raining and A-K are pretty well-drenched.
Angad faces the sea-shore and walks towards it while a confused and sad Kripa continues to stand near the car.
Angad: " Tumhaare aane se pehle meri zindagi bahot alag thi Kripa. Us zindagi mein main khush tha ya nahiin...ye to nahiin pata lekin jaisa chal raha tha, uski mujhe aadat ho gayi thi. Aur phir tum aa gayee.....tumne wo har kaam kiya jisse mujhe nafrat thi....mujhe hamesha yahi lagta tha ki tum mere sath khade rehne ke bhi laayak nahiin ho......phir bhi pata nahiin kyun..tumhari har baat se mujhe farak padta tha. Tumhari khushi se mujhe khushi hoti thi..tumhari takleef se mujhe takleef hoti thi."
He turns to look at Kripa who is pleasantly surprised by all that Angad is saying. He walks towards her and very gently he wipes those tears off her face . He takes her hands in his hands and holding them softly , he continues......
Angad( all romantic intensity): Main tumhaare liye kya mehsoos karta hoon, ye mujhe us din samajh mein aaya jab pehli baar tumhe Prithvi ke haath kho dene ka darr mere andar paida hua. I mean, us raat maine kya kiya, kyun kiya mujhe nahiin pata. Pyaar kya hai, kise kehte hain, mujhe to theek se pata bhi nahiin. Sirf itna jaanta hoon, ki main tumhaare bina nahiin reh sakta....tum mujhse door ho jao, ye bardaasht nahiin kar sakta. Agar ise pyar kehte hain to yahi sahee. Haan, main tumse pyar karta hoon aur aaj meri samajh mein aaya ki maine tumhaari maang isliye bhari kyunki main tumhe kho dene ke darr ko mitaana chaahta tha. Agar jo main tumhaare liye mehsoos karta hoon, use hi pyar kehte hain...fine, I LOVE YOU. I Love you more than anything , Kripa."
Kripa is speechless but her face is a vibgyor of overwhelmed emotions. Even Angad's eyes are tearful now . He leaves her hands and walks away saying....
Angad: "Bas mujhe tumse yahi kehna tha. Agar tum ab bhi mujhse nafarat karti ho, to tum yahaan se ja sakti ho....aur agar nahiin..."
SIGH! Angad opens his arms and Kripa , hesitant for asecond goes running into his arms and hugs him...all the while crying and saying," I hate you, Angad, I really hate you"
Angad smiles and kisses her forhead," It's okay...I LOVE YOU."
And the downpour stopped with the sun showing up with a beautiful rainbow!👏
Prithvi got the message.
ok... prithvi is waiting the candles are melting the violin is discarded... when finally his cell rings..
kripa: "Oh Prithvi Mujhe maaf kardo main aaj nahin aa paongi. hum kal mile...?"
Prithvi (sad but understanding) : "teekh hai, kal cafe mein..."
Kripa: "thanks for understanding, i'll see you tommorow"
Kripa keeps the phone down, Angad is standing behind her,
Angad: "bol diya apne dost ko?"
Kripa: " haan, I still can't believe you thought prithvi was my boyfriend. woh toh Harshini se pyaar sarta hai. he wrote such a romantic letter to her" sigh
Angad sits down and pulls her down on his lap
Angad (frowns and teases) : ha prithvi romantic or main nahi. waise bhi tumhi ne toh kaha tha prithvi tumhara boyfriend tha
Kripa: woh toh tumse sach bulwane ke liye tha. Nahi toh tum toh...
Angad: teekh hai teekha hai, kal main bhi chaloonga tumhre saath use thank you bolne
Kripa smiles and we fade out.
Prithvi comes home with the roses looking all dejected. mishti gets up and goes to him
Mishthi : "kya hua? Kripa ne...mana toh nahi kiya right?"
Prithvi : (shakes his head) "woh toh aayi hi nahi."
Mishthi: "huh? oh haa... aaj toh uske parents aa rahe the. shayad isiliye..."
Prithvi (small smile on his face) : "you think so?"
Mishthi : "of course why won't she come for a date with my darling brother huh?"brother & sister smile and hug
backwaas i know but can someone write the breakfast meeting...?
bips
ok...i will continue with the breakfast meeting
so prithvi is waiting in a cafe..its morning so not exactly a candle light romantic meal occasion...he is just waiting with a bunch of fresh roses and a beautiful ring..he plans to do this the traditional way-go down on one knee and propose to her...
the cafe is quite crowded and with each new person entering, prithvi feels the romance of the occasion slipping away...afterall proclaiming your love in the middle of a bus terminal is not anyone's idea of romance (i guess not even for ppl like mihir and om !!)
In the meantime, Kripa is getting ready...shes singing n dancing while she gets dressed (no doubt thinking abt last night)...there is a knock on the door...she goes to open it and there is a single rose and a note on the floor..she picks it up..turns back and opens the note..it simply says "i love you...what about you?"....before a smile can even escape from her lips, angad comes from behind, wraps his arms tightly around her and plants a kiss on her cheek...."i love you too" she says and kisses him back...
" kya zaroori hai jaana....prithvi se kisi aur din milenge...kitna achcha mausam hai lets go someplce else just you and me" grumbles angad....."nahin...we can't keep blowing him off....lets go n talk to him TODAY....you promised" pouts kripa.
angad looks at her for a second n then gets this twinkle in his eyes and says " Sirf tum hi ho, jo mujhe woh karne par majboor kar sakti ho jo main karna nahin chahta....fine lets go but you my sweetheart are going to pay a penalty....for every kilometer we drive to see your cheesy friend, i get a kiss"
"high hopes .... and btw who is going to keep track of the distance" enquires a visibly delighted kripa
"don't worry baby... i can always keep track of things like this....u leave that to me" says angad with a huge mischeivious grin on his face.
kripa smacks him on the head and drags him out of the outhouse............
well thats it from me ....someone else continue with the actual meeting
ok let me try.
mera_zahaan
so kripa enters the cafe (she looks beautiful in her white choodidar😊) prithvi gets up to welcome her, at the same time angad enters and they both walk to prithvi (who is a bit shocked now😲) angad and kripa seems to be extremly happy, they both say hi to prithvi and sit down. then angad says sorry to prithvi for whatever he did to him. kripa says"angad ko thodi galatfehmi ho gayi thi, use laga ki hum dono ek dusre se pyaar karte hain".
prithvi all shocked and confused tries to say something then kripa continues "main janti hoon tum aur harshini ek dure se kitna pyaar karte ho, i am very happy for both of u"(ouch!!!💔) prithvi is in no condition to say anything (flashback..........when he sends the letter to kripa by waiter........when kripa gives him the letter.........when harshini comes to the dinner.........it hurts💔) then angad asks kripa "kya logi"
''jo tum chaho''(of'course coffee😉)
prithvi excuses himself and goes to washroom😭😭😭 angad and kripa enjoying the coffee❤️❤️❤️
Ok lets continue…..i'm getting the hang of it now (bips)
Prithvi comes back….angad n kripa are sipping coffee, exchanging sweet glances and murmuring sweet nothings in each other ears….its more than prithvi can take so he goes up to them and says " studio se phone aaya hai…I have to go…kuch urgent kam hai "
Kripa brightly wishes him goodbye (well our love birds can't obviously be disappointed that the kabab mein haddi is leaving)…
Prithvi tries to quietly slip into his pocket the ring lying on the table but angad sees him. Then his eyes fall on the bunch of roses lying on the chair…..angad put two and two together and immediately figures out what the hell is happening (its not rocket science…. its not that tough to figure out, is it ? especially with prithvi's love sick puppy looking face)
Angad looks at prithvi…prithvi first has this look of immense sadness and then as angad stares at him, prithvi gets this look of steely determination , almost as if he is saying " you don't deserve her, you womanizing, drunkard creep…she is just too good for you… tum aaj iske saath ho, lekin zyaada din tak nahin rahoge"
Our hero (Angad ofcourse !!) recognizes a challenge when he sees one. He puts one arm around Miss-blissfully-unaware-of-everything….and kisses her. Mind you, as much as our hero loves kissing our heroine, this kiss was purely to irritate prithvi…. As if to say " you think you are better than me you wimp….ok then lets see what you have got… aa dekhen zara kis mein kitna hai dum "
The WAR IS ON
Now someone else write…..
P.S : I turned prithvi negative here for 2 reasons…
(1) to give him a spine…seriously which guy just stares at the love of his life like devdas and not do anything to win her ??
(2) I didn't want to get other characters like naina into all this…bec then the story would turn into like those saas bahu serials where the scheming mother in law to be wants to get rid of her prospective daughter in law….
But ofcourse whoever is the new writer is free to introduce new characters…hoe abt the mishti angle ?
will continue the story next night girl
angad and kripa are at the table and prithvi just leaves then. angad tell kripa that he will be right back and tells her to wait for him.then angad gose out side and prithvi is over there about to go in his car. angad who became a goody good guy went up to prithiv to make him feel better,and then we see prithiv see angad and then prithiv starts to talk to angad and say you took my love form me and i will never for give you for that and then they show angad looking like he was sorry but cant do any thing about it.
as we all know prithiv became a bad boy let see how low he will be come. prithiv says to angad that you took kripa away form me now let see how long she will stay with you.then prithiv starts to sound like the evil angad and say i prithiv will marry kripa in frount of you angad.then angad also gets a word in this challeng that prithiv hit on him.angad say that he will marry kripa weather he likes it or not and then he says that when angad gets a challeng he never backs out and he never loses
back at the table where kripa is siting.kripa is wating for angad.and soon angad comes and kripa comes in and says what took you so long angad just says to kripa that he had some un finshed work with prithiv
now you will get to see the two love birds togather angad and kripa go shoping togather.kripa is holding a shirt and looks like the type that prithiv wears all the time then when angad come in front of kripa.kripa say to angad that the shirt will look good on him angad for one didnt agree and said that it wasnt his type,but kripa for one wouldnt back down and ended up makeing him try the shirt
it is now the end of the day and is is night time +it is raining realy hard out side to make things wrose or better your way of puting.it the car breaks down and angad tell kripa that they can run to the out house it is just 10mins away form them then angad and kripa go to the out house as angad and kripa reach the out house kripa and are there alone
on the other had in side angad houes there is a party going on and a whole bunch of reporters there.then there is this one reporter who gose out side for some fresh air and sees angad form a window in the out house but doent see kripa and thinks to go in the out house and just enterview angad.the reporter is moveing to the out house
then we see angad and kripa togather all dryed up kripa and angad start to fight on who loves each other the most then angad moves tord kripa and push her on the bed angad on top of kripa and stats to say that he loves her the most and then kiss kripa for what seemed like an hour
to bad for angad and kripa the reporter sees and here this and the next day it is on the frount page in the news paper and also the top breaking new on tv and every were kripa nad angad went as angad and kripa had a hard time telling this to angads mom prithiv had quite a happy time watching the news saying let see how long angads mom will let them stay togather
i will stop here some one please continue
so the story continues......bips
(not the twist i had expected, but since somebody has already written it, lets carry it from there)
prithvi is all smiles...he knows naina is going to blow up like a pressure cooker...and what abt kripa's parents reaction ? they are never going to tolerate their daughter being in such a compromising position with angad, prithvi is really happy..he didn't have to do anything...angad self-destructed...wow !!!
kripa sits in the outhouse...her head in her hands...she just can't believe what has happened....angad walks in...he stops at the door, not sure what to say...not sure what her reaction is going to be...kripa looks up...her eyes are all teary and red...angad just stares at her and then……kripa runs into his arms
angad more than anything is relieved...he was almost afraid that somehow kripa was going to find a reason to blame this fiasco on him (Our heroine is afterall not the most logical and balanced person in this world)
" Relax....sab theek ho jayega...yeh newspaper wale hamesha masala dhoondte rehte hain...zyaada mat soocho " says angad trying to reassure krips that its all going to be ok
"Kya theek ho jaayega ? " says a visibly agitated kripa " main mama papa ko kya kahongi ? "
angad lets go of kripa and plonks himself on her bed... not looking worried at all
"simple...keh dena, hum CPR (mouth to mouth life saving technique for the uninitiated) practice kar rahe the...kabhi bhi zaroorat pad sakti hai...sabko aana chahiye " says angad with a twinkle
" unbelievable...tumhe is waqt bhi mazaq soojh raha hai " says kripa, the tension on her face being replaced by frustation
" actually, mujhe aur bahoot kuch soojh raha hai...lekin mujhe nahin lagta ki tum us sab ke mood mein ho "
" pls angad...be serious...this is not a joke "
" exactly my point sweetheart...my love for you is not a joke... jisko jo kehna hai, jo soochna hai, jo karna hai, karne do..... itni fikar mat karo "
" its not that simple angad....sab log kya soochenge... mujhe pata hai ki tumhe kuch pharak nahin padta... tumhe is sab ki aadat hai, tumhare liye ye sab aam baat hai.....lekin mere liye....." krips chokes on the words and turns around " sab ko yehi lag ne wala hai ki main bhi un lakhon ladkiyon mein se hoon jo tumhare saath gaane ki liye kuch bhi kar sakti hain "
hearing this, the smile vanishes from angad's face... he gets up and walks to her...turns her around.... but she still doesn't look at him...she just refuses to meet his eyes and keeps staring at the floor.
" look at me " angad pleads " pls look at me " she finally does. for the first time he realises how disturbed she is by all this and knows that this could be the turning point in their relationship.
he says with the most tender voice " don't ever, ever cheapen our relationship by comparing yourself to those other girls...they are just fans, you are my life...i couldn't care less what happens in their lives but everything -no matter how small- that happens to you, affects my life as well.... i didn't react strongly not bec i don't think this is imp but bec it wouldn't help if both of us lost our tempers and start screaming like complete lunatics "
kripa tries to look angry at this but she can't help smiling a little " so , you think i am a lunatic "
" ya..just a little bit " angad says...she hits him playfully and he continues " its one of the reasons i love you for..... and don't worry i have already taken care of the reporter, in tomorrows newspaper they are going to print an apology...and say that photograph was fake "
" but......" starts kripa
angad says " no buts....don't worry... they will do it... there is very little that angad khanna can't get done...so just relax "
he gently wipes off her tears and kisses her forehead.... she hugs him and he wraps his arms around her, very tightly as if he is never going to let her leave....
prithvi stands near the door watching this ( what do u expect.... its an ekta serial.... somebody always has to be watching someone...right ) . he just burns with jealousy and suddenly a plan comes to his mind.........
now someone else continue..........................
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