my thoughts (fan fiction) on KYPH - Page 30

hiiiii....
howa u guys today???
well am concluding again........

kripa moves from the hall and goes to the bed room(in an angry mood).....

angad looks at kripa when she leaves...

after kripa leaves dadi asks angad:tum dono ke beech mai koi problem hai kya angad my son???

angad:nahi dadi kuch nahi...ap khamokha ghabra rahi hai..ap chai peejiyeh..mujhe kuch kaam yaad aagaya ...mai abhi aata hu ..ok...

dadi:ok my son..take care...

continued.......

angad goes to the bed room to talk to kripa.....angad enters the room...kripa looks at him and turns around......she finds for the phone....

kripa:offhooo..yeh mainey apna mobile kaha per rakh diya??(she talks to herself....

angad sits on the sofa and looks at her and finding the right time to speak to her.....kripa is serching the phone as she finds in on the dressing table...

she dials a number and sends an sms to vivan....vivan calls her back insteed of replying her back in sms.....

tring tring!!!!!!

kripa picks up the call as angad is watching her.....

kripa:hello...

vivan:hey my princess..howa u my princess..???tum log theek se pahunch gayeh naa??

kripa (looking at angad):ohh yea vivan hum theek sey pahunch gayeh....tum kaisey ho??

angad is shocked ...he is angry coz kripa was chatting to vivan on phone....kripa wantedly tries to talk more in front of angad....

vivan:haan kripa mai thik hu...tum dono kaisey ho???

kripa:haan mai toh theek hu...aur haa angad toh mazey mai hai apni saali ke saath...(she taunts angad)...he is very excited coz his saali has come to meet him u know....

vivan:saali????kaun saali???jaha tak mai jaanta hu tumhari koi behen nahi hai....

kripa:arey vivan my sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet friend...(angad is getting jealous...and kripa is purposely getting sweet and close to vivan on phone)am talking about purvi from whichta.......

vivan:awwww purvi.....that naughty gal is back to kill us again????kab aayi woh???kaha ruki hai woh???kaisi lagti hai woh itney saal baad???

kripa:arey arey arey vivan....take a break....itney saarey questions???ok lemme answer it one by one.....purvi aaj hi mumbai aayi hai...mai aur angad gayeh they ussey receive karney..(she looks at angad wid her soft and light angry looks)..she is staying at our place....and haa ur third question was purvi itney saalon baad kaisi lagti hai.....and us question ka answer toh angad tumhey detaily bata sakta hai....(she looks at angad in an angry mood)

vivans secretary:sir mumbai hotel ke baarey mai aapney mr chopra ko jo information collect karney ki duty di thi ,uskey baarey mai baat karney ke liyeh mr chopra ka call aaya hai...wat should i say him sir???

vivan to secretary:ek sec...ask him to be on line.....

vivan to kripa:hey princess i'll give u a call very soon...mai abhi thoda busy hu....aur haan aur ek surprise hai tumharey liyeh....very soon u'll be shocked.....

kripa:kya surprise vivan???

vivan:hmmmm surprise bata dunga toh surprise nahi rahenga na princess.....so wait n watch....ok...my princess ..take care..baad mai baat kartey hai..ok bye....

kripa:ok vivan...bye dear.....

she cancels the call and looks at angad...angad is angry+sad+confused....kripa keeps the phone ok the table and has no mood to help dadi to prepare the dinner...she also have mixed feelings for nagad....she is also angry+sad+confused....she gets out of the room and goes to dadi....dadi is reading some magzine in the hall..kripa goes to her....

kripa:dadi.....dadi woh.....dadi actually....dadi....

dadi:offhooo kripa kya kehna hai tumhey..bolo....

kripa:actaully dadi merey sar mai bahut dard ho raha hai...aur mai......(she stops )

dadi:kripa i know wat ur about to say me....its already 8.00 pm now and already finished making dinner for everybody....

kripa:dadi...opss am sorry i dint know its 8.00pm....am very sorry....

dadi:mujhe pata hai tumhey time ka bhi andaaza nahi tha...

kripa:dadi woh......

dadi:kripa i know u and angad had a fight and dono hi ek dusarey sey baat karna chahatey ho per ........pause.....dekho kripa ,mai sirf itna hi kahongi dont get gaps between yourself n angad for some stupid reason....that will make ur life more worst....ok?

kripa:hmm yea dadi..mai toh buss chota sa mazaak kar rahi thi uskey saath but don know y mujhe mujhper bhi gussa aaney laga tha....

dadi:tumhey gussa issliyeh aaya kyuki tum angad ko hurt karti ho toh dard tumko hota hai...aur angad ko guss issiliyeh aata hai kyu ki he cant bare u not speaking to him......

kripa:haa dadi aap sahi keh rahi ho....infact ap humesha sahi kehti ho....phir bhi mai angad ko realize karwana chahati hu ki kissi key saamney jealous karney se opposite partner ko kaisa lagta hai....(she smiles thinking about him)...

dadi:ok ok chalo abhi jaao sab ko dinning table per dinnner ke liyeh bulao.....

kripa says dadi:ok.....she leaves to the bed room....angad sees kripa....

angad:kripa.....pause....

kripa:angad hum baad mai baat kartey hai...filhaal dadi hum sab ko khaney ke liyeh dining table per bula rahi hai....

kripa leaves the room....angad tells to himself...kripa.......i love u alot kripa...ab mai tumko kaisey manau....mai toh us vivan katoh kachumbar bana dunga.......(in anger)

kripa goes to purvi's room and asks her to come down.....sab log neechey ikkhatta ho jatey hai.....dadi enters while the maid is serving the food....

kripa:dadi this is purvi my friend from nainital...apni padhai usa se khatam karkey wapas aayi hai...

purvi:namastey dadi....kaisi ho aap....(she hus him)

dadi:aww mai thik hu purvi....koi takleef toh nahi hui naa ghar aatey samay???

purvi:nahi dadi i enjoys angads and kripas company....

angad looks at kripa..kripa looks at angad in a angry mood....

kria mumrmers:haa dadiangad tha naa purvi ka khayaal rakhney ke liyeh....

angad over hears it.....and looks at kripa.....

every body is having their dinner..angad and kripa r sitting beside each other....angad puts his left hand on kripas lap.....kripa pusts her left hand down to remove angads hand from her lap but angad holds it tight and doesnt leave it....angad and kripa both look at each other eyes while dadi notices it....

dadi:kripa ,angad, is everything alrite beta???

kripa/angad:(angad leaves kripas hand)haa dadi sab kuch theek hai....

...dadi suddenly speaks out....

dadi:mai prithvi ko bahut miss kar rahi hu...jitney din tum dono yaha per nahi they utney din prithvi ney meri dekhbaal ki...

purvi is listening to their chat and is confused....

kripa:yeaa dadi..mai bhi usko miss kar rahi hu...

angad:haa dadi..he is a very nice guy......waisey woh singapore sey kab laut raha hai wapas??

dadi:pata nahi beta....usney kaha tha woh phone karke inform karenga...

angad:no problem dadi hum phone kar letey hai ussey.....

dadi:beta wohi toh problem hai....usney toh apna singapore number nahi choda hai...sur uska cell singapore jaaney ke ek din pehley kho gayatha aur usney naya cell le liya but mujhe uska number bataya nahi....wahi per toh gadbad ho gayi.....mainey bhi usko number nahi pucha....usko toh yeh bhi pata nahi hai ki tum dono yaha per wapass laut aayeh ho.....

kripa:wow phir toh hum usko surprise dengey.....so lets wait for him to call and inform about his arrival.....

purvi:hellooo....but yeh prithvi kaun hai ???

angad:saali ji....prithvi mera aur kripa ka bahut hi close friend hai and nowa days he stays wid us.....

purvi:ok wat eva.....

every body finish the dinner....and they go back to their rooms.......

kripa is sleeping on the bed wid a blankit covering her face....angad comes close to her from the other side of the bed....he removes the blankint from her face....

angad:kripa....am sorry.....am sorry for wat eva happend...plz mujhsey baat karo...i cant handle this anymore.....

kripa gets up and sit down on bed....

kripa:hmmmm toh janaab ko maafi chahiyeh...??

angad:plz kripa mujhe maaf kardo....ab tumhi batao mujhe maafi kya karney sey milengi???

kripa:hmmmmmmok 100 baar uthak baithak karo woh bhi kaan pakadkey, phir sonchungi.....

angad:100 baar woh bhi kaan pakadkey...????and woh karney kee baad bhi aap sonchengi????

kripa:tumhari marzee..agar manzur hai toh bolo...warna mai jaa rahi hu soney....

angad:ok ok kripa plzz....ruko...mai bhi shuru karta hu 100 uthak baithak.....

angad gets up from bed and stans on the other sid eof bed where kria was sitting....

angad:dekho mai karna chalu kar raha hu.....ek,doh,teen,char,paanch.......

kripa gets up from the bed and goes close to angad......he still continues doing his uttak baithak...he thinks kripa is cheaking out whether he is doing it right or wrong.....

kripa comes behing angad and blows air in to his ears....angad realizes that kripa is getting naughty....he stops doing the utthak baithak and turns aroung......he holds kripa's shoulders tight.....he looks in to kripas eyes very romantically and desperately and get soo deep in to her ...and kripa feels his touch and get involved in looking at angad deeply into his eyes....angad says kripa i love u kripa i love u.....and then immidiately he hugs her desperately and kripa also hugs him very much deperately....

they r still hugging each other....angad is kissing hetr al over he takes her to bed by kissing her desperately........he makes her sleep on bed and sleeps over her.....he looks in to her eyes as she does the same.....both r holding each other evry tightly.....and both r also looking at each others eyes very deeply.....

angad:kripa,mai tumsey bahut pyar karta hu kripa....mai tumhey is duniya mai sabsey zyada chahata hu...mai kissi aur ke baarey mai sonch bhi nahi sakta....trust me kripa.....am sorry agar mainey tumhey hurt kiya.....but it was juz for fun...trust me kripa...i love u honey.....

kripa:mai jaanti hu angad...i know u love me.....i even know aaj saveyrey jo kuch bhi hua woh sab tumney jaan buch kar kiya hai.....but still i love u alot angad...ur the best hubby in the whole world......i trust u angad....and i love u too.....

angad:yea kripa i know am the best husbant in the whole world....(wantedly apni taareef kar ta hai apni hi muh sey)

kripa(shocked):(she hits angad)angaddd....tum nahi sudarongey na????(she hits angad and they both have a laugh and hug each other tightly on the bed sleeping in each others arms)

angad:(they r still hugging each other )suchi kripa...am telling this from the core of my heart...i love u alot ...and ur the best wife in the whole world....and am very lucky to have u.....i dont know wat can i do wid out u......wid out u am nothing...tum bin mai zinda nahi reh sakta kripa...i love u kripa......

kripa:awwwwww..i love u too honey...i love...

angad:i love u.....i love u alot kripa..neva eva get angry to me.....i love u kripa....

they hug each other even more tight....and they have a ding dong....hehhehhehehhehehhe......

the scene ends here.......

i hope u guys loved it......i'll conclude the next part very soon.....so stay tuned...

ok bye sweetaats.....
take care...
keep smiling....
LUV U ALL....
NANNU.....

Originally posted by: NANNU

OK Chaloo..i'll not tempt u guys more...here is my next romantic conclusion in my next post.😉.....stay tuned....😆

plz hurry nannu...i can't wait any more longer...

~sweta~

wow mamu plzz continue yaa let ektha get inspired by ur fanfrc......

wow nannu just to romanic....keep it up.....i just love it...

~sweat~

Originally posted by: dishachoudary

now plz dnt stop ........

😆arey yaar mai thank gayi conclusions likh likh kar....so i'll ost the next conclusion wid in 2 or 3 days....ok ???

i hope am not dragging the story???😃

Aww Nannu so romantic and very nice story.

aww thats so romantic nannu. Keep it up

too good nannu thats just brilliant u have concluded all parts very nicely i am sure if i would also conclude those parts they would not be that good as u have done and one more thing this was not my idea it was OUR idea nannu so the credit goes to u also NANNUJI

nannu meri jaan kahan ho. I missed so much and finally got chance to read the story. Angad ko itna romantic mat banao, mujhe kuch kuch hota hai.
ab jaldi se continue karo.
luv ya.

that was gr8 ! plz continue !