just a poem

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Kimzzz

@Kimzzz

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Posted: 19 years ago

because i never wrote a poem before im sorry if its not that great !!

YOU AND ALWAYS YOU

You are in my heart

you are in my dreams

you are in my eyes

i see you every where i go

i see you and only your face in everyone

your name goes around and around in my head

i love you so much you dont just know

why?why?why? why dont you know? why cant i tell you?

I LOVE YOU TILL I WILL DIE AND MY SOUL WILL ALWAYS LOVE YOU!!!

A POEM THAT ANGAD MIGHT SAY TO KRIPA

DO YOU LIKE IT?

IF I DID NOT DO A GOOD JOB CAN YOU TELL ME HOW I CAN IMPROVE?

ANGAD AND KRIPA FAN

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waterlily_126

@waterlily_126

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Posted: 19 years ago

jeez it better den watever i can rite..
sry..iam not a g8 writer..
it was g8
luv
niva 👏

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soni595

@soni595

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Posted: 19 years ago

"It does not take a great poet, to express best"
I love it, even though your poem is simple, it has all the right words, that match Angad and Kripa's love-a-tic state...

Keep posting such posts 😛

Love
Soni

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ritu29

@ritu29

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Posted: 19 years ago

👏 👏 i really enjoyed the whole poem EXCEPT the LAST part yaar...i though it was for me until u said

"this is what angad whould sing to kripa"

ne shattered yaar i though u loved me??????? 😭

ok ok only jokingi lloved the poam ....gr8 work (by the way could u edit the last part to " this is what ritu would say to all her IF friends? 😉 😳 )

see dimag ho to ritu ben jaisa....me maska maring and maring....and now going... 😆

<RITU>

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Kimzzz

@Kimzzz

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Posted: 19 years ago

THANKS GUYS I TRY TO WRITE MORE

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Kimzzz

@Kimzzz

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Posted: 19 years ago

IF YOU WANT YOU CAN TRY TO MATHCH SOME PICS WITH IT

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amrita

@fading_smiles

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Posted: 19 years ago

👏 👏 👏 i like it! good job

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Sonia

@can_gal

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Posted: 19 years ago

👏 👏 👏
great poem!

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Amna

@GangstaPrincess

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Posted: 19 years ago

Yeah it's soooooooo sweet sooooooo good I wish someone would say that to me lolz JK!!! BUT U KNOW WHAT I CAN WRTIE BETTER THAN U lolzzzzzz JUST KIDDING It's REALLY NICE

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Simrat

@simrat91

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Posted: 19 years ago

#10

awww itz beautiful!! 👏 👏

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