Fan fiction for the week 29th Aug-4th sep - Page 29

Originally posted by: cute_face86

natz yaar kuch to sharam karo 😉 😆

ye sharam kon hai di??? haven't met her yet...😆 okay bad joke... but seriously... next part jaldi... and as I said before... ye pyaas hai badi... isleyay ye dil maange more!😉😆

Oh farah You rock
please post the next part soon
i just luv your story

pooja

farah u absolutely rocked dear ... the wait was worth while.... thanks a bunch for two parts ... it was lovely .... no im waiting for Sujal to come to know the truth ....jaldi jaldi post karo .........

Natz ... aarman was fab .... im preety damn shure that somewhere in his heart Sujal is liking Kashish ...

Aamna .... pyar to hona hi tha was sooo cute .... but dont u think that the part was a lil short ....next time longer part.....varna.... hehehe

THIS PART IS DEDICATED TO AMNADI, NATZ (JANU), PINK, VIVACIOUS, GENIOUS, FARAH AND EVERY1 ELSE WHO WRITES THE STORIES!
AMNA PYAAR TO HONA HI THA WAS EXTRA CUTE...WRITE MORE!
here is the next part of Sangeet

After this part of sangeet...Veena aur Prerna stage per chartay hain
Veena: Attention everyone!
Prerna: aj hum donon parivaaron ke liye bhut khaas din hai kyunki aj humari beti Kashish hamesha ke liye Sujal ki ho jaye gi
Veena: aur aj isi khushi main shamil honnay ke liye aaj ap sab log yahan aye hain
Prerna: aur isi liye hum chahtay hain ke ap poori tarah se iss sangeet main shamil hon
Veena: isi liye yeh do kali pattian hain jinhay hum ap main sey kisi ki bhi ankhon per bandhain gay
Prerna: aur un main se aik larka aur aik larki hogi...jaisey hi yeh kali pattian ap logon ki ankhon per dalli jayengi to ap ko dance floor per bhej dia jayeega jahan ap ko kisi bhi gannay per dance kiya jayega
Veena: aur jo sab se acha dance karain gay woh game jeetay gain!!
Prerna: aur humari judge hain....Ba!!
Clapping....
Veena: to game shuroon karain?
Everyone: yeahhhh!!
woh donon dance floor se uttar ker audience mainj attay hain...aik side per sarri larkion ko kharra kia jatta hai aur aik side pe sarray larkay...veena larkon ki side per jati hai aur Prerna larkion ki side per
Prerna: to sab se pehli barri hai....
Prerna Sneha ki ankhon per patti dalti hai aur Veena aik handsome larkay ki ankhon per patti dalti hai...yeh hai Prithvi Viraani...yes the son of the Virani's and Sujal's very close friend
They both are sent on the dance floor....woh donon ankhon se pattian utartay hain...Sneha keeps on staring at this cute guy...suddenly there is a soong played behind:-
Song: SAY SHAVA SHAVA MAHIYA SAY SHAVA SHAVA
tehy dance greatly and everyone claps after their fab dance...
Veena: to ab agli barri hai...
Do bhut cute aur bhut hot couple on the dance floor....ankhon se pattian utari...yes they are ur very own Akshat and Kasak!!
Akshat: oh...tumahary saath dance karna parray ga??
Kasak: shut up!
wo murti hai aur Akshat uss ka haath pakarta hai..
Song: AJ AN CHORRON GA TUJHEY DHAM DHAMA DHAM
TU NE KIA SAMJHA HAI MUJHEY DHAM DHAMA DHAM

ok so they dance on this revengous kinda song...after their dance their is a lot of hooting...ab agli barri hai kis ki?
Ankhon se andhera gahyab hua...aik taraf hain Mehak ki ankhain aur aik taraf....our very hot Varrun!
theey stare a lot at each other....Varrun is smiling, Mehak is blushing...
Song: TUMHAIN AJ MAIN NE JO DEKHA
TUMHAIN AJ MAIN NE JO DEKHA
CHAMKA HAI QISMAT KA TAARRA
BADLI NASEEB KI REKHA
TUMHAIN AJ MAIN NEY JO DEKHA!!
wonderful dance, great song..enjoyable sangeet....aur ab dance floor per aye hain bhut hi cute couple: KavyaAnjali!
Song: BOLAIN CHURIAN BOLEY KANGNA
HAYE MAIN HO GAYI TERI SAJNA
TEREY BIN JIYO NAYI O LAGDA MAIN TEY MARR GAYIAN
LEY JA LEY JA...SOHNIYE LEY JA LEY JA!!
wow....so cute performance!!aur ab aglay contestants hain....the ery cute Gunn aur new-entry Krishna!!
Song: TUM SEY MILKE DIL KA HAI JO HAAL KIA KAHAIN
HO GAYA HAI KAISA YEH KAMAAL KIA KAHAIN..
DUM TARA DUM TARA DUM TARA DUN TARA DUM!!
what a performance!! so the next vouple is a married couple...yes, Kumkum and Summit!!
Summit: dance??
Kumkum: tumharay saath...no way!
Song: JAANU MERI JAAN...MAIN TER QURBAAN
JAANU MERI JAAN...MEIN TERE QURBAAN
MAIN TERA TU MERI...JANAY SARRA HINDUSTAAN!!
acha...after this performance ...the couple on the dance floor is Sameer-Shruti!
Song: TU YAAR TU HI DILDAAR
TU HI MERA PYAAR TERA MEREY DIL MAIN HAI DARBAAR
KAR KE IK BAAR BERA PAAR MUJHEY BGARPAAR LAGAY
BEKAAR PHIRRON MAIN
BANN KE TERA JOGIII!!!
after this fab performance the last and the best couple is.....ofcourse...Sujal-Kashish!
now this time the song is not a dance song...but a romantic song!
Song: SANSON KO SANSON MAIN DHALNAY DO ZARA
DHEEMI SI DHADKAN KO BHARANAY DEY ZARA
LAMHON KI GUZARISH HAI YEH
PASS AJAYEN...HUM...HUM TUM!!
ok...to in sab performances ke baad...time hai faisla karnay ka keh sab sey acha performance kis ka tha
Ba: mujehy sab ki hi performances bhut achi lagi...lekin sab se achi performance to dulha dulhan ki thi...yanni ke Sujal-Kashish ki!!
cheerinhg,hooting aur clapping
Ba: aur uss ke baad ki sab se achi performance thi...Mehak aur Varrun ki!
clapping
Ba: aur uss ke baad sab ki performances bhut hi achi thi!
iss sab ke baad time ata hai Kashish ko mehendi laganay ka time!
Veena aur Prerna Kashish ko mehendi laga rahay hotay hain aur baqi larkian bhi mehendi laga rhi hoti hain!
and now there is the girl's dance time!
Kumkum,Anjali, Kasak, Gunn, Kanan,Mehak, Shruti aur Sneha...yeh sab mil ker dance karti hai
Songs: MEHENDI HAI RACHANY WALI, HAATHON MAIN GEHRI LAALI....
SAB KI BAARATAIN AYI DOLI TU BHI LANA\DULAN BANA KE HUM KO RAJA JI LEY JANA....
AND MANY OTHER SONGS!!

Coming up: Sujal Kashish ke mehendi ke kuch romantic scnes aur shadi...plz plz plz COMMENT ON THIS PART aur wait for the other one...ok thanks and luv ya all kiran!

WOW kiran...fab part! 😆 ...sab couples ko pair up kar diya.... 😳 😆 😆 .....
waiting for the mehndi!!!! 😃 😃

the stories in the group are awesome . every story is marvellous . please continue all stories fast...................................... 😊

Kiran (kashish-rox) .... mindblowing part ... sangeet was so full of masti and dhamaal ... i really enjoyed reading .. and obviously sujal and kashish would win .... but all the couples were organized well ... and the songs were lovely..

now what romance gonna happen at the mehndi ... cnat wait
please post asap

okizz.....next part! (do naam ek jaan)

..........the person outside.....knocks.....kashish apne apnsoo wipe kar ti hai and closes the window!...
kashish: ajao.....
charu: di!
kashish: haan charu.....koi kaam tha
charu:....(doesnt say anything just nods in a "no" direction)......
kashish:.......mein soch rahi thi kal se college join kar loon
both of them sit on kashish's bed.
kashish: (cont.)....aur phir ghar mein bhi koi khaas kaam nahi hota....isliye.....socha......
charu:...jo ho raha hai woh sahi nahi hai
kashish looks at charu....: kya matlab?
charu: di......aap kya samajhti hain...........apke chupane se aapka ghum humse chup sakta hai...........aapke mitane se yeh ansooo............mit saktein hain..............nahi di...............bilkul nahi...........
kashish:....ab in bataon ka kya faida.............shayad yeh meri kismat..........
charu: kismat ko ilzaam dena bus karo di................woh di jo larna janti thi, apne faisle karna janti thi.........humein sahi aur galat ka fark sikhati thi................woh kahan kho gayi hai? kyun aaj khud keh liye itni kamzoor ban gayi ho di....kyun!
kashish: tumhare in sawalon ka mere paas koi jawaab nahi (she gets up from the bed)
charu: (holds her hand...) to jawab dhondo di...........abhi bhi waqt hai.......doosron ke faislon keh agaye...khud ki khushi mat qurbaan karo.........plz di....i beg of you! (charu is almost in tears.........jis di se woh itna pyaar karti hai....aj woh itne dhuk mein hai.......charu goes from the room.........when she gets outside....she sees someone standing behind the door)
charu: mama.........aap!
tulsi:......woh...............
charu shakes her head in dissapointment: apko nahi lagta..........apke is faisle mein di keh liye dhuk keh ilawa aur kuch nahi!
tulsi:....she's numb!: mein uski khushi chahti hoon
charu:.....mujse behtar to aap janti hain keh di ki khushi kis ke saath hai mama..................nahi janti kya? (she questions)
tulsi gets confused!.......both leave from there!

tulsi in her room:.....tumhe bahut takleef di hai mein ne kashish.....ab sirf tumhe khush dekhna chahti hon...........magar lagta aaj apne hi haaton mein ne woh bhi tum se cheen li hain..................muje maaf kardo............

its now morning in america!.............the confrence takes place.....jahan sujal apne hi khayalon mein gum tha...but somehow......akshat...manages it off well!

akshat: sujal....theek ho na
sujal:hmmm.....chale airport?
akshat: haan!
sujal and akshat board their flight and zzuueeeeeee! flight takes off!

Menawhile the college is working in routine...............rishi too has come.....but not to take his class, infact to meet someone.......................

rishi: charu (waves his hand in the air to get her attention!) wait!
charu: (stands still as rishi walks upto her).......hi....rishi
rishi: hi....woh tumhi se milne aya tha...........big b aur tumhari di keh bare mein kuch baat karni........
charu:......kya baat karni thi..............
rishi:.......yehi keh jo kuch bhi huwa hai woh galat hai............
charu:....tumhare kehne se ab kya fark parta hai...jo kuch kehna tha tumhare dad aur bua keh chuke hain.............
rishi: charu plz.......unko jo karna tha woh kar chuke........likin unke ane wale iradon ko humein rokna hoga..................
charu: ane wale irade................abhi kuch karna baqi hai???
rishi:..........(he looks sternly at her).....dad big b ki shaadi archie se karwana chahte hain....................
charu: (shocked) WHAT!!!!!!!!........................................

in the plane:...............
akshat:........sujal.......tumne lunch nahi kiya...kuch khao lo
sujal:.......bhook nahi hai..........
akshat:.....yaar..........dont worry i am sure koi aisa bara masla nahi hoga.......warna, uncle tumhe khudh bula lete...........
sujal:........muje apni fikar nahi hai akshat.....bus kashish ke bare mein soch raha tha...........kahin woh kisi musibat mein..............
akshat:...jitna socho ge utne hi bure khayal ayenge...........yeh lo apple kha lo (hehehe....lol)

...........
charu comes back home and runs into kashish's room!....kashish was sitting on her bed holding onto sujal's photograph!
charu: diii!...........sujal bhaiya ki shaadi archie se te ho gayi hai..........
kashish stand up from her bed aur uske haathon se tasveer zameen peh gir jati hai!...........
charu:....di plz....aap kuch keejiye.....isis tarah raha to sujal bhaiya aur aap kabhie nahi mil payeinge.................
kashish silently observes sujal's tasveer..... a tear rolls down her cheek and lands on sujal's charming face.....on the snap!...............

........plane.........
sujal: (wipes a drop of water from his face).....akshat...kya kar rahe ho
akshat:...sorry...woh jahaz ko jhatka laga to pani uchal gaya!........(he smiles when he looks at sujal)...........aisa laga keh tum ro rahe ho..........
sujal shakes his head and wipes of the remaning drops of water............(ek aur jadooooo...heheheheh................pyaar zaida ghera ho to aisa hi hota hai!!!!...rota koi hai aur ansoo kisi aur keh nikal te hain......)

akshat and sujal finally arrive back home......and drive to their residence...........the garewal house!!!!!!!!!!!............sujal ke maan mein ek becheini si thi............
akshat:....lo pohanch gaye ghar.................
they both get down and enter the house, where in the sitting room......vasu, archie and chetan were already present!!!........
sujal:......hi papa.......bua (he touches her feet....everything seemed normal too him........)
archie: hi sujal......(boy...shez over excited)
sujal: (just nods his head at her).....mama kahan hai papa?..........
chetan: tum jaldhi agaye sujal !!!!!
sujal: jee woh.(doesnt want to explian him anything).....mama kahan hain??
chetan:.........woh .....(he points towards the room)........par yeh to batao keh kaisi rahi meeting.....
sujal:haan......woh (he wants to meet veena first).......achi thi, details files mein hi hain...........(he walks towards veena's room but is se pehle keh woh kamre mein dakhil ho.......veena khud hi bahir ajati hai)..........mama! (he hugs her tightly)
veena: (too hugs him).....kaisa hai (she sounds low)
sujal: mein to theek hon.........magar apki tabiyat theek nahi lag rahi!........
veena:....nahi..........mein theek hon.........bus teri yaad arahi thi
akshat:...apne yaad kiya aur apke bete laut aye.............(he hugs veena)
sujal:........yeh rishi bhi na..........muje phone kar ke dara diya tha...........mein samjha keh koi serious problem ho gayi hai!..............aur rishi kahan hai............oh uska to college hoga.................mama............waise (he whispers in her ear)...............uska phone aya kya?
veena knew who sujal was talking about magar yeh nahi samajh araha tha keh jawab kya de............: ......kiss...kiss ka?
sujal:......mama...........kashish ka aur kiska .......koi phone aya kya?

veena aur chetan.....chup rehte hain.............while vasu speaks....
vasu:.........nahi aya!....aur naa hi kabhie ayega!!!!!!!!!!
sujal turns towards her (loud music.."DHA DHA DHA TANNA)...................

ok so....it ends here..........ab kya hoga.........sujal ko sab sach pata chale ga...........what will he do.........who will he blame...........kya hum sujal ka ek aur roop dekhein ge...................parte rahiye..............and keep commenting......
ek special thank you to pink...natz....princesspari105 (pooja) , ja'an.vi..harpy...and all those who read the fan fics.......thank you guys!!!!!
love..........farah!

too good guys. thanx farah 👏👏 and kiran 👏👏 for mentioning me.great story 👏👏👏. all u guys rock 😃

pink

hehe i m so famous har koi mujhe prt dedicate kartah hain thnx a loooooooot kiran and natz
natz the prt waz hilarious..piyush deserved it man goo d1
and kiran abhi parhna baakhi hain
sk kit waz gr888888 con fst
farah jii kya huwa aap bohot bade prts likh rahe ho aur ithne jaldi..daal main kuch kaala hain yaar
cute tht pthht prt waz good ...gr8 con kmkh fst..dunno y but i like it more 😳