A Poem on Sujal n Kashish

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sheela

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Posted: 18 years ago

#11

its really v nice n touchy yaar u have doen a fab job dear 😳

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kashishdabest

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Posted: 18 years ago

#12

awwwwwwwww wowww jaanu wot a fantastic poem, its just toooo goood!!1 loved it totally!!!1 mwah jaanu u rock, tuhara har creation superb hota hai, seedkha dil ko choo jaatha hai aur woh isliye kyunki saaf saaf pata chaltha hai tumne dil se likhi hai yeh baat!!!! 👏 keep it up jaan!!!!!! 👏 👏

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rajeevlicious

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Posted: 18 years ago

#13

thank u so much again frnds, im so glad dat u all liked the poem, n yes summi dii yeh humne dil se hi likhi thi n im sure knw dat 😉

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kashishdabest

@kashishdabest

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Posted: 18 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: starbellz_21
thank u so much again frnds, im so glad dat u all liked the poem, n yes summi dii yeh humne dil se hi likhi thi n im sure knw dat 😉

yes jaan i do knw that, bcoz i can feel it wen i read it😳...aur har insaan jodi ke liye jab likhta hai thio dil se hi likhta hai!!!😳

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ruksaar

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Posted: 18 years ago

#15

absolutely superb poem farheen dii!!!
kuch hi lines mein aapne iss pyari si story ke bare mein sab kuch badi hi khubsoorti se keh diya hai...
i liked the the last lines very much...

" chod diya tha jab saaye ne bhi saath kashish ka,
apne pyar se thaam liya sujal ne daaman kashish ka.
Der se hi sahi woh sujal ke pyar ko samajh payi
shayad isiliye SUJAL KI KASHISH WOH BAN PAYI..."

so beautiful n touchy..
luv u for this 😳 😳

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