KTH story (Remake)part 5 - pg 17 - Page 5

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Posted: 18 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: angelic eyes

awesum Summi.. barish aur aamna and Rajeev.. I mean sujal and kashish alg ho nahin sakte.... waitin 4 ur next part summi..😳

😆😆😆arre aamna rajeev kaho ya sujal kashish baat tho aik hi hai, am sure baarish ka unki real life se bhi koi connection hoga, i can guarantee that, lekin aan both have sed that they love the rain and its very romantic😆

waise agla part humari ana sweetheart likh rahi hai😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: cool_SK

great part summi
me will try to write down as good as u write

great work 👏

we can make an equation

sujal+kashish=barish

😛

luv it

lolz
ana

hey ana sweetheart thanx soo muich 4 ure lovely comments, n am sure ure part will be even better than mine😳

😆😆😆great equation yaar, inki chemistry itni amazing hai ke equations khud ba khud banthay jaathay hain😉😆😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: kashishdabest

hey ana sweetheart thanx soo muich 4 ure lovely comments, n am sure ure part will be even better than mine😳

😆😆😆great equation yaar, inki chemistry itni amazing hai ke equations khud ba khud banthay jaathay hain😉😆😆



hey no need 4 thanx
and don't say thanx me ever sis😃

i have wrote the part
waiting 4 amby baby's approval
😛

lol
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Posted: 18 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: cool_SK



hey no need 4 thanx
and don't say thanx me ever sis😃

i have wrote the part
waiting 4 amby baby's approval
😛

lol

ok sweetheart i wont say thanx agen, ab khush!!!!!!😳

ohhhh woww u wrote it, well waiiting 4 amby 2 post it!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
#45
Wowwww!!!

I've read it soo many times!!

I love itttt!!!

Woww summi di!! I didn't know you were THAT good at FF's!!!

Wowwwwww..!!!

Congrats...

And I'm surprised to see my name on the list too lol

Anam....xxx
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46

Again ppl lemme tell you this part is from Ana (cool_sk) nt from me...so mind it before giving comments lollz..me just producers lolzz.... just kiddin

Episode 2

Kashish enter and see mouli

On seeing Mouli…………Kashish start burning with anger

"Mouli……Kahan gaye thi tum"……….Kashish said that in angry tone

Mouli get scared and so was all…………mouli was not able to ans anything

"Di……app bheeg gain hain…………app ja k pehlay change kar lain………..warna app ko thand lag jaye gii"……….Mehak said that to change the topic but kashish raised her hand in order to

"Mouli maine poocha……….kahan gai thi tum"……kashish look at her with anger in her eyes on which mouli got frightened

"Di…..who…..main….who"……Mouli didn't know what to say

"abh koi naya jhoot bolna hai"

"nahin dii……..who main tau neha…."

"tum neha k ghar pe nahin thi……." Kashish was not in the mood in hering fake stories………..she just wanna listen reality………the TRUTH

"abh bataoo k kahan thii"

"dii……….who hamare college main aik party thi……….meri friends ne bohut insist kia tau main mana nahin kar sakki"……………Tears came in Mouli eyes

"tau kia tum mujhe sach nahin bata sakti thi"………….Kashish somehow control her anger

"I m sorry dii"……….Mouli yeh keh k kashish k galay lag k ronay laggi

"dekho mouli……" kashish was combining her hairs with her fingers………and was trying to make her calm.………..she can't stand any of her sister having tears in her eyes…………..and seeing mouli crying………she forget all her anger

"maine tum sab ko kabhi bhi kissi party main janay se nahin rokka………likin abhi kuch hi dinon main tumhare exams hain…………or main nahin chahti k tum apnay friends ki wajha se apna Grade loose karoo"

Kashish broke the hug and hold her from her shoulder

"tum papa ka sapna hoo Mouli…………..papa ka yehi armaan hai tum apnay College main top karoo………..kia tum yeh nahin chahti k papa ka sir fakhar se uncha hoo"

"Main chahti hoon dii"

"tau phir tum inh parties ko sirf apnay papers khatam honay tak bhool jaoo……..us k baad main tumhain nahin rokoon gii"………….Kashish said that with a smile

Mouli too got a smile "Ok dii………..i promise k main college main top karoon gii"

All were happy and hug each other.

"Chaloo…………abh ja k soo jaoo………..subah college jana hai na"

all were about to left to there room when kashish sneeze

Mouli, mehek, charu and kannan turn to her and kashish too look at them……and all laugh

On the other hand…………..going back to home…………the face of the girl was coming to sujal mind continuously………..

His heart was asking 4 one look of the girl again………..and his mind……….mind had stop working……….as it was still raining………he turn the car towards kashish house

Kashish went to her room and put the sujal's coat on a chair and stand in window…...rain was looking too beautiful…………she love rains……….so she couldn't stop herself and went outside in rain

Sujal park his car smoothly………..without making a noise infront of kashish house and saw kashish coming out from her house and was standing on door steps………kashish put her hand out and feel rain drops on them

Sujal keep looking at her

Background song
"Aisi aankhen nahin dekhi,
aisa kaajal nahin dekha" (he look at kashish eyes who were looking )

"Aisa jalwa nahin dekha,
aisa chehra nahin dekha" (he look at kashish face……….who was having a smile on her)

"Jab yeh daaman ki hawa de,
aag jungle mein laga de"….

(a strong wind strike to sujal………..and it smells sweet…like they came after touching kashish)

"Jab yeh saheraaon mein jaaye,
ret mein phool khilaaye"

(sujal sit down and touch a flower who was seem to be also enjoying the rain)

Hm hm hm hm hm, hm hm hm hm hm hm hm – 2"(he was thinking that kashish was standing across her and is playing in rain)


"Aisi duniya nahin dekhi,
aisa manzar nahin dekha"

(Kashish was enjoying rain but this time it feels different)

"Aisa aalam nahin dekha,
aisa dilbar nahin dekha"

(it was looking to her that every thing is smiling on seeing her)

"Uske kangan ka khalakna jaise bulbul ka chahekna"(sujal saw rain drops feeling from kashish bangles)

Uski paazeb ki chham chham jaise barsaat ka mausam(kashish now came into rain and was dancing in it)


"Aisa saawan nahin dekha,
aisi baarish nahin dekhi
Aisi rimjhim nahin dekhi
aisi khwaahish nahin dekhi"

(this time rain seems to be quite different from the other rains which she enjoyed in past)

Uski bebaaq si baatein jaise sardi ki ho raatein
Uff yeh tanhaai-e-masti jaise toofaan mein kashti

(sujal remembers that what she said while returning her coat)

Meethi koyal si hai boli jaise geeton ki rangoli

(sujal remembers how she sad that the guys were following her)

Surkh gaalon pe paseena jaise phaagun ka maheena
Aisi aankhen nahin dekhi

(sujal remembers her red face and her sweat forehead)

Aisa kaajal nahin dekha

Aisa jalwa nahin dekha

Aisa chehra nahin dekha(sujal keep looking at her playing in rain)

after 5 min kashish went inside……………..sujal came in senses and comb his hair…………and with a smile on his face, left to his home.

It was next morning

Kashish didn't come to her sis room to wake them up………….at 7:30 ……..kannan eyes open and she see the time……………it was 8……..

"oh my God! Aj hum late kaise ho gayee" Kannan said that and try to wake up her sisters

"Mouli, Mehek Charu uth jaoo……………hum aj late hoo gayee"

"ohoo Kannan"………Charu said while having her eyes, closed…….. "kyoun itna shoor macha rahi hoo"

"hum late ho gayee………………college nahin jana kia"

"Di abhi tak humain uthnay nahin aayein………..abhi bohut waqt para hai……" Mehek said that and see the time and 7:30…….in sleep looking her 6:40

"array utho"………….Kannan took the jug from side table and splash some water on their faces

all scremed and sit up

"kia hai kannan…………..kyoun pareshan kar rahi hoo"…..Mehak said that in angry tone

"abh ankhin khuli hoon……….tau time dobara dekho…."kannan said that and all look at clock which struck 7:35 now

"huh"………."par yeh kaise………..dii nahin aayein jagane"……..All stand up from there bed and went to kashish room………but she was still sleeping

"Dii aj abhi tak soo rahi hai"……….Mouli said that and all went near kashish……and try to wake her up and as they touch her hand…………….she was burning with fever

"oh God!………….dii ko tau bohut teez fever hai" Mehek said that and the camera zoom to kashish pale face

Episode ends here....

so temme ppl how was the part...soo now some one else will be posting next part tomm..as decided..



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Posted: 18 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: flygirls

Wowwww!!!

I've read it soo many times!!

I love itttt!!!

Woww summi di!! I didn't know you were THAT good at FF's!!!

Wowwwwww..!!!

Congrats...

And I'm surprised to see my name on the list too lol

Anam....xxx

awwww anam ure such a sweetheart!!!!!!!! thanx soo much ke u liked this soo much, that u have read it many times, it means a lot 2 me😳
😆😆waise even i write a fanfiction called do deewane, which is ofcourse on aamna and rajeev in ff section and i think u read a couple of my created scnes also, waise i dnt think im good, its aamna and rajeev who are superb ke i cant help but wrte like that😳
and sweethert cant wait 2 read ure epside!!!!👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#48
awwwww wowww ana wot a part!!!!!!! haaye kya mast scene tha, humari kashish barish mein kehl rahi hai aur sujal usse dekh raha hai, 😳 😳 😳 soo cute aur gaana kitna perfect hai!!!!!! sooo sweet 👏 well done yaar that was fab, can't wait 4 the next part!!!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#49


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Niceeeeeeeeeeee work guys! Keep posting more.. M enjoying aloottt..!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: sara_16



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Niceeeeeeeeeeee work guys! Keep posting more.. M enjoying aloottt..!!!

ohhhh jee i need ur contribution...pardne se kaam chalne waala nai..😆😆

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